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2 PRELIMINARES

Esta publicación se terminó de imprimir durante el mes de diciembre de 2011.

Diseñada en Dirección Académica del Colegio de Bachilleres del Estado de Sonora

Blvd. Agustín de Vildósola; Sector Sur. Hermosillo, Sonora, México

La edición consta de 965 ejemplares.

COLEGIO DE BACHILLERES

DEL ESTADO DE SONORA

Director General

Mtro. Julio Alfonso Martínez Romero

Director Académico

Ing. Arturo Sandoval Mariscal

Director de Administración y Finanzas

C.P. Jesús Urbano Limón Tapia

Director de Planeación

Ing. Raúl Leonel Durazo Amaya

COMPOSITION

Módulo de Aprendizaje.

Copyright ©, 2011 por Colegio de Bachilleres

del Estado de Sonora

todos los derechos reservados.

Primera edición 2011. Impreso en México.

DIRECCIÓN ACADÉMICA

Departamento de Desarrollo Curricular

Blvd. Agustín de Vildósola, Sector Sur

Hermosillo, Sonora. México. C.P. 83280

COMISIÓN ELABORADORA:

Elaborador:

Edna Elinora Soto Gracia

Revisión Disciplinaria:

Jesús Moisés Galaz Duarte

Corrección de Estilo:

Viridiana Vidal Trasviña

Apoyo Metodológico:

Jesús Moisés Galaz Duarte

Supervisión Académica:

Luz María Grijalva Díaz

Diseño:

Joaquín Rivas Samaniego

Edición:

Cynthia Meneses Avalos

Coordinación Técnica:

Claudia Yolanda Lugo Peñúñuri

Diana Irene Valenzuela López

Coordinación General:

Ing. Arturo Sandoval Mariscal

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Ubicación Curricular

HORAS SEMANALES:

04

CRÉDITOS:

08

DATOS DEL ALUMNO

Nombre: _______________________________________________________________

Plantel: __________________________________________________________________

Grupo: _________________ Turno: _____________ Teléfono:___________________

E-mail: _________________________________________________________________

Domicilio: ______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________

COMPONENTE:

FORMACIÓN PARA EL

TRABAJO

CAPACITACIÓN PARA EL

TRABAJO:

IDIOMAS (INGLÉS)

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Presentación ......................................................................................................................................................... 7

Mapa de asignatura .............................................................................................................................................. 8

BLOCK 1: USING WORDS EFFECTIVELY ............................................................................................. 9

Didactic Sequence 1: Dictionary use ................................................................................................................10

• Start up activity .............................................................................................................................................10

• Development activities .................................................................................................................................12

• Dictionary......................................................................................................................................................12

• Finding words in the dictionary ....................................................................................................................13

• A dictionary entry ..........................................................................................................................................17

• Pronunciation symbols and accent marks ..................................................................................................19

• Parts of speech ............................................................................................................................................22

• Irregular forms of words ...............................................................................................................................24

• Closing activity .............................................................................................................................................29

Didactic Sequence 2: How to become a better reader and thinker ..................................................................31

• Start up activity .............................................................................................................................................31

• Development activities ................................................................................................................................32

• Clear thinking ...............................................................................................................................................33

• Identifying logical support ............................................................................................................................36

• Determining a logical point ..........................................................................................................................38

• Closing activity .............................................................................................................................................40

Didactic Sequence 3: Vocabulary in context: ....................................................................................................41

• Start up activity .............................................................................................................................................41

• Development activities .................................................................................................................................43

• Vocabulary in context ...................................................................................................................................43

• Synonyms ....................................................................................................................................................46

• Antonyms ....................................................................................................................................................48

• General sense of the sentence of passage ................................................................................................50

• Closing activity .............................................................................................................................................52

BLOCK 2: COMPOSITION A CORRECT ENGLISH ALIGNMENT ........................................................ 55

Didactic Sequence 1: Building effective sentences ...........................................................................................56

• Start up activity .............................................................................................................................................56

• Development activities .................................................................................................................................58

• Building sentences .......................................................................................................................................58

• A compound sentence .................................................................................................................................58

• Identifying subject and verb .........................................................................................................................63

• Being consistent ...........................................................................................................................................65

• Consistent person ........................................................................................................................................67

• Consistent tone ............................................................................................................................................69

• Closing activities ..........................................................................................................................................71

Didactic Sequence 2: Writing an essay ..............................................................................................................73

• Start up activities ..........................................................................................................................................73

• Development activities ................................................................................................................................74

• Writing an essay ...........................................................................................................................................74

• Model essays ...............................................................................................................................................75

• Types of essays ...........................................................................................................................................88

• Closing activities ..........................................................................................................................................96

Índice

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BLOCK 3: ANTHOLOGY ...................................................................................................................... 99

Didactic Sequence 1: Approaching literature .................................................................................................. 100

• Start up activity .......................................................................................................................................... 100

• Development activities .............................................................................................................................. 101

• What is literature? ...................................................................................................................................... 101

• Literal and figurative language .................................................................................................................. 101

• Selected biographies and poems ............................................................................................................. 106

• Closing activity .......................................................................................................................................... 113

Didactic Sequence 2: Readings selection....................................................................................................... 114

• Start up activity .......................................................................................................................................... 114

• Development activities ............................................................................................................................. 115

• Elements of a short story .......................................................................................................................... 115

• Selected short stories and tales ............................................................................................................... 117

• Closing activity .......................................................................................................................................... 131

Bibliography ..................................................................................................................................................... 133

Índice (continuación)

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“Una competencia es la integración de habilidades, conocimientos y actitudes en un contexto específico”.

El enfoque en competencias considera que los conocimientos por sí mismos no son lo más importante, sino el uso

que se hace de ellos en situaciones específicas de la vida personal, social y profesional. De este modo, las

competencias requieren una base sólida de conocimientos y ciertas habilidades, los cuales se integran para un

mismo propósito en un determinado contexto.

El presente Módulo de Aprendizaje de la asignatura de Composition, es una herramienta de suma importancia, que

propiciará tu desarrollo como persona visionaria, competente e innovadora, características que se establecen en los

objetivos de la Reforma Integral de Educación Media Superior que actualmente se está implementando a nivel

nacional.

El Módulo de aprendizaje es uno de los apoyos didácticos que el Colegio de Bachilleres te ofrece con la intención de

estar acorde a los nuevos tiempos, a las nuevas políticas educativas, además de lo que demandan los escenarios

local, nacional e internacional; el módulo se encuentra organizado a través de bloques de aprendizaje y secuencias

didácticas. Una secuencia didáctica es un conjunto de actividades, organizadas en tres momentos: Inicio, desarrollo y

cierre. En el inicio desarrollarás actividades que te permitirán identificar y recuperar las experiencias, los saberes, las

preconcepciones y los conocimientos que ya has adquirido a través de tu formación, mismos que te ayudarán a

abordar con facilidad el tema que se presenta en el desarrollo, donde realizarás actividades que introducen nuevos

conocimientos dándote la oportunidad de contextualizarlos en situaciones de la vida cotidiana, con la finalidad de que

tu aprendizaje sea significativo.

Posteriormente se encuentra el momento de cierre de la secuencia didáctica, donde integrarás todos los saberes que

realizaste en las actividades de inicio y desarrollo.

En todas las actividades de los tres momentos se consideran los saberes conceptuales, procedimentales y

actitudinales. De acuerdo a las características y del propósito de las actividades, éstas se desarrollan de forma

individual, binas o equipos.

Para el desarrollo del trabajo deberás utilizar diversos recursos, desde material bibliográfico, videos, investigación de

campo, etc.

La retroalimentación de tus conocimientos es de suma importancia, de ahí que se te invita a participar de forma activa,

de esta forma aclararás dudas o bien fortalecerás lo aprendido; además en este momento, el docente podrá tener una

visión general del logro de los aprendizajes del grupo.

Recuerda que la evaluación en el enfoque en competencias es un proceso continuo, que permite recabar evidencias a

través de tu trabajo, donde se tomarán en cuenta los tres saberes: el conceptual, procedimental y actitudinal con el

propósito de que apoyado por tu maestro mejores el aprendizaje. Es necesario que realices la autoevaluación, este

ejercicio permite que valores tu actuación y reconozcas tus posibilidades, limitaciones y cambios necesarios para

mejorar tu aprendizaje.

Así también, es recomendable la coevaluación, proceso donde de manera conjunta valoran su actuación, con la

finalidad de fomentar la participación, reflexión y crítica ante situaciones de sus aprendizajes, promoviendo las

actitudes de responsabilidad e integración del grupo.

Nuestra sociedad necesita individuos a nivel medio superior con conocimientos, habilidades, actitudes y valores, que

les permitan integrarse y desarrollarse de manera satisfactoria en el mundo social, profesional y laboral. Para que

contribuyas en ello, es indispensable que asumas una nueva visión y actitud en cuanto a tu rol, es decir, de ser

receptor de contenidos, ahora construirás tu propio conocimiento a través de la problematización y contextualización

de los mismos, situación que te permitirá: Aprender a conocer, aprender a hacer, aprender a ser y aprender a vivir

juntos.

Presentación

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COMPOSITION

BLOQUE 1

Using words effectively

BLOQUE 2

Composition a correct English

Alignment

BLOQUE 3

Anthology

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Tiempo asignado: 20 horas

Using words effectively.

Competencias profesionales:

1. Realiza comprensiones oral y auditiva de diversos tipos de texto en otro idioma.

2. Realiza comprensión escrita y de lectura de diversos tipos de texto en otro idioma.

3. Realiza expresión o producción oral en otro idioma.

4. Realiza interacción oral en otro idioma.

5. Realiza expresión o producción escrita de diversos tipos de texto en otro idioma.

Unidad de competencia:

Muestra la forma de comunicarse por escrito con mayor eficacia, cubriendo los aspectos de pensar, escribir,

tanto en comunicaciones formales e informales.

Atributos a desarrollar en el bloque:

4.1. Expresa ideas y conceptos mediante representaciones lingüísticas, matemáticas o gráficas.

4.2. Aplica distintas estrategias comunicativas según quienes sean sus interlocutores, el contexto en el que

se encuentra y los objetivos que persigue.

4.3. Identifica las ideas claves en un texto o discurso oral e infiere conclusiones a partir de ellas.

4.4. Se comunica en una segunda lengua en situaciones cotidianas.

4.5. Maneja las tecnologías de la información y la comunicación para obtener información y expresar ideas.

6.4. Estructura ideas y argumentos de manera clara, coherente y sintética.

7.1. Define metas y da seguimiento a sus procesos de construcción de conocimiento.

8.2. Aporta puntos de vista con apertura y considera los de otras personas de manera reflexiva.

10.3. Asume que el respeto de las diferencias es el principio de integración y de convivencia en los

contextos local, nacional e internacional.

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Didactic Sequence 1.

Dictionary use.

Startup Activity

Dashing definitions

Pair work. There are two parts to this puzzle. First, your partner and you must correctly

write the missing letters in each line for the dictionary words, answering the definitions.

Then, locate those terms within the word search below. Check each other’s work.

