2009-2010 PM

1A Chung Cheuk Yan Ocean Park

1A Leung Wing Man I love Hong Kong Disneyland!

1A Chan Hei Tung Ocean Park

1B Tsang Wing Lam, Kelly Where are you going???

1B Lee Kit Ying I love Hong Kong Disneyland best!

1B Lee Pui Chak I love Ocean Park!

2A Lee Ka Kiu Lovely Animals in Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Garden

2A Leung Hon Kwan A Great Day in Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Garden

2A Wong Wai Shun A Nice Trip in Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Garden

3A Lin Kai Wa, Era Hong Kong, what a lovely place!

3A Ng Cheuk Tung, Zita Chinese White Dolphins in Hong Kong

3A Yung Sin Yin, Suki Hong Kong, what a lovely Hong Kong!

3B Chan Tsz Wai Kelly Chinese White Dolphins in Hong Kong

3B Cheng Tsz Him A Wonderful Day in Hong Kong

3B Lam Cheuk Lok Thomas A Wonderful Day in Hong Kong

4A Ho Cheuk Shing An Interesting Festival in Hong Kong

4A Kelly Chung An Interesting Festival in Hong Kong

4A Ko Yung Ying My Visit to an Interesting Place in Hong Kong

4B Cheung Tsz Ying An Interesting Festival in Hong Kong

4B Tam Chun Kit My Favourite Food of Hong Kong

4B Yung Vienna Childrens Hobbies in Hong Kong

5A Chan Wing Yan The Person I Admired

5A Chan Kit Ying An Interesting Place in Hong Kong

5A Leung Hiu Yee A Fun Place of Hong Kong

5B Man Hoi Ying, Melody The Story of Wife Cake

5B Yeung Wing Yi, Gi Gi Famous People in Hong Kong

5B Yu Wing Lam, Wing Famous People in Hong Kong

6A Leung Kwok Hung Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong

6A Man Chun Hei East Asian Games in Hong Kong

6A Michael Lam Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong

6B Lam Yan Wai Four Seasons in Hong Kong

6B Chan Ka Yeung Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong.

6B Charlie Wong Four Seasons in Hong Kong

6C Lee Ka Po Hong Kong-A Food Paradise

6C Tsui Tsz Ching Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kon

6C Wong Man Sheung East Asian Games in Hong Kong

2009-2010 1A.P.M Chung Cheuk Yan

Ocean Park

I love Ocean Park .It is in Aberdeen, Hong Kong. I go there by car. My parents go there with me. I can see animals at Ocean Park. I like pandas, dolphins and sea lions because they are cute and lovely. I like to watch the dolphin show at Ocean Theatre because it is exciting. I like Balloon Up-Up and-Away best because I can see the whole view of the park. I feel happy when I go to Ocean Park. Miss Yu Wai Ching: This is a lovely piece of writing. Sharon has briefly introduced Ocean Park to us. It arouses my interest to visit Ocean Park again. It is really a nice park and people can learn a lot from it . Mr Eldred: Good effort, Sharon. It shows us you really like the variety of animals in Ocean Park.

2009-2010 1APM Leung Wing Man

I love Hong Kong Disneyland!

Hong Kong Disneyland is the place I like best in Hong Kong. It is a beautiful and exciting place for me. It is located on Lantau Island. We can go there by MTR from Tuen Mun. Mickey Mouse, Minnie Mouse and Buzz Light Year are my favourite cartoon characters. I like to take photos with them. Also, I like watching the fireworks display in Hong Kong Disneyland. Miss Yu Wai Ching: This is a nice piece of writing. Ideas are clearly presented. I can feel Karens excitement in Hong Kong Disneyland. I love Mickey and Minnie too. I strongly agree with her that it is a great place for both adults and children. Well done! Mr Eldred: A good detailed piece of work Karen Well done.

2009-2010 1APM Chan Hei Tung

Ocean Park

Ocean Park is located on Hong Kong Island. It is near Wong Chuk Hang Road. I get there by Citibus route 629. I visit the animals like the pandas, dolphins and sea lions. I like the dolphin show very much. The dolphins can jump up and down. They are fast and clever swimmers. I feel so excited when I ride on Frog Hopper. Miss Yu Wai Ching: I enjoy reading about the little writers favourite park in Hong Kong Ocean Park. It is a simple but nice piece of work. I can feel that Janice is so delighted to ride on Frog Hopper. Mr Eldred: Wow, Janice! You must really like Ocean Park, you even remember what road it is near and the bus number!! Well done, Janice!

