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2012 中考作文训练 1 有关情感体验的话题

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2012 中考作文训练 1 有关情感体验的话题. What makes you happy?. 词语匹配. 1 )帮助他人 2 )取得好成绩 3 )克服困难 4 )与家人共处 5 )经过努力后获得成功. e. help others c. get good grades b. get over the difficulties stay with one’s family d. be successful after working hard. Topic: What is happiness?. 1 . 你心中的幸福是什么? - PowerPoint PPT Presentation

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2012 中考作文训练 1有关情感体验的话题

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词语匹配

• 1 )帮助他人 • 2 )取得好成绩• 3 )克服困难 • 4 )与家人共处• 5 )经过努力后

获得成功

e. help othersc. get good gradesb. get over the difficultie

s• stay with one’s family d. be successful after wo

rking hard

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Topic: What is happiness?

• 1. 你心中的幸福是什么?• 2. 描述一件令你感到幸福快乐的事(要交

代时间,地点,过程与感受)• 3. 你认为应该如何创造幸福(至少两点)

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Pre-writing : Outline

点题: What is happiness?

事件: A happy thing

BeginningProcessResultFeelings

观点: How to create happiness? 1….2….

归纳升华

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1. 点题: What is happiness

Happiness is helping others.

Happiness is staying with people you love.

Happiness is living in a warm family.

Helping others is an important way to (achieve) happiness.

I think happiness is just giving others a helping hand.

Happiness is helping people (who are) in trouble.

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2. 事件讲述: A happy thing

I can’t forget I helped my classmate last month. My classmate Lily was ill and she had to stay at home. She was worried about her studies. When I heard about that, I went to her home and helped her with her lessons. She was thankful to me and I felt happy.

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3. 观点: How to create happiness

----How can we create a happy society? There are some ways. First of all, we should know the importance of helping others. Furthermore , we’d better help people who are in trouble.

----I think we should get on well with our parents and help them in the daily time.

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4. 归纳升华• Let’s create happiness and make happi

ness around the world.

• In a word, if we often help others, we will feel very happy. Let’s make our life more and more beautiful .

• One for all, all for one. If you want to create happiness, it’s important to enjoy the life and help others.

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What is happiness? Happiness is the feeling while ____________.

One night, I ____________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ At

that time, I felt _________. In my opinion, creating happiness is not diff

icult in the slightest. First of all, we should ___________. Besides, ____________. After that, ______________________.

Let’s create happiness and make the society more harmonious.

While-writing

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Post-writing : Self evaluation

评价要点:1. 时态有没有用对?2. 拼写有没有错?3. 句型是不是正确?4. 所举的例子是否与你的观点匹配?5. 句子与句子之间的衔接是否自然?6. 文章的结构是不是完整?7. 要点是不是齐全?8. 最后有没有升华点题?

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美文欣赏 Happiness is the feeling while helping others.

One night, I saw a boy carrying his bike upstai

rs in the dark. Because the light was dim, it was difficult for him to do so. I turned on the light at once and helped him to carry the bike. The boy thanked me a lot. At that time, I felt extremely happy.

In my opinion, creating happiness is not difficult in the slightest. First of all, we should have a warm heart. Besides, help others when they are in trouble. After that, I’m sure that all of us will feel happy.

• Let’s create happiness and make the society more harmonious.

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美文欣赏 Happiness is helping others. As we all know,

helping others is important to us. I can’t forget I helped my classmate last mont

h. My classmate Lily was ill and she had to stay at home. She was worried about her studies. When I heard about that, I went to her home and helped her with her lessons. She was thankful to me and I felt happy.

How can we create a happy society? There are some ways. First of all, we should know the importance of helping others. Furthermore , we’d better help people who are in trouble.

In a word, if we often help others, we will feel very happy. Let’s make our life more and more beautiful .

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Useful expressions:表示定义的句型: Happiness is… /…is happiness.表示时间的词语: one day, a few days ago, the other day 表示感受的句型: I was tired but happy. 我很累但很开心。

be thankful to sb. 对某人感激不尽表示顺序的词语: At the beginning/ At first 开始 First of all/ First 首先 , Then 然后 Furthermore/Moreover 再者,还有 At last/ Finally 最后表示总结的词语: In a word,… 总之一句话表示提升主题的句子: One for all, all for one. 我为人人,人人为我。

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Homework

请在“压力”“感恩”“代沟”“愉悦感”等四个主题中挑选一个写一篇 90 词左右的小短文。

( 具体要求请看《学案》)Don’t write what you want to, just write what you are able to!

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