1. TO PROVIDE LODGING AC ____ ____M ____ ODATE

2. THE DISTANCE AROUND A CIRCLE CIRC ____MF _____ RENCE

3. FROM A DIFFERENT COUNTRY FORE ____ ____ N

4. TO TRAVEL JO ____ RN ____ ____

5. AN OPINION OR DECISION JU ____ ____ MENT

6. THE NUMBER OF MILES TRAVELED MIL ____ ____ GE

7. A LIST OF EVENTS AND TIMES S ____ ____ EDULE

8. NOT JOINED SEP ____ R ____ TE

9. TO ACHIEVE A DESIRED RESULT SUC ____ ____ED

10. TO MAKE A HIGH-PITCHED SOUND W ____IST ____ ____

K D V F Z E E U J C E N M V H

T Y D S O T S R A I L B I B K

X R R A S A N P M R T E L U Z

S T Y W W R X O L C S K E D R

E C S U P A P G L U I Y A V V

J T H E N P C M X M H J G Q A

S U A E L E Z L M F W K E C G

Y U D D D S G X K E F B U D G

K E C G O U O L M R F P E A S

H X N C M M L R N E T D K D O

Y R O R E E M E W N P D C T S

Q O V J U E N O I C R Y T H T

J X Z L B O D T C E Q M B I Y

L T P J T J J L X C B E C W U

N G I E R O F E S I A L H O O

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Activity: 1

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Evaluation

Activity: 1 Product: Word search exercises

and dictionary table. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Conceptual Attitudinal

Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies terms used in a

dictionary word search activity.

Practices the use of the dictionary

terms to check meaning and for

vocabulary development.

Integrates social and procedural

decisions when filling the missing

letters and when locating

definitions in a” word search

activity”.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

What can you find in a dictionary?

A. Circle the things below that you can find in a dictionary.

GUIDE WORDS DEFINITIONS PRONUNCIATION OF A WORD

PART OF SPEECH OF A WORD ORIGIN OF A WORD

SYNONYMS FOR A WORD SYLLABLES OF A WORD CORRECT SPELLING OF A WORD

B. Find the following items in your dictionary and answer the questions.

1) What is the first entry under "P" in your dictionary?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

2) What is the last entry under "A" in your dictionary?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

3) How many pages are there in your dictionary?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

4) How many pages are there in the part of your dictionary covering the letter "U"?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

5) Pick any letter, and then find a word starting with that letter in your dictionary. Write the word, and then write

what part of speech it is, how many syllables it has, and what its definition is.

Letter Word Part of a Speech Syllables Definition

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Activity: 1a

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Development Activities

Read and learn about the dictionary use.

The Dictionary

The dictionary is a valuable tool. To help you use it, this sequence explains in a clear and detailed way what you

need to know about dictionary and the information they provide. You can benefit greatly by owning two

dictionaries. The first dictionary you should own is a paperback one you can carry with you. The second dictionary

you should own is a desk-sized, hardcover edition which should be kept in the room where you study.

Paperback dictionaries Desk-sized dictionaries

Hardbound or hardcover dictionaries contain a good deal more information than the paperback editions. For

instance, a desk sized dictionary defines far more words than a paperback dictionary. There are more definitions

per word, as well. Although they cost more, they are worth the investment, because they are valuable study aids.

Dictionaries are often updated to reflect changes which occur in the language. New words come into use, and old

words take on new meanings. So you should not use a dictionary which has been lying around the house for a

number of years. Instead, buy yourself a new dictionary. It is easily among the best investments you will ever

make.

In the computer, you may have two additional ways

to look up a word: online dictionaries and dictionary

that may come with your computer software. You

may find it easy to check words online. Here are

three sites with online dictionaries:

www.merriam.webster.com

www.dictionary.com

www.yourdictionary.com

There are also language learning or dictionaries

devices with more than 100,000 entries and clear

sounds for every word. They work without an internet

connection and include pronunciation guides.

Activity: 2

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BLOCK 1

Read and find more about the use of dictionaries.

Finding words in the dictionary

This section describes how to use guidewords and how to find words you can’t spell.

Using guidewords to find a word more quickly

One way to find a given word in a dictionary is to use guidewords which are the pair of words at the very top of

each dictionary page. Shown beside is the part of a page in one paperback dictionary.

Guidewords

The first guideword tells what the first word is on the page; the

second guideword tells what the last word is on the page. All

the word entries on the page fall alphabetically between the two

guidewords.

Now check your understanding on how to use guidewords. Underline the three words below that would

appear on the page with the guidewords ARMFUL/ARSENIC:

Art Aroma army arrest ax allow

Explanation:

The guidewords ARMFUL/ARSENIC tell us right away that every word on the page will begin with ar. The

immediately eliminated ax and allow. The words that would fall on the page with those guidewords are aroma,

army, and arrest. The word art also begins with ar, but alphabetically it comes after arsenic, the last word on the

page.

Activity 2b. Underline the three words in each series that would be found on the page with the

guidewords.

1. daredevil / dated

database

danger Dark Ages dash date rape

2. gloom / go

giant

glow gnaw glue glitter

3. kidney / kindhearted

kindergarten

killing kickback kingdom kilowatt

4. dumbbell / dustpan

during

duplicate dye dunk dull

5. stuffed shirt

/subconscious

stumble sunstroke

subcompact

straw

style

Activity: 2a

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Evaluation

Activity: 2 Product: Guide Word exercises and

guide word identification table. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies the types of

dictionaries, guide words, and

the correct page in a dictionary

to find a given word by referring

to the guide words.

Applies the use of guidewords to

help him/her indicate word’s

starting and ending point on any

given page. Recognizes different

types of dictionaries.

Shows ability and positive attitude

when using guide words to

indicate word’s starting and

ending points in a dictionary

page.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Choose and write the letter for the following questions about the dictionary entries:

DESTINY would be found on the dictionary page with which guide word? ___________

a. Designate / desperate c. detach / determine

b. Despise / destructive d. descent / design

TENTATIVE would be found on the dictionary page with which guide word? ___________

a. Tennis / tentacle c. tent / term

b. Tender / tension d. tepid / terminate

NOTABLE would be found on the dictionary page with which guide word? ___________

a. Nostalgia / notation c. notary / notify

b. Northwest / nostril d. novice / noxious

UNDERMINE would be found on the dictionary page with which guide word? ___________

a. Underline / undershirt c. understand/ underwood

b. Under / undercover d. underground / underhand

EMINENT would be found on the dictionary page with which guide word? ___________

a. Elsewhere / embryo c. emporium / encumber

b. Embryology / employment d. eject / electrocute

Activity 2d. Look up for 5 words in the dictionary ( word’s meaning that you want to know like

“rationale”), find the guide words and then write the word, the dictionary’s page number, and the guide

words on the page where the word is found.

Word Page number Guide Word

1

2

3

4

5

Activity: 2c

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Finding a Word you can’t spell

If I can’t spell a word, you might ask, “How can I find it in the dictionary?” The answer is that you

have to guess what the letter might be. Guessing is not too difficult with certain sounds, such as the

sound of b and p. But other sounds are more difficult to pin down because they can belong to more

than one letter. And that’s where the guessing comes in. Here are two hints to help in such case:

Hint 1: If you’re not sure about the vowels in a word, you will simply have to experiment. Vowels often sound the

same. So try an i in place of an a, an i in place of an e, and so on. If, for example, you don’t find a word that

sounds as if it begins with pa, try looking under pe, pi, po, pu, py.

Hint 2: Following are groups of letters or letter combination that often sound alike. If your word isn’t spell with one

of the letters in a pair or group shown below, it might be spelled with another in the same pair or group.

For example, if it isn’t spelled with a k, it may be spelled with a c.

c/k c/s f/v/ph g/j qu/kw/k s/c/z

sch/sc/sk sh/ch shun/tion/sion w/wh able/ible

ai/ay al/el/le ancy/ency ate/ite au/aw ea/ee

er/or ie/ei ou/ow oo/u y/i/e

Pair work activity. For this practice you will need a dictionary. Ask your partner to pronounce the words

for you. Try using your ear, the hints on this page, and guideword to help you find the correct spelling

of the following words. Write each correct spelling in the answer space.

1. Occazion ___________________________

2. Dicided ___________________________

3. Dooty ___________________________

4. Aksident ___________________________

5. Nieghbor ___________________________

1. Experament _______________________

2. Rimember _______________________

3. Attenshun _______________________

4. Awtumn _______________________

5. Fotocopy _______________________

Activity 3a. Look for the meanings of the following words ending with TION, in your dictionary.

Word Meaning

Conviction

Suggestion

Demonstration

Invitation

Hesitation

Intention

Meditation

Imagination

Recollection

Attention

Activity: 3

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Evaluation

Activity: 3 Product: Spelling and meaning of

words table. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies groups of letters or

letter combination that often

sound alike that help spell

words to be search in a

dictionary.

Uses hints that help identify the

spelling of words to be search in a

dictionary.

Integrates social and procedural

interest when his/her partner

pronounces the words so he/she

can complete the task.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Choose the corresponding ending TION word from the table above for each sentence and

write it on the line.

1. A person’s quickly. ____________________________________________________________________________

2. Understanding something without reasoning. ______________________________________________________

3. Capacity of making pictures in your mind. _________________________________________________________

4. Telling someone what to do without giving a real order. ______________________________________________

5. Feeling sure that something is true. ______________________________________________________________

6. Plan what we are going to do soon if it’s possible. __________________________________________________

7. Not to be sure what to do. ______________________________________________________________________

8. Showing people, usually students; how to do something. ____________________________________________

Activity 3c. Write “sh” or “ch” in each of the blank lines so that the sentences make sense.

1. I sailed across the ocean on a big _____ _____ ip.

2. He will _____ _____ ase me on the playground.

3. ____ ____ ew your food before you swallow it.

4. The light fla ____ ____ ed.

5. Ted beat Ben in a game of ____ ____ ess.

6. There was a big spla ____ ____ when Jan dove in the pool.

7. Kim is su ____ ____ a nice girl.

8. Mar ____ ____ is the third month of the year.

9. Mrs. McDonald is the best tea ____ ____ er in the school.

10. ____ ____ ut the door when you leave.

11. We used a knife to ____ ____ op the peppers.

Activity: 3b

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BLOCK 1

Read and discuss in class about interpreting a “DICTIONARY ENTRY”.

A typical dictionary entry includes these parts:

1. The word or phrase gives the correct spelling and is broken into syllables.

2. The word or phrase with the pronunciation indicated through the use of diacritical marks.

3. The part or parts of speech the word functions as for example as a noun (n.), verb (v.), adjective (adj.), or

adverb (adv.).

4. Related forms or inflected forms of the word, such as the plural form of nouns and the past tense of

verbs.

5. The definition or definitions of the word or phrase.

6. The origin, or etymology, of the word or words, such as from the Latin, Old French, Middle English,

Hebrew, the name of a person.

The rest of the sequence will look at each of the listed kinds of information above.

Spelling and Syllables

The dictionary first gives the correct spelling and syllable breakdown of a word. As you can see dots separate the

words into syllables. Each syllable is a separate sound, and each sound includes a vowel. In the entry shown

above, bias is divided into two syllables.

How many syllables are in each of the following words?

Do . nate com . pen . sate o . be . di .ent

Activity 4a.Use your dictionary to separate the following words into syllables. Put a large dot (.)

between the syllables. Then write down the number of syllables in each word. Number one is done as

an example.

1. Birth. place 2 syllables

2. Displease ___________ syllables

3. Hurricane ___________ syllables

4. Undertaker ___________ syllables

5. Inhumanity ___________ syllables

Activity: 4

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Evaluation

Activity: 4 Product: Dictionary practice table. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies “Parts of a Dictionary,

and the way syllables are

separated in a dictionary.

Applies the use of the dictionary

when filling in the table that

includes: guide Word, meaning and

syllables.

Integrates new knowledge in

order to identify part of a

dictionary.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Use your dictionary and fill in the table with the following information: dictionary entries,

write the meanings and separate the words into syllables with dots.

Word Guide word Meaning Syllables

1. Impose

2. Sadistic

3. Inevitable

4. Apprehensive

5. Notable

6. Stereotype

7. Destiny

8. Tentative

9. Avert

10. Emerge

Activity: 4b

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Pronunciation Symbols and Accent Marks

A dictionary entry word is followed by information in parenthesis. The information in parenthesis

shows you how to pronounce the word. It includes two kinds of symbols: pronunciation symbols

and accent marks. Following are explanations of each.