2009-2010 1BPM Tsang Wing Lam, Kelly

Where are you going???

I m going where I can see Reptile House. There are different kinds of reptiles. I can see the tortoises, snakes and lizards. I can play badminton in the playground. I can see beautiful flowers in the themed gardens. The birds and butterflies fly there. I like to play on the slides and swings in the playground Where am I going? Im going to Tuen Mun Park. Miss Kwan Wan Man: The content of the writing is rich and well presented. It shows readers a vivid picture of Tuen Mun Park. Good work Kelly! Mr Eldred: Great description of the park Kelly. I must visit it one day.

2009-2010 1BPM Lee Kit Ying

I love Hong Kong Disneyland best!

I like Hong Kong Disneyland best! It is a beautiful place. It

is on Lantau Island. I can get there by MTR. I can meet Mickey

Mouse and his friends. I can watch the 3-D show and the Golden

Mickey Show. The Space Mountain and Autopia are exciting. I

love shopping and eating yummy food there too. Lets go there

together!

Miss Kwan Wan Man:

Kit Ying tries hard to tell what she can do in the Hong Kong

Disneyland. She also tells what she likes to do there. The content is

rich.

Mr Eldred:

I havent been to H.K Disneyland so you have

taught me a lot about the theme park .Well done!

2009-2010 1BPM Lee Pui Chak

I love Ocean Park!

I love Ocean Park. It is on Hong Kong Island. My mother goes to Ocean Park with me by Citibus. We see birds and animals there. We play and eat there. I like pandas and dolphins because they are cute. I like the sea animal show in Marine Land because it is funny. I love it! Ocean Park is a happy place. Miss Kwan Wan Man: It is a good piece of writing. In the writing, Ella tells us what she likes about Ocean Park. The choices of words are quite good. Mr Eldred: Good piece of work. Well done!

2009-2010 2APM Lee Ka Kiu

Lovely Animals in Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Garden

I went to Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Garden on 29th January, 2010. The weather was cloudy. I went there with my teachers and classmates. The farm is in Tai Po. We went there by school bus.

We walked around and saw many animals on the farm. There were many interesting animals on the farm. I saw the wild boars sleeping in the cave. The owls stood quietly on the branches. The Hong Kong newts jumped on the wetland. We learnt a lot about the animals of the farm from the staff. I took many photos with them. We were very happy.

When I came home, I felt very tired but I had learned a lot of things about animals and farming. I want to go there again with my family. I think my little brother would feel very excited!

Miss Kwan Wan Man: The content of the writing is rich and well presented. It shows how she spent a lovely day in the Kadoorie and Botanic Garden. Well done Katie! Mr Eldred: It seems that you really enjoyed your time at the farm and the gardens. Thank you for telling me so much about your special day.

2009-2010 2APM Leung Hon Kwan

A Great Day in Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Garden

Last Friday, I went to Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Garden with my classmates and teachers. The farm is located in Tai Po. The weather was perfect.

There were a lot of animals on the farm such as monkeys, birds, pigs, owls and bats. The most interesting animals I saw on the farm was the owl family. They stood on the branches lonely and quietly. Their bodies were fat and big. They had two big and bright eyes. I thought they were cute and clever.

Also, we walked around the farm and garden. We saw so many vegetables and beautiful flowers.

At last, I felt very happy and excited but tired. We came back to school at half past five by school bus. I learned a lot of things about animals and farming during the trip. I want to go there again with my family. Miss Kwan Wan Man: It is a good piece of writing. The ideas are well presented. Tim describes how the interesting animals or plants in the Kadoorie and Bontanic Garden look like. I like this part most. I appreciate his good work. Well done Tim. Mr Eldred: Its good to see that you like animals and you have learnt a lot from you your trip.

2009-2010 2APM Wong Wai Shun

A Nice Trip in Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Garden

On 29th January, 2010, it was a sunny day. I went to Kadoorie Farm and Botanic Garden.

