7/23/2019 ADFELPS 61.

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Parents have to send their children to the primary school when they are six

years old. My parents did the same as the others so I will tell about my

primary school briefly.

My primary school is in a province about 600 kilometres from the capital.There were some play-rounds to do the activities with friends and the

rounds for assemblin all of the students at 0!00 hours to respect the

national fla and sin the national "nthem.I wore the uniform with blue

trousers and white shirt. I studied mathematics# eoraphy# history and

lanuae. My favourite teachers was $at.%he tauht me and my friends to

sin many sons. I liked to lay soccer at that time butnow I have &ust to

look because of my ae.

These are the part of my life that I love very much because I had a lot of

fun.'ust only thouht# they make me smile.

Strengths Weaknesses

Sufficient command of vocabulary and sentenceconstruction to communicate adequately

Mistakes in word choice eg. Just only thought, they makeme smile.

Correct use of tenses able to combine !ast, !resent andfuture correctly" eg. #arents have to send their children tothe !rimary school when they are si$ years old. My !arentsdid the same as the others, so % will tell about my !rimary

school briefly.

Mistakes in word order eg. % have &ust to look because ofmy age.

Control of both sim!le and a longer construction eg. Myfavourite teacher was 'at. My !rimary school is in a!rovince about ()) kilometres from the ca!ital.

Some ideas show some linking of ideas eg. *here weresome !lay+grounds to do the activities with friends and thegrounds for assembling all of the students at ))) hours tores!ect the national flag and sing the national -nthem.

se of !aragra!hing is inconsistent eg. the body !aragra!hbegins with describing the location and the !laygrounds,then &um!s to describing the uniforms students wear, sothe !lanning of !aragra!h content is weak. *hus thecontent is unevenly develo!ed.se of some linking devices eg. so, but, and, because eg.

% liked to !lay soccer at that time but now % have &ust tolook because of my age.

*he reader is able to follow the information easily/ mainideas and some su!!orting details are evident

Overall assessment:Satisfactory (Intermediate ADFELPS level !

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