Pronunciation Symbols

The pronunciation symbols tell the sounds of the consonants and the vowels in a word. The sound of the

consonants is probably familiar to you, but you may find it helpful to review the vowels sounds. Vowels are the

letters a, e ,i ,o, u. (Sometimes Y is also a vowel, as in myself and copy). To know how to pronounce the vowels

sounds, use the pronunciation key in your dictionary. Here is a sample pronunciation key:

Pronunciation Key:

pat k kick, cat, pique

boot

pay l (n d'l)

lid, needle* ou out

care m mum p pop

father

n (s d'n)

no, sudden* r roar

b bib ng thing s sauce

ch church

pot sh ship, dish

d deed, milled

toe t tight, stopped

pet

caught, paw, for, horrid, hoarse** th thin

bee oi noise th this

f fife, phase, rough

took

cut

g gag

urge, term, firm, word, heard r

butter

h hat v valve

hw which w with Foreign

pit y yes

French feu, German schön

pie, by z zebra, xylem

French tu, German ber

<R< TD>

pier zh vision, pleasure, garage

German ich, Scottish loch

j judge

about, item, edible, gallop, circus

French bon (b )***

To use the above key, match the symbol with the letter or letters in bold print in the short word that follows the

symbol. For instance (also called “short a”) sounds like the a in pat.

You can pronounce the i and first e in disrespect by first finding the matching symbols within the parentheses.

Note that the matching symbols for both vowels is . Then look for the symbol in the pronunciation key. It shows

you that has the sound of i in the short word pit. You can also use the pronunciation key to pronounce the

second e in disrespect ( ). It shows you that it is pronounced like the e in pet.

A long vowel (a vowel with a line over it) has the sound of its own name. Long a ( ) sounds like the a in pay;

Long e ( ) sounds like the e in bee; etc.

Finally, note that the last pronunciation symbols in the key looks like an upside-down e: . This symbol is known

as the schwa. As you can see by the word that follow it, the schwa has a very short sound that sounds more like

“uh” (like in ago, gallop, and circus) or “ih” (as an item and easily).

Use your dictionary to find and write in the pronunciation symbols for the following words.

1. Cynic s n ‘ k

2. Optimist _____________________________________________________________________________

3. Arrogant _____________________________________________________________________________

4. Advocate _____________________________________________________________________________

5. Hypothesis _____________________________________________________________________________

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Evaluation

Activity: 5 Product: Pronunciation activities. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies pronunciation symbols

that show you how to pronounce

the Word.

Uses pronunciation symbols that

show how to pronounce the Word.

Integrates new knowledge in the

use of pronunciation symbols

when pronouncing a word.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Pair work. Ask your partner to pronounce the words for you then refer to the

pronunciation key to answer the questions about the following 9 words. Underline the

letter of each of your answers. Then check your answers with your partner.

1. Wrinkle

The i in wrinkle sounds like the i in

a. pit b. pie

2. Blossom.

The first o in blossom sounds like the o in

a. Pot b. toe

3. Lively

The i in lively sounds like the i in

a. Pit b. pie

4. Lumber

The u in lumber sounds like the u in

a. Urge b. cut

5. Gamble

The a in gamble sounds like the a in

a. Pat b. care

6. Blatant

The first a in blatant sounds like the a in

a. Pat b. pay

7. Lucid

The u in lucid sounds like the oo in

a. Boot b. out

8. Vehicle

The first e in vehicle sounds like the e in

a. Pet b. bee

9. Hypocrite

The o in hypocrite sounds like the

a. a in pot b. schwa in the Word gallop

Activity 5b. Pronunciation Schwa.

Look at the words below and decide where in the word the schwa sound occurs. Underline and write

the schwa symbol over the correct part of the word. The first one has been done for you. Hint: One

word has two examples of schwa. All the others have only one.

d o c t o r b a n a n a

t o mo r r o w d i f f i c u l t

s u mme r l e v e l

p r o t e c t s u r v i v e

p u p i l t h e a t r e

me a s u r e w i z a r d

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Accent Marks

The darker line (’) is a bold accent mark, and it shows which syllable has the strongest stress.

Syllables without an accent mark are unstressed. Some syllables are in between and they are

marked with a lighter accent mark (‘).

Here are some words with syllable divisions and accent marks shown in parenthesis. Use the guides to help you

pronounce the word.

hip-hop (h p h p ) teen·ag·er (t n j r)

ma·chine (m -sh n ) al·pha·bet·i·cal ( l f -b t -k l)

Answer the questions following each of the five words below.

1. Telethon (tel’. - thon’)

How many syllables are in telethon? ______________

Which syllable is most strongly accented? ______________

2. Terminate (t r ’ m - n t ’ )

How many syllables are there in terminate? ______________

Which syllable is most strongly accented? ______________

3. pro·cras·ti·nate (pr -kr s t -n t , pr -)

How many syllables are in procrastinate? ______________

Which syllable is most strongly accented? ______________

4. graf·fi·ti (gr -f t )

How many syllables are in graffiti? ______________

Which syllable is most strongly accented? ______________

5. Tolerate (tol ' · er · ate)

How many syllables are in tolerate? ______________

Which syllable is most strongly accented? ______________

6. Superficial (sup' · er · fi ' · cial)

How many syllables are in superficial? ______________

Which syllable is most strongly accented? ______________

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Team work. Read and with your classmates and teacher review the parts of Speech.

Parts of Speech

Every word in the dictionary is either a noun, a verb, an adjective, or another part of speech. In

dictionary entries, the parts of speech are shown by letters in italics. In the entry for dictionary, for example, the

abbreviation n. tells us that dictionary is a noun and that is in plural.

dic·tion·ar·y (d k sh -n r ) n. pl. dic·tion·ar·ies

1. A reference book containing an alphabetical list of words, with information given for each word, usually

including meaning, pronunciation, and etymology.

When the word is more than one part of speech, the dictionary gives the definitions for each part of speech

separately. In the above entry for insult, the abbreviations are telling us that insult is a verb that comes after the

pronunciation symbols; the verb definition follows, when the verb meaning ends, the abbreviation n. tells us that

the noun definition will follow.

in·sult ( n-s lt ) v. in·sult·ed, in·sult·ing, in·sults. To treat with gross insensitivity, insolence, or contemptuous

rudeness. n. An offensive action or remark.

Parts of Speech Table

This is a summary of the 8 parts of speech; each part of a speech has an abbreviation used in the dictionaries in

order to save space.

part of speech

and abbreviations function or "job" example words example sentences

Verb (v.) action or state (to) be, have, do, like, work,

sing, can, must

Cobach is a nice school. I like

Cobach.

Noun (n.) thing or person pen, dog, work, music, town,

London, teacher, John

This is my dog. He lives in my

house. We live in London.

Adjective (adj.) describes a noun a/an, the, 69, some, good, big,

red, well, interesting My dog is big. I like big dogs.

Adverb (adv.) describes a verb, adjective or

adverb

quickly, silently, well, badly,

very, really

My dog eats quickly. When he is

very hungry, he eats really

quickly.

Pronoun (pron.) replaces a noun I, you, he, she, some Tara is Indian. She is beautiful.

Preposition (prep.) links a noun to another word to, at, after, on, but We went to school on Monday.

Conjunction

(conj.)

joins clauses or sentences or

words and, but, when

I like dogs and I like cats. I like

cats and dogs. I like dogs but I

don't like cats.

Interjection

(interj.)

short exclamation,

sometimes inserted into a

sentence

oh!, ouch!, hi!, well

Ouch! That hurts! Hi! How are

you? Well, I don't know.

Activity 6b. Use your dictionary to list the parts of speech for each of the following words. Each word

has more than one part of speech.

1. Praise __________________________

2. Bridge __________________________

3. Stress __________________________

4. Reverse __________________________

5. Level __________________________

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Good

5 pts

Fair

3 pts

Poor

1 pts Points

Guidewords

Good

Guidewords being defined

are shown clearly and are

underlined.

Fair

Guidewords being defined

are shown but not

underlined.

Poor

Guidewords being defined are difficult to find on the

paper.

Pronunciation

Good

The pronunciations are

included with the words and

are shown in parenthesis.

Fair

The pronunciations are

sometimes included or

sometimes in parenthesis.

Poor

The pronunciations are not included.

Parts of

Speech

Good

All words have included the

part of speech (noun, verb,

adj., and adv.)

Fair

Some of the words have

included the parts of speech

(noun, verb, adj., and adv.)

Poor

The parts of speech are not included.

Definition

Good

All words include the entire

definition.

Fair

Some of the words included

the entire definition.

Poor

Not all words are defined.

Total Points

Evaluation

Activity: 6 Product: Rubric. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies accent marks, parts of

speech and how they are

presented in a dictionary.

Uses the dictionary to fill in a table

that contains guide words,

definitions, pronunciations and

parts of speech.

Shows interest and ability when

using a rubric to evaluate his/her

partner’s parts of a dictionary

activity.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Use your dictionary and fill in the table with the appropriate information for the following

words. Then check your partner’s table using the rubric below.

Words Guidewords Pronunciation Part of speech Definition

Muzzle

Moderate

Stray

Sedate

Compliment

awesome

Innate

counselor

Tranquile

incline

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Irregular Forms of Words

When other forms of a word are spelled in an irregular way, those forms are shown. Those forms

are given after the part of speech in an entry. With irregular verbs, the dictionary gives the past tense (knew) and

the past participle (known), as well as the present participle (knowing). With adjectives, the dictionary gives the

comparatives (colder) and superlative (coldest) forms. Plural forms with irregular spellings are also included in

this spot in an entry. For example, the entry for country begins:

coun·try (k n tr ) n. pl. coun·tries

After the part of speech of country (n. for noun), the entry gives the irregular form of the plural (pl.) of country.

Below are the beginnings of dictionary entries. Write the part of speech, irregular forms, spelling,

syllables, stressed syllables. Do not abbreviate. Ask your teacher for help if needed.

shake (sh k) v. shook (sh k), shak·en (sh k n), shak·ing, shakes

Part of speech: ____________________________________________________________________________________

Spelling of past tense: _____________________________________________________________________________

Spelling of past participle: __________________________________________________________________________

Spelling of present participle: ________________________________________________________________________

Number of syllables in shake: _______________________________________________________________________

Stressed syllable in shaken: _________________________________________________________________________

cra·zy (kr z ) adj. cra·zi·er, cra·zi·est

Part of speech: ____________________________________________________________________________________

Spelling of form that means most crazy: _______________________________________________________________

Number of syllables in crazy: ________________________________________________________________________

Stressed syllable in crazy: ___________________________________________________________________________

qual·i·ty (kw l -t ) n. pl. qual·i·ties

Part of speech: ____________________________________________________________________________________

Spelling of plural: __________________________________________________________________________________

Number of syllables in the singular form: ______________________________________________________________

Stressed syllable in quality: __________________________________________________________________________

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Evaluation

Activity: 7 Product: Dictionary entries

activities. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies previous knowledge of

verb tenses, plurals and

adjective degrees.

Applies his/her knowledge when

using dictionary entries to identify

part of speech, irregular forms,

spelling, syllables and stressed

syllables.