I visited the animals and saw the beautiful plants. The owls and bats were very interesting. They were lovely. I felt very happy on that day.

I really want to go there again because I can learn a lot of things about animals and farming.

Miss Kwan Wan Man: It is nice to read Wilsons work. He tries to show us how lovely the Kadoorie and Botanic Garden is. The choices of adjectives are quite good. Mr Eldred: Good piece of work which has tempted me to visit the farm. I like places where you can have fun and still learn.

2009-2010 3APM Lin Kai Wa, Era

Hong Kong, what a lovely place!

Hong Kong, my funny Hong Kong, You are wonderful, you are GREAT!

Hong Kong, my grateful Hong Kong, I love swimming, I love the beaches.

Hong Kong, my wonderful Hong Kong,

I am excited, I am happy.

Hong Kong, what a lovely place, Where I live, I eat and I play!

Miss Ho Po Kee: Good job, Era. The poem is precise and easy to remember. It also reflects that you love Hong Kong so much. Mr Eldred: Great to see youre proud of where you come from Era. Lovely poem Era Well done.

2009-2010 3APM Ng Cheuk Tung, Zita

Chinese White Dolphins in Hong Kong

Chinese White Dolphins are very famous in Hong Kong. They are very beautiful and cute. I like Chinese White Dolphins very much.

Chinese White Dolphins can live for forty years. They live in the oceans. They are two hundred and fifty kilograms. Chinese White Dolphins are grey, pink or white. They like to jump in the water. They can jump very high. They eat fish but they do not like to eat octopuses.

Chinese White Dolphins cannot smell and they cannot see clearly. Chinese White Dolphins are very clever, but they are going extinct. So we have to treasure Chinese White Dolphins. Miss Ho Po Kee: Well done, Zita! You have a very good understanding of Chinese White Dolphins. I think we should protect them as they will become extinct if we dont take care of them carefully. Lets do it together. Mr Eldred: Thanks for teaching me about white dolphins Zita. Lets hope we can save the dolphins. Excellent work Zita Well done.

2009-2010 3APM Yung Sin Yin, Suki

Hong Kong, what a lovely Hong Kong! Hong Kong is a lovely place! We have four seasons in a year. In spring, I like walking on the grass. In summer, I like swimming at the beach. In autumn, I like jumping in the sunshine. In winter, I like cooking hotpots at home. Hong Kong is a lovely place! I love the rainy days in spring. I love the sunny days in summer. I love the breeze in autumn. And I love the windy days in winter. I get on well with my neighbours, Vietnamese, Thai and Mainland Chinese. They are my best, good neighbours. Hong Kong, what a lovely place! Miss Ho Po Kee: The poem is nicely written and it highlights the beauty of Hong Kong. Keep it up Suki! Mr Eldred: Well structured poem Suki. It seems you are very happy in Hong Kong.

2009-2010 3BPM Chan Tsz Wai Kelly

Chinese White Dolphins in Hong Kong

There are some Chinese White Dolphins in Hong Kong. The other name of a Chinese White Dolphin is Indo-pacific Humpback Dolphin. They are white, black, pink and grey. They can jump high. They cannot smell. They live in Hong Kong like Repulse Bay. They usually can live for twenty-five years or longer. They always need to breathe every thirty seconds and the young Chinese White Dolphin needs to breathe every fifteen seconds. The Chinese White Dolphin is the mascot of Hong Kong. However, some of the fishermen in Hong Kong think that Chinese White Dolphins are not lucky. Miss Lam Shuk Wan: I like this piece of writing. It is a good introduction about Chinese White Dolphins. If you want to know about dolphins and take photos of them, please go to Repulse Bay. You may find them. Good Luck. Mr Eldred: A good indepth piece of work Kelly. Thank you for teaching me about Chinese White Dolphins.

2009-2010 3BPM Cheng Tsz Him

A Wonderful Day in Hong Kong

At Chinese New Year, I wanted to know more about dinosaurs, so I went to the Hong Kong Science Museum with my family. We went there by bus in the morning.

There were two dinosaur bones and some fossils displayed in the Museum. A staff member of the Museum told us a lot of information about these two dinosaurs. I also found a special mirror. It was very interesting. My family and I played some ball games in a room. There were many people in the room.

