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Alex

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计算机报告 –反馈不够好， 需要修改！ S o r r y , b u t i t n e e d s i m p r o v e m e n t !

▪ Front Cover封面

▪ Introduction 介绍包括：▪ Aim: 目的（报告的总目的）▪ Objectives 目标（为了达到目的)

▪ Main Content 内容包括：▪ Questionnaire Design 做的问答圈▪ Questionnaire Results 问答圈的分析数据

▪ Conclusion 结论包括▪ Answer the aim : 回答报告目的的问题▪ Each Team Member reflection upon the task：反思，意见和建议

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Results – 没完成什么呢？

结论有什么问题？

• Generally speaking, international students like sports very much, but most of them may really don’t want to do sports outside, they may prefer to stay in the dormitory.Theyalso like watching movies and most of them think it is very convenient to find a movie cinema in Nanjing.

• Most of the international students are satisfied with the canteen of the university, and they begin to like the food of Nanjing.

• As a Chinese,I feel really pleased and proud when international students of science and technology like Chinese food.

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IELTS: Task 2H o w t o g e t b e t t e r m a r k s .

分析问题 + 结构（格式）最重要

无论是什么样子的问题，记得恭喜发财写四段

Paragraph 1 – 重写题目

Paragraph 2 – 第一个主题

Paragraph 3 – 第二个主题

Paragraph 4 – 回答问题。

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单边支持(一边倒):

标志性题目类型：To what extent do you agree or disagree?

(恭）第一段:复述主题+展示自身立场

(喜)第二段:核心段

(发)第三段:让步段

(财) 第四段: 总结全文+重申自身立场

注意：比较agree 的话就写 agree 的内容多一线

比较 disagree 的话， disagree 的内容写多点

计划论文

(恭）第一段:复述主题 钱和物质重要、好人信用不重要

(喜)第二段:核心段 买车，买房，岗位，名牌，潮流等等

(发)第三段:让步段 信用还是很重要，做生意先做人（搞关系）

（财）自身立场 我有点同意，但是传统的想法还是很重要

分析题目: 恭喜发财在哪？

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to

social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values,

such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant

examples from your own knowledge or experience.

(恭）第一段:复述主题 +展示自身立场

恭 A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.

例如1 ：Given the power and influence of the super rich, it might seem as if social status and

material possessions are the new symbols of personal worth, but in everyday life I do not think this is

true.

例如2 ： Today, it’s said that social status and what one has decides how much someone is worth

whereas traditional ideas like honesty are not worthy, this article will give examples of this and draw

conclusions.

分析题目: 恭喜发财在哪？

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to

social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values,

such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant

examples from your own knowledge or experience.

(喜)第二段:核心段

喜： A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions.

例如1 ： It is apparent that most celebrities today are admired or envied solely for their material

wealth or position in various social hierarchies. Many of these people are known to turn their

backs on friends, cheat on their spouses or spend their evenings over-indulging in alcohol

and/or drugs. Things like owning a mansion, driving an expensive car and getting into A-list

parties are exalted above old-fashioned values. Ultimately, though, it is the many readers of

gossip magazines and celebrity blogs who reinforce these ideas.

例如2： In China, It can be seen that most people care about how others view them and one

way people are viewed is by their status, for example if they are a leader of a company or in an

important position , people will look up to them, in addition there is the phenomenon in China

that a mans most important things to have when getting married is a house and a car. Many of

China’s older generation certainly to look up to people with these material possessions.

分析题目: 恭喜发财在哪？

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to

social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values,

such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant

examples from your own knowledge or experience.

(发)第三段:让步段

第三段:让步段

例如1： Nevertheless, I do believe that in their day-to-day lives most people still believe in

values such as honour, kindness and trust. In some way most of us want to form loving

families,raise our children to be good citizens, stand up for the downtrodden and protect

our communities from harm. We still form friendships, romances and business partnerships

based on old-fashioned criteria. When our trust is abused or we are unfairly treated, we

see that as a major violation of our relationship and we judge the wrongdoer accordingly

例如2: on the other hand , it is still apparent that traditional values are important, for

example in China, if you want to do business well you need to form a good relationship first.

Friendship in China is based heavily on trust and friends are expected to help each other, if

the trust is no longer there then the friendships are broken. An example is Fan Bing Bing,

she was seen as a famous actress with a lot of money, but when it was found she was not

trustworth and did not pay her taxes, many people had a strong negative view of her.

分析题目: 恭喜发财在哪？

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to

social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values,

such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant

examples from your own knowledge or experience.

(财) 第四段: 总结全文+重申自身立场

分析题目: 恭喜发财在哪？

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

(财) 第四段: 总结全文+重申自身立场

例如1 In conclusion, I believe there is some truth to the notion that status

and possessions have superseded old-fashioned values as a measure of a

person’s worth. Looking beyond the tabloids, however, it is apparent that

most ordinary people have still preserved an old-fashioned conscience.

例如2： having presented ideas and evidence I somewhat agree with the

opinion but do not fully agree as traditional values are still important. I

believe that a persons worth includes both their status and also their

traditional values.

单边支持(一边倒):

标志性题目类型：To what extent do you agree or disagree?

(恭）第一段:复述主题+展示自身立场

(喜)第二段:核心段

(发)第三段:让步段

(财) 第四段: 总结全文+重申自身立场

注意：比较agree 的话就写 agree 的内容多一线

比较 disagree 的话， disagree 的内容写多点

The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Let’s look at another one.

标志性题目类型1:Discuss both these views and give your

own opinion.

(恭）第一段:复述主题+展示中立立场

(喜)第二段:论证题目中的观点1(论证该论点的合理性)

(发)第三段:论证题目中的观点2(论证该论点的合理性)

(财) 第四段:展示中立立场+判断(1>2;1<2;1=2)

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双边支持(对称式):

标志性题目类型1:Discuss both these views and give your

own opinion.

(恭）第一段:复述主题+展示中立立场

(喜)第二段:论证题目中的观点1(论证该论点的合理性)

(发)第三段:论证题目中的观点2(论证该论点的合理性)

(财) 第四段:展示中立立场+判断(1>2;1<2;1=2)

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双边支持(对称式):

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be healthy and have a balanced diet. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Paragraph One – Re-write the question

Paragraph two –write about “parents should teach

their children how to be healthy and have a balanced

diet.”

Paragraph three – write about school is the best place

to learn this.

Paragraph four- your own opinion