Shows interest when applying

previous knowledge of grammar

in the dictionary use activities.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

run (r n) v. ran (r n), run, run·ning, runs

Part of speech: _______________________________________________________________________

Spelling of past tense: ______________________________________________________________________________

Spelling of past participle: ___________________________________________________________________________

Spelling of present participle: ________________________________________________________________________

Number of syllables in running: ______________________________________________________________________

Number of syllables in run: __________________________________________________________________________

chat (ch t) v. chat·ted, chat·ting, chats

Part of speech: ____________________________________________________________________________________

Spelling of past tense: ______________________________________________________________________________

Spelling of past participle: ___________________________________________________________________________

Spelling of present participle: ________________________________________________________________________

Spelling on third person singular form: ________________________________________________________________

Number of syllables in chatted: ______________________________________________________________________

Activity: 7 (continuation)

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Read carefully and discuss with your classmates and teacher.

Definitions

Words often have more than one meaning. When they do, their definitions may be numbered in the dictionary.

You can tell which definition of a word fits a given sentence by the meaning of the sentence. For example, the

following are three of the definitions of the verb form of revive given in most dictionaries:

1. To bring back to life or consciousness

2. To impart or regain health or vigor.

3. To restore to use.

Which of these definitions best fits the sentence below?

Modern technology can revive patients who have actually been considered medically dead.

The answer is definition 1: Modern technology can bring a patient back to life.

Activity 8a. Below are four words and their definitions. A sentence using each word is also given.

Choose the dictionary meaning that best fits each sentence.

1. Idle:

a) Not working; inactive

b) avoiding work; lazy

Which definition best fits the sentence below? _______________

The streetcar tracks in our city have been idle since 1960, when the city switched from streetcars to buses.

2. Suspicion:

a) The act of suspecting the existence of something, esp. of something wrong, with little evidence.

b) A faint trace; hint

Which definition best fits the following sentence? _____________

There was a suspicion of rum in the chocolate cake.

3. Sterile:

a) Incapable of reproducing sexually.

b) Producing little or no vegetation.

c) Free from microorganisms.

Which definition best fits the following sentence? _____________

The real estate agent had cheated young farmers by selling them sterile land.

4. Universal:

a) Extending to or affecting the entire world; worldwide.

b) Including or affecting all members of a class or group.

c) Of or pertaining to the universe; cosmic.

Which definition best fits the following sentence? _____________

Clear air and pure drinking water are a universal goal in our world today.

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Read and discuss with your classmates about SYNONYMS, ANTONYMS and THESAURUS.

A synonym is a word whose meaning is similar to that of another word. For instance, two synonyms

for the word fast are quick and speedy.

Dictionary entries sometimes end with synonyms. For example, the word foreign in some dictionaries ends with

several synonyms: alien, exotic, and strange. A hardbound dictionary in particular will provide synonyms for words

and explain the difference in meaning among the various synonyms.

More information on synonyms as well as antonyms (words with opposite meaning) can be found in a

THESAURUS, which is a collection of synonyms and antonyms. A Thesaurus can improve your writing by helping

you to find the precise word needed to express your thoughts. A thesaurus is like a dictionary, but instead of a

definition, you get a list of synonyms or possibly an antonym of the word.

You may want to own a paperback thesaurus or you can find a thesaurus online by going to:

www.thesaurus.com

Activity 8c. Decide whether each pair of words are synonyms or antonyms. Use a check mark ( )

Synonym Antonyms

1. agree - disagree ________ _________

2. cold - freezing ________ _________

3. easy - difficult ________ _________

4. argue - squabble ________ _________

5. guess - estimate ________ _________

6. bottom - top ________ _________

7. tired - energetic ________ _________

8. huge - gigantic ________ _________

9. sink - float ________ _________

10. windy - calm ________ _________

11. noisy - quiet ________ _________

12. unhappy - sad ________ _________

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Evaluation

Activity: 8 Product: Definitions, synonyms and

antonyms activities. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies synonyms, antonyms

and the definition of a word that

fits in the blanks by the meaning

of the sentence.

Uses synonyms, antonyms and

definitions of words to be used in

different sentences.

Shows interest when applying the

knowledge acquired.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Read about “Usage labels” and search for the word ain’t in your dictionary, write the meaning and

usage label.

Besides listing definitions, a dictionary includes usage labels; terms that tell us if a meaning is considered

something other than “standard English”. For example the dictionary labels one meaning of the verb crash “to go

to sleep”, as “Slang.” Other common labels include “Informal” (the phrase hang in, meaning “to persist,” is

labeled as informal) and “Nonstandard” (the Word ain’t labeled nonstandard). We will see more about formal,

informal and nonstandard English in block 2. Such labels indicate language not considered appropriate in formal

speech and writing. Example:

hang (h ng) v. hung (h ng), hang·ing, hangs 1.

To fasten from above with no support from below; suspend. 2. To suspend or fasten so as to allow free

movement at or about the point of suspension: hang a door. 15. Slang a. To spend one's free time in a certain

place. Often used with around or out: liked to hang out at the pool hall.

ain't [eɪnt] ___________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Closing Activity

To review what you’ve learned in this sequence. Answer the following questions by writing

the letter of the correct answer.

1. Guide words can help you __________

a. Pronounce a word in a dictionary.

b. Find a word in a dictionary.

c. Define a word in a dictionary.

2. You can learn how to pronounce a word by using the pronunciation symbols and __________

a. The part of speech.

b. Usage labels.

c. The pronunciation key.

3. A dark accent mark shows __________

a. Which syllable has the strongest stress.

b. Which syllable has the weakest stress.

c. That the Word has only one stress.

4. A schwa is an unaccented syllable that sounds like the a in the word __________

a. Ago

b. Cake

c. Cat

5. Dictionary entries will show you all of the following except __________

a. How to spell a word.

b. How to pronounce a word.

c. The meaning or meanings of a word.

d. Whether a word is a noun, verb, adjective or other part of speech.

e. Common spelling errors of a word.

Activity 9a. Aswer the following questions about the dictionary entry for emerge. Use the pronunciation

key for help if needed.

e·merge ( -mûrj ) .v. e·merged, e·merg·ing, e·merg·es 1. To rise from or as if from immersion. 2. To come forth

from obscurity. 3. To become evident. 4. To come into existence.

1. The first e in emerge sounds like the . __________

a. e in pet b. e in bee

2. How many syllables are there in the word emerge? __________

a. Three b. one c. two

3. What part of speech is emerge? __________

a. Noun b. verb c. adjective

4. Which definition of emerge best fits the sentence below—1, 2, 3 or 4? __________

The sun emerged from behind the clouds.

5. Which definition of emerge best fits the sentence below —1, 2, 3 or 4? __________

The fact that the defendant was once a prison guard emerged in court last week.

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Poor

1 pts

Fair

2 pts

Good

3 pts Points

Answer

Formulation

POOR

The student did not

adequately answer the

question and provided an

unsatisfactory

accompanying rationale.

FAIR

The student somewhat

answered the question and

provided a rationale with

limited development.

GOOD

The student provided a

well-constructed response

with a thoughtful rationale.

Mastery of

Subject

POOR

The student did not show a

basic mastery of the

concepts.

FAIR

The student showed a

limited mastery of the

concepts.

GOOD

The student showed an

outstanding mastery of the

concepts.

Grammar

POOR

The student's responses

contained numerous

grammatical errors (i.e.,

comma splices, fragments,

run-ons, verb formations).

FAIR

The student's responses

contained a few

grammatical errors, but

they did not detract from

the reader's basic

comprehension.

GOOD

The student's responses

contained no grammatical

errors or only a few minor

errors in punctuation and

spelling.

Total Points

Evaluation

Activity: 9 Product: Words meaning and Part

of speech table. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Recognizes concepts to answer

questions in a questionnaire.

Applies knowledge considering the

lesson presented to answer

questions based on the foregoing

concepts.

Shows interest and ability when

using a rubric to evaluate his/her

partner’s parts of a dictionary

activity, as well as openness to

feedback given by his/her partner.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Use your dictionary to put dots between the syllables in each word. Then write out the

word with the correct pronunciation symbols, including the accent marks.

Syllables Pronunciation

1. comply __________________________________ __________________________________

2. elapse __________________________________ __________________________________

3. dubious __________________________________ __________________________________

4. antidote __________________________________ __________________________________

5. coherent __________________________________ __________________________________

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Didactic Sequence 2.

How to become a better reader and thinker.

Start up Activity

How many hours per day do you watch TV?

Pair work. Ask your partner the following questions.

1. How many hours per day do you watch TV? _____________________________

2. What is your favorite channel on TV? _____________________________

3. Is TV a big part of your life? _____________________________

4. Are soap operas very popular among friends? _____________________________

5. What time of the day do you think TV is best? _____________________________

6. What kinds of programs do you usually watch?

(comedy, cartoon, drama, action, horror, _____________________________

science fiction, soaps, sitcoms.)

7. Do your parents tell you how much TV you _____________________________

are allowed to watch?

8. Do you prefer watching TV than to go out _____________________________

with friends?

9. What is the biggest problem you find with TV? _____________________________

10. Do you like watching the news on TV? _____________________________

Activity 1a. Go around the classroom and gather information about the first question: How many hours

per day do you watch TV? Then make a graph with the information gathered. The following is just an

example of a graph presented by a Canadian student Maryam Zerbes in her Social Studies project. She

asked students from her music theory class.

Activity: 1

Soaps or Soap

Operas:

A drama, typically

performed as a

serial on daytime

television or radio,

characterized by

stock characters

and situations,

sentimentality,

and melodrama.

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Evaluation

Activity: 1 Product: A graphic organizer. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Organizes information about the

time that his/her partners spend

in front of the TV to be presented

in class.

Obtains partners’ information about

TV issues to draw a diagram for a

forthcoming presentation in class.

Collaborates with partners when

obtaining information to be

organized in a graph.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Draw your graph here.

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Development Activities

Clear Thinking

The chances are that you are not as good a reader as you should be to do well in school. If so, it’s

not surprising. You live in a culture where people watch an average of over seven hours of television

every day!! All that passive viewing does not allow much time for reading. Reading is a skill that must

be actively practiced. The simple fact is that people who do not read very often are not likely to be

strong reader. Therefore, they are not good writers.

Another reason besides TV for not reading much is that you may have a lot of

responsibilities. You may be going to school and working at the same time. When you have

free time you are exhausted, and it’s easier to turn on the TV than to open a book. A third

reason for not reading is that school may have caused you to associate reading with

worksheets and drills and book reports and test scores. Experts agree that many schools

have not done a good job of helping students discover the pleasure and rewards of

reading.

The aim of this block is helping you become a stronger thinker; a person just not to

understand what is read but to analyze and evaluate it is as well. In fact reading and thinking

are closely related skills, and practice in thoughtful reading will also strengthen your ability

to think clearly and logically, consequently it will also strengthen your ability to write.

Clear thinking is the ability to understand the relationship between a point and its support. This sequence will help

you basics of clear thinking, and the sequences that follow will reinforce what you learn here. The skills that you

develop at thinking clearly and logically will prove of enormous value in all your school work, especially in writing

and composition.

You need to understand and to practice recognizing the relationship between a point and its support. The point is

the main idea that a person is making. The support is the evidence that is given to back up this idea or the

supporting details that you studied in your “Writing and Reading Strategies” module, remember?

The two most important things you must do as a speaker or writer are to:

1. Make a point 2. Support the point

The two most important things you must do as a reader are to:

1. Recognize the point 2. Recognize the support for the point

Did Snoopy recognize the point that his friend is making?

Activity: 2

Kids in the USA

spend about 25

hours a week,

or more than 3

hours a day

watching

television.

[http://www.nncc.or

g/Parent/ga.tv.html]

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Read the example of a point:

Point: Our meal in that new restaurant was unpleasant.

Now, is there a support for this point? In other words, is the person who made it thinking clearly and logically?

Let’s say the person then goes on to provide the following detail.