I felt very happy and excited because I could have a wonderful day with my family in a place with my favourite thing-Dinosaurs! I want to go there again during my summer holidays because I hope I can find new dinosaurs on display there.

Miss Kwong Wing Yee: Michael, you had lots of fun in the museum. After reading your writing I want to go there too! Mr Eldred: Thank you Michael for telling me all about the Space Museum. I hope you have the chance to go again during the summer holidays.

2009-2010 3BPM Lam Cheuk Lok Thomas

A Wonderful Day in Hong Kong

Last Christmas, I went to Tsim Sha Tusi with my father and mother. We went to a hotel and had a big dinner. The food was yummy.

Then, we went to Victoria Harbour to see the Christmas decorations. They were beautiful! My father and mother gave me a toy robot as a Christmas present. I felt very excited.

It was a wonderful day. I want to go there again because I want to receive a present again. Miss Lam Shuk Wan: Do you want to have a happy, wonderful Christmas holiday? Then you can go to Tsim Sha Tsui with your family and take some beautiful photos. You can buy presents for your friends too. I enjoyed this writing. Mr Eldred: Its great to hear you had a fantastic Christmas. Well done Thomas.

2009-2010 4APM Ho Cheuk Shing

An Interesting Festival in Hong Kong

I think the most interesting festival is Lunar New Year in Hong Kong. It is on the first day of the first month in the lunar calendar and it is one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals.

In the old days, people lit firecrackers. They dance to celebrate the Lunar New Year. Now, both the Chinese people and foreigners celebrate the Lunar New Year in Hong Kong. Before Lunar New Year we clean our houses and go to the flower market. At Lunar New Year the married couples give lucky money to the children. We also watch fireworks and have dinner together. We eat many candies, chocolate, rice cakes and dumplings during Lunar New Year. We also buy new clothes and wear traditional Chinese clothing.

I love Lunar New Year because I can play with my relatives and eat many candies. I can get a lot of lucky money too. Miss Chow Ling Yuk: A good description of the festival with rich content. Fluent writing! Good job Benson. Mr Eldred: A good structured and well planned piece of work Benson. Well done.

2009-2010 4APM Kelly Chung

An Interesting Festival in Hong Kong

Christmas is an interesting festival in Hong Kong. It is on the twenty-fifth of December. This festival is a western festival. We celebrate this festival because it is the birth of Jesus Christ.

In the old days, people had a party and gave gifts to others. At Christmas, I go shopping with Mum and Dad. We eat turkey, salad, potato chips and Christmas cakes in this festival. We do not wear special clothes during this festival.

This festival is very special because all the people around the world celebrate it. I think it is the most interesting festival in Hong Kong because we get gifts and Christmas cards. We can see beautiful Christmas lights in Hong Kong. Miss Chow Ling Yuk: Hong Kong Christmas is special, especially for children because we can enjoy the Christmas lights and have a lot of fun with our family and friends! Fluent writing with concrete ideas! Well done Kelly! Mr Eldred: Good piece of writing. Kelly well done.

2009-2010 4APM Ko Yung Ying

My Visit to an Interesting Place in Hong Kong

I think the most interesting place in Hong Kong is Hong Kong Disneyland. I think Hong Kong Disneyland is amazing and exciting.

I visited Hong Kong Disneyland on 30th December, 2009. I went with my family and Aunt Lam. I got there by the MTR train.

In Hong Kong Disneyland, I saw Mickey and Minnie. Mum took photos with them. She was excited. I played many games. The games were interesting. We enjoyed the parade too. It was fun. At night, we watched the wonderful fireworks. It was very amazing. I felt amazed.

I was very happy and excited at Hong Kong Disneyland. I want to go there again. Miss Chow Ling Yuk: Vivid piece of writing! We all would like to enjoy a wonderful day in Hong Kong Disneyland after reading Yung Yings writing. Good work! Mr Eldred: A Good detailed piece of writing Yung Ying. It seemed you had a very enjoyable day. I hope you can go there again soon.

2009-2010 4BPM Tam Chun Kit

My Favourite Food of Hong Kong

There are different kinds of food in Hong Kong, for example, seafood, dim sum, moon cakes and rice dumplings. I think the rice cake is the most popular because it is traditional food. It looks like a cake. We use sugar and starch to make it. People can buy it in the supermarket. People like it because it is yummy.

