Writing : Brenda Wang Learn how to write in a proper way

Writing :

Brenda Wang

Learn how to write in a proper way.

• Where did you go?• What did you do?• How did you feel?

21 MayDear Brenda,Now I am in Paris. We on the night of 19 May.My family are at a famous hotel. It Grand Hotel.Yesterday I walked along the Champs Elysses( 香榭丽舍 ) andlots of things. The views were very beautiful. I took manyphotos for you. If I come back, I you how beautiful thescenery in Paris is. Tomorrow, we will visit the Eiffel Tower.It that the Eiffel Tower is one of the most famouslandmarks in Paris. I believe I will feast my eyes on awonderful view ( 大饱眼福 )of Paris. It’s really an amazing city foryou to visit. I think if you come next time, you can enjoyyour time in Paris personally. Best wishesDan

calleddid arrive

buy

tell

said

We did arrive on the night of 19 May.

It called Grand Hotel.

Yesterday I walked along the Champs Elysses and buy lots of things.

If I come back, I tell you how beautiful the scenery in Paris is.

It said that the Eiffel Tower is one of the most famous landmarks in Paris.

21 MayDear Brenda, I am in a tourist destination, Bangkok. It’s really aparadise with lots of beaches, sand and sunshine.

Youcan see people swimming, sunbathing on everybeach. So is a popular sport here. Yesterday,

wetook a boat to the Grand Palace. But after awhole day, I felt tired. Now I am looking forward to to the seaside myself. is a good wayto enjoy life and broaden my knowledge. I hope

awonderful summer holiday in Bangkok. Best wishesTina

swimwalk

go relax Travelhave

So swim is a popular sport here.

Travel is a good way to enjoy life and broaden my knowledge.

But after walk a whole day, I felt tired.

Now I am looking forward to go to the seaside relax myself.

I hope have a wonderful summer holiday in Bangkok.

21 MayDear Brenda,Now I am in a five-star hotel in Beijing. It theGrand Hotel. Yesterday I to the Tian’anmen Squareand the Palace Museum and I saw many foreign tourists.They were taking photos and learning the Chinese culture. I deeply attracted by the Chinese culture. After the places of interest, I had a wonderful mealat night. Tomorrow I have to get up early the GreatWall. I am looking forward to it . I think it great fun. can make people get moreknowledge outside the books. So if I am free, I will goto more places to have a visit. Best wishesLisa

calleddid go

am

visitclimb

climbwill Travel

20 MayDear Brenda,Now I am in a five-star hotel in Beijing. It is called theGrand Hotel. Yesterday I went to the Tian’anmen Squareand the Palace Museum and I saw many foreigntourists. They were taking photos and learning theChinese culture. I was deeply attracted by the ancientculture. After visiting the places of interest, I had awonderful meal at night. Tomorrow I have to get up earlyto climb the Great Wall. I am looking forward to climbingit . I think it will be great fun. Travelling canmake people get more Knowledge outside the books. So

ifI am free, I will go to more places to have a visit. Best wishesLisa

Grand Hotel.

Now I am in a five-star hotel in Beijing called the

taking photos and learning the

Write a postcard

1) Where did you go?2) What did you do?3) How did you feel?

﹡Write a postcard to one of your classmates and avoid the similar mistakes .

21 MayDear teacher,We have many years haven’t seen. Do you know I

amwhere now? Do you remember you taught us thelesson "the Leaning tower of Pisa”? Yes. I am now inItaly with my parents. Yesterday Wevisited the Pisa Cathedral. I very like it thoughmaybe it’s the most strangest tower in the world . Inaddition, I heard Italy is famous for its food. So Iwent to different restaurants to have wonderfulmeals. Travelling can know more about the culture ofthe country. I have learned a lot .Your studentMary

20 MayDear Brenda,Now I in a Beijing ‘s five-star hotel. It called the Grand Hotel.Yesterday I did go to the Tian’anmen Square and the Palace

Museum.I saw many tourists are visiting there. I am deeply attracted by

the Chinese culture. After visit the places of interest, I had a somewonderful meal at night. Tomorrow I have to get up early climb

the

Great Wall. I am very look forward to climb it. I think it will great

fun. Travel can get more knowledge outside the books. So if I have

free, I am going to more places to have a visit. Best wishesLisa

am is

to

be

climbing

visiting

went

am

looking

Travelling

in Beijing

was

very much

• Yesterday I did go to the Tiananmen Square and the Palace Museum.

• .

• I am look forward to visiting more interesting places in Beijing.

•I am deeply attracted by the Chinese culture.

went

looking

was

Common mistakes

Common mistakes

• Now I in a five-star hotel in Beijing.

• It called the Grand Hotel.

•I think it will great fun.

am

is

be

After visit the places of interest, I had a some wonderful meal at night.

• Tomorrow I have to get up early climb the Great Wall.

• I saw many tourists are visiting there.

• Travel can make us get more knowledge outside the books.

to

Travelling

visiting

Common mistakes

• Now I am in a Beijing’ five-star hotel.

Now I am in a five-star hotel in Beijing.

•Travelling can get more knowledge outside the books.

Travelling can make people get more knowledge outside the books.

•If I have free, I am going to more places to have a visit.

If I am free, I am going to more places to have a visit.

•I am very looking forward to climbing it.

I am looking forward to climbing it very much.

Common mistakes

21 MayDear Kate,I was just arrived in London. I stayed in a world-famoushotel. It was so wonderful that I decided to walk around. But later I gave up. Because the hotel too large for meto go around. Tomorrow I will trip to the Big Ben andwalk along the Thames. I planed to visit there a long

timeago. The London Tower is also attractive. So I plan to gothere. I was heard that there will a concert tonight. Itmade me feel excited. London is really an amazing city .

Ithink if you come with me, you will also be attract by

thisplace.Yours Cathy

Dear Linda, I am in a tourist destination, Bangkok. It’s really aParadise has lots of beaches, sand and sunshine.

Youcan see people are swimming, sunbathing on everybeach. People here are very friendly and warm-hearted. It is my second day here. Yesterday, wetook a boat to the Grand Palace. There were manyprecious things in the palace. But after walk a wholeday, I felt tired. Now I am look forward to go to theseaside relax myself. I hope have a wonderful

summerholiday in Bangkok.Best wishesTina