1. Our meal took forty five minutes to arrive.

2. The chicken we ordered was tough, and the rice and vegetables were cold.

3. The dessert choices were limited to stale cake and watery Jell-O.

The details provide solid support for the point. They give us a basic for understanding and agreeing with the

point. In light of the details, we would not be eager to eat at that restaurant. When evidence is provided, we have

a chance to be both logical and critical thinkers: to evaluate for ourselves whether is enough valid evidence in

support of a point.

Activity 2a. In each of the following groups, one statement is the point, and the other statements are

support for the point. Identify each point with a P and each statement of support with an S.

A.

1. Some parrots can be trained to count. ______

2. Parrots are intelligent pets. ______

3. Parrots have been taught to recognize shapes and colors. ______

4. Most parrots can learn to speak. ______

B.

1. Sharp pieces of broken glass are scattered near the swing sets. ______

2. Large stay dogs wander through the park glowing at people ______

who walk near them.

3. Our neighborhood park is not a safe place to play. ______

4. The park has been the site of gang violence on several ______

occasions recently.

C.

1. The authors do not define the new terms they use in each chapter. ______

2. The book has no illustrations and no index. ______

3. The sentences are long and hard to understand. ______

4. The chemistry textbook is not very helpful. ______

D.

1. Hearing can be damaged by a number of common sounds. ______

2. Listening to loud music through headphones can cause hearing ______

loss.

3. Machinery, such as lawn mowers and leaf blowers, can ______

contribute to deafness.

4. The noise level of many buses and trucks is high enough to ______

damage hearing permanently.

Activity: 2 (continuation)

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Evaluation

Activity: 2 Product: Clear thinking practices. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Comprehends the relationship

between a point and its support

when an idea is given.

Practices recognizing the

relationship between a point and

the evidence that is given to back

up an idea.

Integrates new knowledge in

order to understand the basics of

clear thinking.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

E.

1. Requiring kids to wear uniforms to school is a good idea. ________

2. Studies show that students work better when they are dress ________

in uniform.

3. Uniforms costs less than store-bought clothes. ________

4. Uniforms stop kids from teasing each other about the clothes ________

they wear.

F.

1. It is good for people to limit the amount of time they watch TV. ________

2. When people spend less time watching TV, they pursue ________

healthier activities, including exercises.

3. Studies show that when the TV is turned off, families talk and ________

Share more with each other.

4. Watching less TV means that kids will be exposed to less ________

violence.

G.

1. My husband is a vegetarian ________

2. My mother, who lives with us, can’t digest certain vegetables ________

3. One of my children is allergic to milk, wheat, and eggs. ________

4. My family is difficult to cook for. ________

H.

1. Each year, Americans spend billions of dollars buying ________

cold medications.

2. Cold cause Americans business to lose millions of hours ________

of work every year.

3. The average child misses a week of school each year due ________

to colds.

4. The common cold has a powerful effect on the nation. ________

Activity: 2b

Points and Support

in every life

An advertisement

tries to convince us

that something is “a

great product”

(Persuasive speech).

A political candidate

offers reasons why

he or she is the

person to vote for.

Textbooks authors or

teachers advance all

kinds of points and

then supply evidence

on behalf of their

ideas.

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Read about Identifying Logical Support. Then read the points and the three items of

“support” that follow and circle the letter of the item that provides logical support for the

point.

Identifying Logical Support

Once you identify a point and its support, you need to decide if the support really applies to the point. The critical

thinker will ask, “Or is it beside the point?” In their enthusiasm to advance a point, people often bring up support

that does not apply. For example, a student may wish to make the point that her English instructor is a poor

teacher. To support that point, the student may say, “He speaks so softly I can hardly hear him. In addition, he

wears ridiculous clothes.” A Critical thinker will realize that although a soft voice may in fact interfere with an

instructor’s effectiveness, what the instructor wears has nothing to do with how well he teaches. The first reason

for disliking the English teacher is logical and relevant support, but the second reason is beside the point.

This activity will sharpen your ability to decide whether evidence truly supports a point. It will help you become a

critical reader who can ask and answer the questions, “Is there a logical support for the point?”

Point: That woman on the news was courageous.

Support:

a. She collected bags of canned and boxed food for months and then brought it to the Golden Door Soup

Kitchen to be used for Thanksgiving. Thanks to her efforts, the soup kitchen was able to feed five

hundred more people this year than last. That number includes over a hundred children.

b. She had at hand all the facts and figure to back up her statements, citing three different studies by

experts in the field. She handled the reporter’s questions with easy and confidence.

c. When she saw the child been attacked, she went to his aid without a moment’s hesitation. She ran up

shouting “Let him go!” then kick the ferocious pit bull as hard as she could. When the dog released the

child, she grabbed the boy and pushed him to safety, even as the dog turned on her.

Explanation:

a. The information here tells us that the woman on the news was kind and generous with her time. You

should not have chosen this item. It is about generosity, not courage.

b. The woman described here showed mastery of her subject and skill in being interviewed;you should not

have chosen this item either.

c. The woman referred here put herself in danger to help a child. Clearly, to do so, she had to be

courageous. If you circled the letter of this item, you were correct.

Activity 3a. Put a check ( ) next to the sentence that logically supports the point.

1. Point: Greg is irresponsible.

a. He gives up his bus seat to elderly commuters. ________

b. He never pays his bills on time and he is always late for appointments. ________

c. When I need someone to cover for me at work so that I can see my girlfriend, ________

Greg is always too busy to help me up.

Activity: 3

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Evaluation

Activity: 3 Product: Logical identification

exercises. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies the point and its

support to decide if the support

relates to the point.

Applies the support statements to

each given point to understand

each logical and relevant support.

Appreciates the effectiveness of

becoming a critical thinker and

how it will help in his/her

academic development.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

2. Point: That child is very curious.

a. He was reciting the alphabet when he was only three years old. _______

b. His favorite word is “No!” He doesn’t start picking up his toys until the _______

fifth or sixth time he is told.

c. He has taken apart all the clocks in the house to see how they work. _______

He breaks rocks because he wanted to see what they looked like inside.

3. Point: Mary is self-centered.

a. She’ll avoid a party invitation to stay home and curl up with a good book. _______

b. Any time we talk, I hear all about her life, but she never even asks what is _______

new with me.

c. She spends much of her time assisting her grandparents, she cooks them _______

dinner and talk to them about the family.

4. Point: The teenage boys at the dance were much shyer than the girls.

a. They yelled and laughed out loud, drawing attention to themselves, then they _______

left with their friends to go to a nearby party.

b. They all gathered at one end of the room, away from the girls, they looked _______

nervously at the girls who were dancing.

c. They walked right up to a group of girls and introduced themselves. They _______

asked the girls for their phone numbers.

5. Point: The bus service on this route is unreliable.

a. Several times each week, the bus on this route arrives more than a half hour late. _______

b. The buses on this route are at least twenty years old. _______

c. The transit authority is building a rail line to replace the bus route. _______

Activity: 3a (continuation)

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Read about determining a logical point. Look at the following three items of support and

do the exercise, then check your answer by listening to the explanation given by your

teacher.

Determining a Logical Point

This activity will develop your ability to come to a logical conclusion. You will look closely at supporting evidence

and then decide what point is well supported by that evidence. The skill of making a reasonable judgment based

upon the information presented is a significant part of clear thinking.

Support:

Circle the letter of the point that is logically supported by the above evidence.

a. Catalogs offer better-quality products than stores do.

b. Ordering from catalogs can be a convenient way of shopping.

c. Catalogs provide bigger choice of colors, styles, and sizes than regular stores do.

d. People should stop shopping in stores.

Explanation:

a. The support doesn’t compare the quality of catalog products with store products. So you should not

have not chosen this item.

b. The support statement does tell us that shopping by catalog is convenient: It can be done over the

phone, delivery is on time, and goods can be returned. This is the statement that is adequately and

logically supported, so it is the one you should have chosen

c. The supporting statement does not compare the choices available through catalogs with those in the

stores.

d. The benefits given in the statements of support are not sufficient to support this point. You should not

have chosen thin point either.

Activity 4a. For each group, read the three items of supporting evidence. Then write the point that is

logically supported by that evidence.

1. Support:

Write a statement that describes the supporting evidence.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

Activity: 4

Dozens of angry bees attacked people sitting at the picnic table.

A rain shower made all the food soggy and wet.

Nearby kids threw a football onto the table, spilling all the drinks.

Most catalogs have a wide range of high-quality products in

choices of colors, styles, sizes, and so forth.

Catalogs products can be ordered over the phone.

The leading catalogs take pride in their delivering on time and

accepting returns for any reason.

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Evaluation

Activity: 4 Product: Logical support grids. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Writes statements that describes

the supporting evidence

statements.

Develops his/her ability to come to

a logical conclusion when reading

supporting evidence and writing the

point that is supported by that

evidence.

Shows interest and ability when

using grids to determine logical

points.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

2. Support:

Write a statement that describes the supporting evidence.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

3. Support:

Write a statement that describes the supporting evidence.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

4. Support:

Write a statement that describes the supporting evidence.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

5. Support:

Write a statement that describes the supporting evidence.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

Activity: 4a (continuation)

Before underground plumbing, city people dumped raw sewage out of

their windows and into the street.

In the days when city vehicles were horse-drawn, manure was piled

high in the roadways.

Before trash collection was available, pigs were set loose in city streets

to eat the garbage thrown there.

When my dad was called out of town, the man who lives on the corner

collected the mail and paper for him every day.

The young man in the house across the street always shovels my dad’s

sidewalk when it snows.

Whenever my dad’s car needs is in the garage for repairs, one of his

next-door neighbors drives him around until he gets his car back.

Employers like resumes and letters that are neat.

Companies prefer workers with a professional appearance.

Interviews like job seekers who speak clearly and with confidence.

High-speed trains can cruise at two hundred miles an hour.

For short trips, it can take longer to get to the airport than it

would take to make the whole trip by high-speed train.

For short and medium trips, high-speed trains are more fuel-

efficient than airplanes.

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Closing Activity

Criteria 1 3 4 Total

Organization

Audience cannot

understand presentation

because there is no

sequence of information.

Student presents information

in logical sequence which

audience can follow.

Student presents information

in logical, interesting

sequence which audience

can follow.

Graphics Student uses a superfluous

map.

Student's map relate to text

and presentation.

Student's map explains and

reinforces text and

presentation.

Mechanics

Student's presentation has

four or more spelling errors

and/or grammatical errors.

Presentation has no more

than two misspellings and/or

grammatical errors.

Presentation has no

misspellings or grammatical

errors.

Elocution

Student mumbles,

incorrectly pronounces

terms, and speaks too

quietly for students in the

back of class to hear.

Student's voice is clear.

Student pronounces most

words correctly. Most

audience members can hear

presentation.

Student uses a clear voice

and correct, precise

pronunciation of terms so that

all audience members can

hear presentation.

Total Points:

Evaluation

Activity: 5 Product: Map presentation and

Rubric. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Analyzes and interprets the

theme “How to become a better

reader and thinker.”

Explains the theme “How to

become a better reader and

thinker” and registers his/hers

partners’ participation in a rubric.

Collaborates in his/her team

presentation and shows positive

attitude when receiving feedback.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Team work. Draw a map about “How to Become a Better Reader and Thinker”, include:

Clear thinking, Identifying Logical Support, and Determining a Logical Point.

You and your team organize a class map presentation.

Grade your partners’ participation in a rubric.

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Didactic Sequence 3.

Vocabulary in context.

Start up Activity

Remember the Chinese saying “A picture is worth a thousand words”? You learned in

your Writing and Reading Strategies module that a picture can help you guess the

meaning of a new word. Look at the pictures below and choose and underline the best

answer to explain the pictures.