My favourite food is deep fried dumplings. It is the most special food in Hong Kong. In Chinese New Year, people come together to make deep fried dumplings. They can make them with different ingredients. I can buy it in a supermarket. I like them because they are yummy and sweet. Miss Chan May Ping: Fried dumplings are yummy and tasty. They are my favourite Chinese food too. Good job Matthew! Mr Eldred: Well done! Matthew, we are very lucky in Hong Kong as we are spoilt for choices on the different types of food we can eat.

2009-2010 4BPM Yung Vienna

Childrens Hobbies in Hong Kong

Hong Kong childrens favourite hobbies are collecting stamps, playing the piano and paper folding. They started their hobbies when they were five years old. They need stamps, a piano and paper for their hobbies.

Children enjoy their hobbies because they think they are interesting and fun. They usually spend time on their hobbies on Sundays.

What is my hobby? I like collecting stamps. Stamps are beautiful. They are usually on different themes. My father always buys new stamps for me in the post office. I am very happy because I have many stamps. Miss Chan May Ping: Vienna tells us collecting stamps is her favourite hobby, it is interesting! Well done! Mr Eldred: I always find it very interesting to find out what other peoples hobbies are. Keep up the good work.

2009-2010 5APM Chan Wing Yan

The Person I Admired

I would like to introduce to you a famous person of Hong Kong, Donald Tsang. He is the Chief Executive of Hong Kong. He is the representative of Hong Kong.

He is very hardworking and positive. For the past few years, he has been promoting an initiated political reform. Some people think it is good but some people think it is bad. Hong Kong citizens have so many suggestions and arguments. He promotes his project actively. I can see that he is so hardworking to get the work done. Although many people do not agree with him or support him, he still tries hard. I admire him. We should learn his hardworking manner.

He is a kind person. He is so friendly and so positive. He always visits common citizens of Hong Kong. He wants to talk more to them to understand their needs. I want to be a considerate person so I appreciate him.

Donald Tsang can be our role model. We should never give up and try our best to do everything. Miss Lo Hoi Yuen: Maggie can suggest reasonable evidences to support her point of view. Her writing is fluent and well-organised. Well done! Mr Eldred: I agree with you Maggie. Donald Tsang is a very hardworking man and should be respected. If you use Donald Tsang as your role model, you will be the considerate person you want to be.

2009-2010 5APM Chan Kit Ying

An Interesting Place in Hong Kong

Last Sunday, my friend, May, came to Hong Kong to travel and play. She wanted me to introduce some interesting places to her in Hong Kong. I thought Hong Kong has a lot of interesting places but Hong Kong Science Museum is the most interesting place, so I took her there.

The reason that I took May to the Hong Kong Science Museum was because we can learn a lot of wonderful and meaningful science knowledge from there. The Hong Kong Science Museum is one of the museums that has the highest average of visitors every year. There are some animal fossils too. There are different types of science knowledge for us to learn.

There are exhibitions, a drawing room of science, exhibits of science and a theatre of science. This is good for teenagers to enrich ones knowledge. The Hong Kong Science Museum is nearby the Hong Kong Museum of History, so we can also go there conveniently.

I will recommend the Hong Kong Science Museum to all my friends, teachers and neighbours so that they can know this interesting place in Hong Kong. Miss Lo Hoi Yuen: Emily can express her ideas fluently and accurately. She can provide detailed information about the Hong Kong Science Museum. Good work! Mr Eldred: This is another place I would like to visit and after reading your work. Its the next place Ill visit when I have some spare time. Well done.

2009-2010 5APM Leung Hiu Yee

A Fun Place of Hong Kong

There are many interesting places in Hong Kong. I would like to introduce the wax figure museum, Madame Tussauds Hong Kong and The Peak. Let me introduce these two places to you.

Madame Tussauds opens from 10:00 am to 9:45 p.m every day. A ticket for an adult costs $160, a ticket for a child (aged 65 or above) costs $90.

Madame Tussauds is on The Peak. When we visit The Peak, we can visit the museum first. There are many famous wax figures. One of the special wax figures is Lau Tak Wah because it has a heartbeat. You can play horror games there and you can also buy souvenirs.

Then we can walk ten minutes and go to The Peak. The Peak is free and it opens every day. The view of Hong Kong at night is very famous in the world. We can go to The Peak to see the whole of Victoria Harbour. The Peak has a big shopping centre. There are many souvenir shops and many restaurants. At night, we can see a beautiful view. We can go to the sightseeing tower and use the telescopes to see Victoria Harbours night view. We can eat dinner in the shopping centre.

All in all, it is a funny place of Hong Kong. You go there and you must be happy! I will recommend it to my teachers, my friends, my family and my classmates. Miss Lo Hoi Yuen: The two places introduced by Elaine are attractive. Elaine can provide detailed information about the two places. It is well-organised. Great work! Mr Eldred: Two great places to recommend to your friends and families! This is a well planned and detailed piece of writing. Well done.

2009-2010 5BPM Man Hoi Ying, Melody

The Story of Wife Cake

Wife Cake is a very traditional pastry in Hong Kong .It is also known as sweetheart cake or Low Paw Bang in Cantonese dialect. Dont you know the love story of wife cake? Let me tell you about it.

A long time ago, there was a poor couple. They lived in a small village in China. Since they were very poor, the wife had to go out to work for the family. Her husband was a baker and he loved his wife so much. So he made cakes to earn money. He called the cake Wife Cake. The cakes were tasty and many people liked the cakes. As the cakes were so popular, he earned a lot of money and became rich. They lived happily. Until now, many people like eating wife cakes. Miss Ho Po Kee: What a nice pastry and a moving story! Ilove Wife Cake. Well done Melody. Mr Eldred: Thanks for teaching me about Wife Cake Melody. Great piece of work.

2009-2010 5BPM Yeung Wing Yi, Gi Gi

Famous People in Hong Kong

Jacky Chan is the famous person I admire in Hong Kong. He is a superstar in the world. I think he is so famous because of his dramas. Although he always gets hurt, he does not care. He really works hard to strive for the things he wants.

When Jacky returns home from work, he is a good father and a good husband. He loves his family very much. He will never show his worries to his family. He does not want to worry them.

I think Jacky is brave and generous. He always does charity work to help the sick people. I want to learn to be tough and kind to people. He sets a good example for teenagers. Miss Ho Po Kee: Gigi, I think a positive attitude towards life is so important that it helps us to overcome difficulties whenever we are. Well done! Mr Eldred: Jacky Chan is a good role model to follow Gigi. Good work!

2009-2010 5BPM Yu Wing Lam, Wing

Famous People in Hong Kong

Kao Kuen the pride of Hong Kong. I think everybody knows him well since he won the Nobel Prize For Physics in the year of 2006.

Kao Kuen was born in November, 1933, in Shanghai. He did electronic engineering when he came to Hong Kong. He devoted most of his time on his studies. Finally, he was known as the Father of Fiber Optics. His contribution to the world is great and amazing.

I think Koa Kuen is a hardworking person, he will not give up easily. Therefore, I would like to have him as a good example for me, I must work hard and try my best. Miss Ho Po Kee: Wing, its always good to set a target in ones life. We should always try to pay our efforts first and never give up when there is a problem. Mr Eldred: Thank you for teaching me all about Kao Kuen Wing. Well done!

2009-2010 6APM Leung Kwok Hung

Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong

Santa Claus lives in Finland but this year he came to Hong Kong. I saw him in Tuen Mun Town Plaza. He also sang beautiful songs!

My favourite festival is Christmas because I can receive many gifts and cards from my parents and my friends. There is a Christmas party at school every year. That is my happiest time because my teachers and classmates play games together. Moreover, we exchange gifts and have a lot of yummy food.

Before Christmas, I will send e-cards to my overseas relatives and friends. I also receive many e-cards and seasonal greetings from them. I feel glad and warm. Miss Wong Pik Yan: This is a piece of good writing. David enjoys Christmas time and he is a creative boy. Mr Eldred: One of my favourite festivals is Christmas as well David. It is good to hear you are considerate and send Christmas cards to your friends and family.