1. Which is the best description for the picture

a) Computer b) computer c) microcomputer

device hardware system

2. Which is the best description for the picture

a) For sale b) equipment used c) instruments for you

in an office

3. Which is the best description for the picture

a) Holidays on beach b) beautiful beach c) activity of people

Activity 1a. Read the passage below. Answer the questions that follow. Then find and underline the

meaning of words. You can use your imagination in the case.

A father examined his son’s report card and suffered mild cardiac tremors as he saw a solid column of D and F

grades. Outraged that a product of his genes could so disgrace the family, he confronted his son and said,

“Dave, this just won’t do. I can’t tolerate these grades, and if you don’t show me an immediate turn-around,

you’re going to be grounded!”

Do you think Dave got good grades or bad grades? ____________________________________________________

Was Dave’s father happy or angry at his school result? __________________________________________________

What is his father going to do with him? _______________________________________________________________

1) What does the words “suffering mild cardiac tremors” mean?

a) very angry b) about to die of a heart attack c) very sad

2) What does the word “disgrace” mean?

a) please b) shame c) disappoint

3) What does the word “tolerate” mean?

a) give b) borrow c) admit

Activity: 1

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Evaluation

Activity: 1 Product: Guessing Meanings

exercises. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies and guesses words

from vocabulary in context to

answer questions.

Practices vocabulary to find the

meanings, choose and answer

questions.

Shows initiative and openness

when starting a new theme.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Find the meaning of the underlined word in each sentence. Choose and circle the best

answer for each question. Then check with your teacher and classmates.

In order to understand what you are reading from an English text, you need to guess the meaning of

unfamiliar words from the context. This will help you read faster and easier. Do the exercise before

studying how you can guess the meaning of vocabulary from context.

1. She had often come into conflict with her mother-in-law.

a) announcement b) attainment c) argument

2. The old woman’s blunt questions embarrassed her, making her momentarily tongue-tied.

a) emit b) ashamed c) loathe

3. We just need a couple more chairs so everyone can sit down.

a) one b) two c) three

4. Please, Uncle Jack, give me a piggyback!

a) A ride on someone back or shoulder b) A small bag c) People who arrived to settle in Bangkok 2000

5. Ladda does not like to eat papaya or carrots, which is high in vitamin A, so she lacks it. Her mother keeps

telling her that an inadequate supply of vitamin A can lead to blindness.

a) too big b) not enough c) full

Activity: 1b

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Development Activities

Read about Vocabulary in Context and discuss the theme in class. Then check your

understanding by writing the letter of the answer you think is correct on each line.

Vocabulary in Context

In this sequence, you will read about and practice types of context clues that will sharpen your skills in

recognizing and using context clues. They will also help you add new words to your vocabulary. There are four

common types of context clues:

1. Examples 3. Antonyms

2. Synonyms 4. General sense of the sentence or passage

Remember not to use a dictionary for these practices. Their purpose is to help you develop the skill of figuring out

what words mean without using a dictionary. Pronunciations are provided in parenthesis for the words. You have

guide to pronunciation in sequence 1.

1. EXAMPLES

If you are given examples that relate to an unknown word, you can often figure out its meaning. For instance, note

the examples in this sentence: “All animals share the same vital needs, such as food, water, and shelter.” The

examples—food, water, and shelter—helped you figure out that the word vital means “necessary.”

Look also at the Frank and Ernest cartoon below.

Thaves, cartonistgroup.com

Notice that example of the “quote” helps you understand that the word MOTTO means slogan, cliché, saying, etc.

The face of the man reading, helps you understand that the word SCOWL means an angry tempered expression.

Look at the face of the man again.

Now read the items that follow. An italicized word in each sentence is followed by examples that serve as context

clues for that word. These examples, which are boldfaced will help you figure out the meanings of each word. On

each line write the letter of the answer you think is correct. Then read the explanation that follows.

Note that examples are often introduced with signal words and phrases like for example, for instance, including,

and such as, that.

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1. In our house, clothes hangers have various odd functions. For instance ________

we use them to scratch back and hold up plants in the garden.

func·tion (f ngk sh n) means

a) shapes b) problems c) uses

2. Our baseball team’s pitcher has a few eccentric habits, such as throwing exactly ________

thirteen pitches when warming up and never wearing socks.

ec·cen·tric ( k-s n tr k, k-) means

a) normal b) strange c) messy

3. Throughout history, humans have built a wide variety of dwellings, including simple ________

mud huts, stone castles, and marble mansions.

dwell·ing (dw l ng)

a) homes b) stores c) churches

Explanation. In each sentence, the examples probably helped you figure out the meaning of the words in italics:

In sentence 1, examples of the odd functions of hangers—scratching back and holding up plants—may have

helped you to guess that functions are “uses.” So the correct answer is C.

In sentence 2, the examples of strange habits show that eccentric means “strange.” So the correct answer is

B.

Finally, the examples in sentence 3 indicate that dwellings are homes. So the correct answer is A.

Note that the examples in the sentences are introduced by the signal words for instance, such as, and

including.

Activity 2a. In each sentence that follows, underline the examples of the italicized word. Then write the

letter of the word’s meaning on the answer line. Remember DON’T USE A DICTIONARY.

1. The debris in the stadium stands included numerous paper cups, ticket stubs, ________

sandwich wrappings and cigarette butts.

de·bris also dé·bris (d -br , d -, d br ) means

a) products b) papers c) trash

2. For his weak stomach, Mario ate a bland diet of white bread, rice, and mashed potatoes. ________

bland (bl nd) means

a) spicy b) varied c) mild

3. New York, Boston, and Philadelphia are three of the oldest urban areas in USA. ________

ur·ban (ûr b n) means

a) empty b) city c) country

Actividad: 2 (continuation)

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Evaluation

Activity: 2 Product: Vocabulary in context

activity. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Recognizes words in a new

passage according to the

context to answer questions.

Develops the skill of figuring out

what the words mean depending

on the context.

Shows interest when acquiring

and applying new knowledge as

well as showing a sense of

initiative to learn.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

4. A transaction, such as buying or selling a product, is the most basic ________

part of an economy.

trans·ac·tion (tr n-s k sh n, -z k -) means

a) profit b) loss c) business deal

5. My uncle often has had some embarrassing mishaps, such as backing his car ________

into the side of the boss’s Cadillac and trying to walk through a glass door.

mis·hap (m s h p , m s-h p )means

a) clever moves b) accidents c) project

6. The death of a child and the death of a spouse are two of life’s most traumatic experience. ________

trau·mat ic (-m t k) means

a) Rare b)painful c) interesting

7. Religious rituals like baptisms, church weddings, church weddings, and funeral services give ________

many people a sense of peace and comfort.

rit·u·al (r ch - l) means

a) Lesson b) ceremony c)prayer

8. Many people take dietary supplements—for example, extra calcium or large doses of ________

vitamin C—in the belief that they will cure or prevent disease.

sup·ple·ment (s p l -m nt) means

a) Addition b) losses c) suggestions

9. When discussing computers, professionals often use such jargon as “RAM,” “download,” ________

and “bytes,” which others may not understand.

jar·gon (jär g n) means

a) special language b) clear instructions c) mean insults

10. There are hundreds of different kinds of retailers, ranging from car dealerships and ________

department stores to frozen-yogurt stands and online drugstores.

re tail er (r t l r) means

a) customers b) business that sell directly to users c) business that make products

Actividad: 2a (continuation)

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Look at the cartoon and notice the meanings of the words

meeting. If the man doesn’t understand meeting or gathering,

maybe he’ll understand what forum or conference means.

The use of synonyms provide effective paraphrases

(remember? it is when you try to put information from a source

into your own words). An original sentence might say:

"Our views about the nature of the early plant and animal

communities are now being revised".

Can be paraphrased using synonyms into:

"The commonly held belief on ancient flora and fauna is now

being reviewed".

"Commonly held belief" is a synonym for "our views", "ancient

flora and fauna" is another way to say "early plant and animal

communities", and "reviewed" is a synonym for "revised".

Pair work. Read about Synonyms and discuss with your partner. Then check your

understanding by writing each synonym in the space provided, each item includes a

synonym of the italicized word. Number one is giving as an example.

Synonyms

Context clues are often found in the form of synonyms one or more words that mean the same or almost the

same as the unknown word. Consider the sentence, “In the United States, shaking hands is the appropriate way

to greet someone: in China, bowing is the right way.” Here is the synonym “right” tells you the meaning of

appropriate. A synonym may appear anywhere in a sentence as a restatement of the meaning of the unknown

word.

1. Everyone turned to look at the arrogant customer who spoke to the manager in a self-important

self-important voice.

2. The medicine that Nina is taking is very potent. It is so powerful that she must _________________

Not take it for more than a week.

3. After the heavy rains, the stream became murky; in fact the water was so cloudy you _________________

couldn’t see the bottom.

4. Some overweigh people are called furtive eaters because they eat large quantities _________________

of food in secret.

5. A con artist was apparently very believable as he went door to door telling a plausible _________________

story about having his wallet stolen and needing twenty dollars to get home.

6. The first step in reaching a peace agreement was to set up a dialogue between the _________________

two sides. Without discussion, peace was impossible to force them.

7. You cannot coerce people into learning. If they are not interested, it is impossible _________________

to force them.

8. While Ved may not be affluent by American standards, he is rich compared with _________________

most people in his homeland of India.

Activity: 3

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Activity: 3 Product: Synonyms exercises. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Selects synonyms in the form of

context clues to know meaning

of words.

Uses synonyms to replace some

words in the sentences.

Uses paraphrasing by replacing

some words with synonyms.

Shows interest when learning how

synonyms provide clues to guess

an unknown word.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

9. Several tests are necessary to verify that a virus is present. One is never ________________

enough to prove a virus exists.

10. The diversity of the population of the United States is the result of accepting _________________

immigrants from a wide variety of cultures and nations.

Activity 3a. Paraphrase the following sentences (sayings) by replacing the CAPITALIZED words with a

definition or synonym. Then discuss the sayings with the class.

A. A penny SAVED is a penny EARNED.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

B. Valuable GIFTS often come in SMALL packages.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

C. You can't teach an OLD dog new TRICKS.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

D. A BOY'S best friend is his DOG.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

E. A fool and his MONEY are soon PARTED.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

F. The EARLY bird GETS the worm.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

G. HASTE makes WASTE.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

H. HONESTY is the best POLICY.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

I. You can't MAKE a silk purse OUT OF a cow's ear.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

J. Better LATE than NEVER.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

Activity: 3 (continuation)

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Read about Antonyms and discuss with your partner.

Antonyms

Antonyms –words and phrases that mean the opposite of a Word—are also useful as context clues. Antonyms

are sometimes signaled by words and phrases such as however, but, yet, on the other hand, instead of, and in

contrast Look at the sentence: “Winners in life take an active role in making things happen, instead of being

passive and waiting for good luck.” Here the word instead indicates that active and passive are antonyms and

thus have opposite meanings.

Look also at the cartoon about the fighting couple

who are visiting a marriage counselor. Notice that

the antonym “combatible” helps you figure out that

compatible must mean “in agreement”

Read the following sentences and underline the best answer according to the antonym.

1. Today is a WARM day, said Karoline to Peter.

a) Hot b) cool c) shine

2. He is a STRONG man.

a) Weak b) sturdy c) powerful

3. We are going to talk with our ENEMIES.

a) Lost b) friend c) rivals

4. Mr. Brown always makes EASY tests.

a) Soft b) hard c) strong

5. His garden is very LARGE.

a) Small b) huge c) enormous

6. OPEN the door, please!

a) Close b) huge c) free

7. In the trial the judge declared this person GUILTY

of all the facts.

a) Easy b) rival c) innocent

8. The International Organizations are going to be in

a TEMPORARY way in the country.

a) Complicated b) permanent c) guess

9. How POVERTY is defined?

a) Guilty b) wealthy c) idle

10. How you are going to JOIN these wires? Said Ana

to Pedro.

a) Paste b) separate c) unite

Activity: 4

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Evaluation

Activity: 4 Product: Antonyms exercises. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Classifies words opposite in

meaning to another word and

identifies their meaning.