2009-2010 6APM Man Chun Hei

East Asian Games in Hong Kong

Last year, the East Asian Games were held in Hong Kong. There are different kinds of sport in the Asian Games such as bowling, dancing, badminton, basketball, cycling, football and table tennis.

The Slogan of the East Asian Games in Hong Kong was Be the Legend. The mascots of the East Asian Games 2009 were Dony and Ami. They were inspired by the radiance of fire and the confidence of a lion. They are symbols of strength and confidence.

In the East Asian Games, there were many different kinds of sports, I like basketball most because it is very exciting and healthy. I play it every week with my friends.

I think the East Asian Games in Hong Kong was very amazing and successful. I hope Hong Kong can win more gold medals in the next East Asian Games.

Miss Wong Pik Yan: You did a great job, Anson. You presented the ideas about the East Asian Games in Hong Kong clearly. Mr Eldred: I also agree that the East Asian Games in Hong Kong was a great success. You produced a good piece of work. Well done.

2009-2010 6APM Michael Lam

Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong

Once upon a time, there was a child in Hong Kong called Mark. He hoped he could have a teddy bear for Christmas but his mother did not buy it for Mark. Mark was unhappy. Mark prayed to god because he wanted to have a teddy bear from Santa Claus.

At midnight on 24th December, Mark was tired and fell asleep. Santa Claus appeared and put a present into Marks sock. When Santa Claus was putting the present into Marks sock, Mark suddenly woke up and said, Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong! As Mark shouted, Santa Claus put the present into the sock and ran away immediately.

Marks mum woke up because she heard Marks loud shout and went to see what happened. She saw Mark was so excited and she asked Mark, why are you so happy? Mark replied, Santa Claus has just left! He gave me a present! They opened the present box and Mark immediately said, Oh, its a teddy bear! Its the present I expected. Mark smiled happily. He believes that Santa Clause will come to Hong Kong again. Miss Wong Pik Yan: Its really an interesting piece of writing. The writer shows he loves Christmas so much. Well done Michael! Mr Eldred: Great story Michael and with some excellent vocabulary. Its nice to see Mark eventually got the present he wanted. Well done.

2009-2010 6BPM Lam Yan Wai

Four Seasons in Hong Kong

Hong Kong has four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. The weather in spring is wet and humid; summer is hot; autumn is cool and winter is cold.

Nowadays, the weather in Hong Kong has changed a little. The winter comes late and is not so cold. The earth has became warmer. Some people say that Hong Kong will not have winters in the future. I think we should help the earth and keep the four seasons as usual in Hong Kong.

We should start to protect the environment in Hong Kong. The government has taken the first step by advising drivers to turn off their engines when their cars are parked. We should obey and follow the rules. Miss Chow Ling Yuk: As Hong Kong citizens, we have the obligations to obey the rules and protect our environment. Kay is a good citizen who shows his love of Hong Kong with social conscience. Mr Eldred: Good job, Kit. Keep up the good work.

2009-2010 6BPM Chan Ka Yeung

Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong.

Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong. I was excited to hear the news. I waited for him on Christmas Eve. I hoped he would give me a computer for my Christmas gift. I was tired but I was happy. I could not fall asleep, though I was sleepy. Suddenly, I heard something outside my home. A man in red clothes got off a coach. He was Santa Claus! I was surprised. He had black hair and black eyes. He was a Chinese Santa Clause. He came to my home and gave me a computer as Id wished. He was my father. I was so amazed. I could not believe it, neither could I say Thank you so much, my Santa Claus! Heres the one in my Hometown-Hong Kong! Miss Chow Ling Yuk: Ka Yeung compares Hong Kong to his home and expresses his love of Hong Kong as his home. His home is where he can stay with his father and his family. Mr Eldred: Its good to see you value the place where you live. Good job.

2009-2010 6BPM Chan Ka Yeung

Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong.

Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong. I was excited to hear the news. I waited for him on Christmas Eve. I hoped he would give me a computer for my Christmas gift. I was tired but I was happy. I could not fall asleep, though I was sleepy. Suddenly, I heard something outside my home. A man in red clothes got off a coach. He was Santa Claus! I was surprised. He had black hair and black eyes. He was a Chinese Santa Clause. He came to my home and gave me a computer as Id wished. He was my father. I was so amazed. I could not believe it, neither could I say Thank you so much, my Santa Claus! Heres the one in my Hometown-Hong Kong! Miss Chow Ling Yuk: Ka Yeung compares Hong Kong to his home and expresses his love of Hong Kong as his home. His home is where he can stay with his father and his family. Mr Eldred: Its good to see you value the place where you live. Good job.