Applies words opposite in meaning

to another word and recognizes

their meaning.

Integrates basic grammar

information to be used in simple

exercises.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Check your understanding by underling the word or phrases that means the opposite of

the italicized words. Then, on the answer line write the letter of the meaning of the

italicized word. Finally, read the explanation that follows and discuss it with your partner

to choose one. Number one is given as example.

1. The coach takes every opportunity to reprimand his players, yet he ignores every chance ____b______

to praise them.

Reprimand means

a) Approve of b) criticize c) choose

Explanation: In the sentence, the antonyms given probably helped you understand the meaning of the word in

italics. Reprimand is the opposite of “Praise,” so the answer to sentence 1 is “criticize.”

2. “I am having acute pains in my chest now, said the patient, “but an hour ago all I felt was ___________

a dull ache.”

Acute means

a) Sharp b)weak c) no

3. Some teachers are too lenient. I’d rather have strict teachers who take class seriously. ___________

Lenient means

a) Hard b) easygoing c) busy

4. After his accident, Brad expected an in-depth examination at the hospital. Instead, a doctor ___________

gave him a quick, superficial checkup and said, “you’re fine.

Superficial means

a) Lacking depth b) complicated c) satisfactory

5. A temporary cough is nothing to worry about, but a chronic one can be a sign of serious ___________

Illness.

Chronic means

a) Continuing b) brief c) mild

6. When drinking was prohibited by the nineteenth Amendment, alcohol became more popular ___________

with some people than it had been when it was allowed.

Prohibited means

a) Permitted b) defined c) forbidden

7. “What we need is an innovative idea!” cried the chairman. “All I’ve heard so far are the ___________

same old ones.”

Innovative means

a) New b) traditional c) loud

Activity: 4 (continuation)

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Read and learn how to solve out the meaning of unfamiliar words.

General Sense of the Sentence of Passage

Sometimes it takes a bit more detective work to puzzle out the meaning of an unfamiliar word. In such cases, you

must draw conclusions based on the information surrounding the word. Asking yourself questions about the

passage may help you make fairly accurate guess about the meaning of the unfamiliar word.

Look at the cartoon about Lucy complaining to Schroeder, suppose that you don’t know the word “Features.” The

phrases: nice hair, pleasant smile, cheerful personality, etc. suggest that features mean characteristics that

provide pleasure and attract.

Peanuts by Charles Schulz

Activity 5a. Your teacher will answer the questions in parenthesis that follow each item below. Then

using the logic of each answer, write the letter of the meaning you think is correct. Number one is done

as example.

1. The newlyweds agreed to be very frugal in their shopping because they wanted to save a

enough money to buy a home.

Frugal means (How will people shop if they wanted to save Money?)

a) Thrifty b ) wasteful c) interested

Explanation: The first sentence provides enough evidence for you to guess that fruglmeans “thrifty.” The

newlyweds (just married) had to be thrifty if they wanted to save money.

2. To reach a sound conclusion about an issue, you must carefully consider all the facts ____________

involved.

Sound means (What kind of conclusion would you reach by considering the facts?)

a) Early b) obvious c) reasonable

3. My mother refused to divulge the secret ingredients she uses in her fried chicken recipe. ____________

Divulge means (What would someone refuse to do with ingredients that are secret?)

a) Reveal b) hide c) invent

4. Because the nicotine in cigarettes is harmful, many people favor stringent laws against ____________

their sale.

Stringent means (What types of laws would be favored by people concerned about

the harm of nicotine?)

a) Strict b) weak c) confusing

Activity: 5

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Evaluation

Activity: 5 Product: Vocabulary knowledge

Exercises Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Describes meanings based on

the information surrounding the

word.

Determines meaning of unfamiliar

words based on the information

surrounding the word.

Integrates knowledge of general

sense used to understand an

unfamiliar word or words.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

5. Taking the expression “raining cats and dogs” literally, the child looked for little __________

animals on the ground after the storm.

Literally means (In what way did the child interpret the phrase “raining cats and dogs?”)

a) Symbolically b) musically c) as the real fact

6. It is too late to alter the plans for the party. Reservations have been made for the ____________

Restaurant and the band, and all the invitations have been sent out.

Alter means (If plans have all been made, what is too late to do?)

a) Change b) surprise c) repeat

7. Organ transplants will not succeed unless the donor has the same blood type as the ____________

person receiving the organ.

Donor means (Who would need to have the same kind of blood as the person receiving the transplant?)

a) One who receives b)one who gives c) one who doubts

Activity: Continuation

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Closing Activity

To review what you’ve learned in this chapter, answer the following questions by writing

the letter of each answer on the line.

1. The context of a word is __________

A. Its meaning B. its opposite C. the word around it

2. Which type of context clue often follows signal words like: including, such as, and __________

for instance?

A. Example B. Synonym C. Antonym

3. In the sentence below, which type of context clue is provided for the italicized word? __________

A. Example B. Synonym C. Antonym

I’m looking for a unique gift for my boyfriend, he appreciates unusual things.

4. In the sentence below, which word is the synonym for the italicized word? __________

A. Boss B. employees C. dictator

Because my boss runs the store like a tyrant, all of the employees call her “The little dictator.”

5. Which type of context clue often follows signal words like: such as, however, __________

but, yet, and on the other hand?

A. Example B. Antonym C. Synonym

6. In the sentence below, which type of context clue is provided for the italicized word? __________

A. Example B. Antonym C. Synonym

Expecting that his license would be renewed, the pilot was surprised when it was revoked instead.

6a. Write the definitions for each boldfaced word, choosing from the definitions in the box.

a. Attract

e. loosens

i. explore

b. Play with

f. catch and eat

j. rush away from

c. Closes

g. danger

k. encounter

d. Empties

h. benefits

While plants often provide food for animals, some plants turn the table and prey on smaller members of

the animal kingdom. One, the Venus’s-fly trap, uses its leaves like a steel trap. It lures small insects with

its sweet perfume and then clams its “jaws” so it can digest the insects at its leisure. Another leafy hunter

is the pitcher plant, whose sweet juices tempt insects to probe the plant. Once deep within the plant, the

insect meets a watery death. Plants are essential for animals’ life, but for inhabitants of the insect

community, they can also be hazard that may end life.

1. Prey on means _____________________________________ 4. Probe means _________________________

2. Lures _____________________________________________ 5. Meets _______________________________

3. Clamps ___________________________________________ 6. Hazard ______________________________

Activity: 6

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The underlined EXAMPLES suggest the meaning of the italicized term. Circle the letters of the

meaning of the italicized word.

1. Carol survived her freshman years despite various adverse events. For instance, she missed two weeks of

class because of a strep throat and had all her books stolen just before finals.

Adverse means

a. Unfavorable b. evil c. fortunate

2. I have seen such poignant scenes as a homeless man caring for a little dog and woman in a slum growing

flowers in a patch of soil.

Poignant means

a. Exciting b. touching c. upsetting

3. The new principal took drastic steps, including firing teachers and forbidding after-school activities.

Drastic means

a. Funny b. approving c. extreme

Activity 6c. Draw conclusions and write a paragraph about the cartoon and the dialogue.

_________________________________________________________________________________

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Activity 6d. Pair work. Check your partner’s activity using the rubric on the next page. Then report the

results to your teacher. Give 3 points for a good work, give 2 points for a fair work, give 1 point for a

poor work using the criteria at the left.

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Poor

1 pts

Fair

2 pts

Good

3 pts Points

Answer formulation

The student did not

adequately answer the

question and provided an

unsatisfactory

accompanying rationale.

The student somewhat

answered the question

and provided a rationale

with limited development.

The student provided a

well-constructed response

with a thoughtful rationale.

Mastery of subject

The student did not show

a basic mastery of the

concepts.

The student showed a

limited mastery of the

concepts.

The student showed an

outstanding mastery of

the concepts.

Grammar

The student's responses

contained numerous

grammatical errors (i.e.,

comma splices,

fragments, run-ons, verb

formations).

The student's responses

contained a few

grammatical errors, but

they did not detract from

the reader's basic

comprehension.

The student's responses

contained no grammatical

errors or only a few minor

errors in punctuation and

spelling.

Total points

Evaluation

Activity: 6 Product: Questionnaire and rubric Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Organizes knowledge using

clues to find vocabulary in

context, to answer a

questionnaire, and to write a

paragraph.

Integrates knowledge about

“vocabulary in context” to answer

questions and to write a paragraph.

Shows openness to the feedback

given by his/her partner at the

same time that collaborates when

giving feedback to his/her

partner.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

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Tiempo asignado: 20 horas

Composition a correct English alignment.

Competencias profesionales:

1. Realiza comprensiones oral y auditiva de diversos tipos de texto en otro idioma.

2. Realiza comprensión escrita y de lectura de diversos tipos de texto en otro idioma.

3. Realiza expresión o producción oral en otro idioma.

4. Realiza interacción oral en otro idioma.

5. Realiza expresión o producción escrita de diversos tipos de texto en otro idioma.

Unidad de competencia:

Desarrolla su capacidad para organizar y expresar sus ideas con claridad y objetividad siguiendo los pasos y

las estructuras básicas de la composición.

Atributos a desarrollar en el bloque:

4.1. Expresa ideas y conceptos mediante representaciones lingüísticas, matemáticas o gráficas.

4.2. Aplica distintas estrategias comunicativas según quienes sean sus interlocutores, el contexto en el que

se encuentra y los objetivos que persigue.

4.3. Identifica las ideas claves en un texto o discurso oral e infiere conclusiones a partir de ellas.

4.4. Se comunica en una segunda lengua en situaciones cotidianas.

4.5. Maneja las tecnologías de la información y la comunicación para obtener información y expresar ideas.

6.4. Estructura ideas y argumentos de manera clara, coherente y sintética.

7.1. Define metas y da seguimiento a sus procesos de construcción de conocimiento.

8.2. Aporta puntos de vista con apertura y considera los de otras personas de manera reflexiva.

10.3. Asume que el respeto de las diferencias es el principio de integración y de convivencia en los contextos

local, nacional e internacional.

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Didactic Sequence 1.

Building effective sentences.

Startup Activity

Fill in the crossword puzzle with PARTS OF SPEECH. Use the same words to name the

italicized words in the sentences below.

Across

2. Replaces a noun.

4. Describes a noun.

7. Links a noun to another word.

Down

1. Short exclamation.

3. Join clauses, sentences or

words.

4. Describes a verb.

5. Actions or state.

6. Names places or things.

Parts of Speech Quiz

1. I'd like to thank you all for attending today's meeting.

____________________

2. Art lovers can visit the Metropolitan Museum of Art on the Upper Eastside next to Central Park.

_____________________

3. To experience the famous eccentric side of British life, make sure to visit Speakers' Corner in Hyde Park.

_____________________

4. Not only are London parks beautiful, but they may be one of the only places you can meet the British.

_____________________

5. Another choice might be playing a video game on the computer or TV screen.

_____________________

6. I often feel we've forgotten to communicate with our surroundings.

_____________________

7. I think we need to rethink how addicted we are becoming of being available for everyone and everything at all

times.

_____________________

8. Hey! - They might have become rich!

_____________________

Activity: 1

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Evaluation

Activity: 1 Product: Puzzle and questionnaire Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Conceptual Attitudinal

Procedimental Attitudinal

Recognizes parts of speech and

the structure of a sentence when

answering a questionnaire and

filling in a puzzle.