2009-2010 6BPM Charlie Wong

Four Seasons in Hong Kong

Hong Kong has four seasons. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. Spring is warm and wet. Summer is hot and the sun shines. Autumn is windy and cool. Winter is cold and dry. Perhaps, we will not have four seasons as usual some years later in Hong Kong because the winter is not cold any more. This year, winter could be as hot as the summer.

Why dont we have winter? We dont have winter because the earth temperature is rising now. We always turn on the air conditioner when its warm. If we keep on turning on the air-conditioners, the world will be full of hot air. It will lead to the green house effect. In order to protect the environment of the earth and keep the four seasons as usual in Hong Kong, we shouldnt always turn on the air-conditioner. You should open the windows to make the house cool. Miss Chow Ling Yuk: Charlie is conscious about the protection of the environment and urges us for helping to keep the rules of nature. Her writing is direct and precise. Mr Eldred: A detailed and well structured piece of work. I hope everyone was as concerned about the environment as Charlie.

2009-2010 6CPM Lee Ka Po

Hong Kong-A Food Paradise

Hong Kong-A Food Paradise, you can find different kinds of food in Hong Kong, like Sushi, Hang Zhou cuisine. However I think the best expression of the style of food in Hong Kong is fish ball.

Fish ball is not only cheap, but also easy to buy or sell. You can choose from different tastes, like curry or original. Although fish ball is delicious, we should make sure that they are clean to eat.

The second best food in Hong Kong is noodles. You are free to choose the ingredients. You can make your own bowl of noodles!

I love Hong Kong because there are many kinds of food to eat. Hong Kong is a great place. Im loving it! Miss Yam Yin Yee: Ka Po is fond of eating and she did find different kinds of food that can be found in Hong Kong. I would like to try them all! Mr Eldred: I totally agree that Hong Kong is a food lovers paradise. Good piece of work. Well done.

2009-2010 6CPM Tsui Tsz Ching

Santa Claus is coming to Hong Kong

Once upon a time, a man sent presents to children at Christmas. He lived in Norway. When young people met him, they would become excited and very happy. Who is he? He is Santa Claus.

One day, he flew to Hong Kong because he wanted to see this beautiful city. When he walked in the street, he saw Hong Kong people wasting paper, trees, water Then, he thought of a lot of plans to keep Hong Kong clean.

Finally, he designed an on-line game called Green Santa. When the children played the game, it could teach them how to reuse things effectively, use less tissue paper, and recycle plastic bottles. Next, he sent presents to those who did not wrap with paper. Finally, he told the children that they should donate their old clothes to poor families so, they could reduce rubbish.

The plan worked well and Hong Kong became clean again. Everyone was happy. Miss Yam Yin Yee: It is a piece of creative writing which showed the imaginative ability of Tsz Ching. Through this piece of writing, she brought out the message of protecting our earth as well. I love the idea! Mr Eldred: Good meaningful story. We hope some parts of your story comes true so that we can live in a clean and healthy environment.

2009-2010 6CPM Wong Man Sheung

East Asian Games in Hong Kong

It is the first time for Hong Kong to hold the East Asian Games. Through the promotion from the government and the mass media, all of us have the opportunity to join the activities and share the happiness.

On one hand, we can enjoy the competition of sporting events as an audience and watch the excellent performances of the athletes such as Guo Jingjing and Liu Xiang. On the other hand, some of the Hong Kong people join the sport events as a volunteer.

At last, I am proud of the athletes because all of them put a great effort in to the event. Their courage and confidence inspires me a lot. Miss Yam Yin Yee: She has shown her passion in watching the East Asian Games which was held in Hong Kong. She felt proud of Hong Kong being the host of the games. Her writing is neat and meaningful. I hope she will be a contender in the games one day. Mr Eldred: It is nice to see that the games have inspired you and who knows one day you may even be a part of it.