Applies his/her experience in the

use of parts of speech and

sentence structure in a puzzle and

in a questionnaire.

Shows openness to feedback

given by his/her teacher and

classmate.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Pair work. Check your partner’s answers following the results from the crossword puzzle.

Sentence 1 is number 7 from the crossword puzzle.

Sentence 2 is number 6 from the crossword puzzle.

Sentence 3 is number 4 across from the crossword puzzle.

Sentence 4 is number 3 from the crossword puzzle.

Sentence 5 is number 5 from the crossword puzzle.

Sentence 5 is number 5 from the crossword puzzle.

Sentence 6 is number 4 down from the crossword puzzle.

Sentence 7 is number 2 from the crossword puzzle.

Sentence 8 is number 1 from the crossword puzzle.

Activity 1b. Underline the appropriate response for each question. Then check your answers with your

teacher.

Activity: 1a

1. What is a phrase?

a. A group of words that start with a capital

letter and end with a full stop.

b. A group of words that could be replaced by

a single part of speech.

c. A group of words containing a verb, a noun

or pronoun.

2. Which of the following is always true of a

sentence?

a. It contains three or more phrases.

b. It contains more than one paragraph.

b. It ends with a full stop, a question mark or an

exclamation point.

3. Which of these is a requirement of a sentence?

a. It must have at least two verbs in it.

c. It must have a verb in it and it must make

complete sense all on its own.

d. It must not have a verb in it.

4. What is a clause?

a. A simple sentence.

b. A sentence without a verb.

c. A sentence with no adverbs or adjectives.

5. What can you use to join clauses together?

a. Consonants.

b. Conjunctions.

c. Junctions.

6. What can conjunctions be used for?

a. To make sentences shorter and

snappier.

b. To replace the verbs in a sentence.

c. To make your writing easier to read.

7. What is a statement?

a. A sentence that simply tells the reader

something.

b. Something said with force.

c. Something surprising or funny.

8. Where should you put a question mark?

a. At the beginning of a question.

b. At the end of a question.

c. At the end of a question or a funny

something.

9. What is a command?

a. Always ends with an exclamation mark.

b. Shows you are angry about something.

c. Tells someone to do something.

10. What is a paragraph?

a. A diagram drawn using coloured bars.

b. Four sentences collected together.

c. A collection of sentences about the

same thing.

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Development Activities

Building Sentences.

A sentence is an independent grammatical unit that contains a subject (that tells who or what the sentence is about)

and a predicate (that tells what the subject does or that links it to words that describes the subject) and expresses a

complete thought. Some English sentences are very basic:

Shakespeare was a writer.

Einstein said something.

It was a tragedy.

You could write an entire essay using only simple sentences like these:

William Shakespeare was a writer. He wrote plays. It was the Elizabethan age. One play was Hamlet. It was a tragedy.

Hamlet died. The court died too.

When you start writing essays, it is not likely, however, that your essay would receive a passing grade. This sequence

will help you learn to recognize different types of sentences and to use them effectively in your own writing.

The Simple sentence

A simple sentence has a subject as well as a predicate and both the subject and the predicate may have modifiers. All

of the following are simple sentences, because each contains only one clause:

Melt!

Ice melts.

The ice melts quickly.

The ice on the river melts quickly under the warm March sun.

Lying exposed without its blanket of snow, the ice on the river melts quickly under the warm March sun.

As you can see, a simple sentence can be quite long -- it is a mistake to think that you can tell a simple sentence from

a compound sentence or a complex sentence simply by its length. The most natural sentence structure is the simple

sentence: it is the first kind which children learn to speak, and it remains by far the most common sentence in the

spoken language of people of all ages. In written work, simple sentences can be very effective for grabbing a reader's

attention or for summing up an argument, but you have to use them with care: too many simple sentences can make

your writing seem childish. The Compound Sentence

A compound sentence.

A compound sentence consists of two or more independent clauses (or simple sentences) joined by coordinating

conjunctions like "and," "but," and "or":

Simple: Canada is a rich country.

Simple: Still, it has many poor people.

Compound: Canada is a rich country, but still it

has many poor people.

Compound sentences are very natural for English speakers -- small children learn to use them early on to connect their

ideas and to avoid pausing (and allowing an adult to interrupt):

Today at school Mr. Moore brought in his pet rabbit, and he showed it to the class, and I got to pet it, and Kate held it,

and we colored pictures of it, and it ate part of my carrot at lunch, and of course, this is an extreme example, but if you

over-use compound sentences in written work, your writing might seem immature.

And, but, yet, so, nor, and or are known as conjunctions, or

coordinating conjunctions. Like transitions, they link two or

more independent clauses. The punctuation before a

conjunction is always a comma, except with very simple,

brief ideas, in which case a comma is unnecessary.

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A compound sentence is most effective when you use it to create a sense of balance or contrast between two (or

more) equally-important pieces of information:

Montreal has better clubs, but Toronto has better cinemas.

Evaluation

Activity: 2 Product: Building sentences

exercises. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Defines simple and compound

sentences before using them

consciously.

Determines different types of

sentences and practice using them

effectively in exercises.

Shows a positive attitude when

learning anew topic and a sense

of initiative to learn.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Write in the blank whether the sentence is simple or compound.

Compound Assistance dogs offer disabled people companionship, but they also play a more

important role.

1. ____________ A trained dog’s help could make independent living possible for a disabled person.

2. ____________ Someone in a wheelchair can’t reach a light switch, and a deaf person can’t hear a smoke

alarm.

3. ____________ Dogs can help in many everyday situations.

4. ____________ Labrador retrievers open refrigerators, and Border collies nudge people awake.

5. ____________ Assistance dogs push elevator buttons and pick up telephones.

6. ____________ An assistance dog performs many duties, and these duties could change from one day to

the next.

7. ____________ Some dogs go to work or school, and others help with child care or housework.

8. ___________ One dog might signal the whistle of a teakettle or the beep of a microwave oven.

9. ___________ Assistance dogs serve as eyes, ears, legs, or arms; they empower those they help.

10. ___________ Many breeds become assistance dogs, but a few seem particularly well suited to the role.

Activity 2b. In the following exercises, turn the sentence pairs into single compound sentences, each

with a coordinating conjunction.

1. The black dog has won many prizes. He doesn't know many tricks.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

2. She saw a cat run in front of her. She fell down while roller-skating.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

3. There was a meteor shower. The crew did not know how to avoid the meteors.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

4. I wanted to buy a baby Chihuahua. I started to save my money.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

5. Gillian did not like to read. She was not very good at it.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

Activity: 2

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Special cases of compound sentences

There are two special types of compound sentences which you might want to note. First, rather than joining two simple

sentences together, a coordinating conjunction sometimes joins two complex sentences, or one simple sentence and

one complex sentence. In this case, the sentence is called a compound-complex sentence.

Example:

The package arrived in the morning, but the courier left before I could check the contents.

The second special case involves punctuation. It is possible to join two originally separate sentences into a compound

sentence using a semicolon instead of a coordinating conjunction:

Sir John A. Macdonald had a serious drinking problem; when sober, however, he could be a formidable

opponent in the House of Commons.

Usually, a conjunctive adverb like "however" or "consequently" will appear near the beginning of the second part, but it

is not required:

The sun rises in the east; it sets in the west.

A complex sentence contains one independent clause and at least one dependent clause. Unlike a compound

sentence, however, a complex sentence contains clauses which are not equal. Consider the following examples:

Simple: My friend invited me to a party. I do not want to go.

Compound: My friend invited me to a party, but I do not want to go.

Complex: Although my friend invited me to a party, I do not want to go.

In the first example, there are two separate simple sentences: "My friend invited me to a party" and "I do not want to

go." The second example joins them together into a single sentence with the coordinating conjunction "but," but both

parts could still stand as independent sentences -- they are entirely equal, and the reader cannot tell which is most

important. In the third example, however, the sentence has changed quite a bit: the first clause, "Although my friend

invited me to a party," has become incomplete, or a dependent clause.

A complex sentence is very different from a simple sentence or a compound sentence because it makes clear which

ideas are most important. When you write you write:

My friend invited me to a party. I do not want to go.

or even

My friend invited me to a party, but I do not want to go.

The reader will have trouble knowing which piece of information is most important to you. When you write the

subordinating conjunction "although" at the beginning of the first clause, however, you make it clear that the fact that

your friend invited you is less important than, or subordinate, to the fact that you do not want to go.

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Evaluation

Activity: 3 Product: Building sentences

exercises. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Classifies the different type of

sentences when he/she is

certain of identifying them in an

exercise.

Develops understanding of how

language works when she/he learns

the types of sentences.

Shows interest when acquiring

and applying new knowledge and

prepares for the stage of essay

writing.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Read the sentences, identify the type and circle the correct choice: simple sentence,

compound sentence, complex sentence, or a compound-complex sentence.

1. Ottawa is the capital of Canada,

but Toronto is the capital of

Ontario.

1. Simple Sentence.

2. Compound Sentence.

3. Complex Sentence.

4. Compound-Complex

Sentence.

2. Democracy is a noble goal; it is

important, however, to protect

the minority from the tyranny of

the majority.

1. Simple Sentence.

2. Compound Sentence.

3. Complex Sentence.

4. Compound-Complex

Sentence.

3. I do not own a Porsche.

1. Simple Sentence.

2. Compound Sentence.

3. Complex Sentence.

4. Compound-Complex

Sentence.

4. Call your father as soon as you

arrive in Antigonish.

1. Simple Sentence.

2. Compound Sentence.

3. Complex Sentence.

4. Compound-Complex

Sentence.

5. I ate the sushi and left the

restaurant.

1. Simple Sentence.

2. Compound Sentence.

3. Complex Sentence.

4. Compound-Complex

Sentence.

6. Unless my girlfriend postpones

her visit from Calgary, I will not

have time to study for my exam.

1. Simple Sentence.

2. Compound Sentence.

3. Complex Sentence.

4. Compound-Complex

Sentence.

7. Susanne wanted to be here, but

she cannot come because her

car is in the shop.

1. Simple Sentence.

2. Compound Sentence.

3. Complex Sentence.

4. Compound-Complex

Sentence.

8. The football game was cancelled

because it was raining.

1. Simple Sentence.

2. Compound Sentence.

3. Complex Sentence.

4. Compound-Complex

Sentence.

9. The football game was cancelled

because of the rain.

1. Simple Sentence.

2. Compound Sentence.

3. Complex Sentence.

4. Compound-Complex

Sentence.

10. When the train arrives and if Ms.

Langlois is on it, she will be

served with a subpoena.

1. Simple Sentence.

2. Compound Sentence.

3. Complex Sentence.

4. Compound-Complex

Sentence.

Activity: 3

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Evaluation

Activity: 4 Product: Graphic organizer. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Classifies information read

about sentence structure in a

graphic organizer.

Diagrams knowledge about

sentence structure in a graphic

organizer.

Integrates hi/her knowledge about

sentence structure in a graphic

organizer.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

According to what you have read about “Building Sentences” create a graphic organizer,

include all the information provided in the previous pages.

Activity: 4

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Identifying subject and verb.

A complete sentence needs a subject and a verb; we need to be able to recognize these sentences parts. Recognizing

subjects and verbs isn’t worth much in itself. But if you can do it, you will be able to deal later with some very real

problems in writing: sentences fragments, run-together sentences, lack of subject-verb, agreement, inconsistencies in

person and tense, and errors in punctuation, so give subject and verb your full attention.

The subject tells who or what the sentence is about. The subject is usually a noun or a pronoun. A complex subject is

the simple subject plus words that describe it. The underlined words in the following sentence answer the question

“who?” or “what?”

There are two kinds of verbs. Action verbs tell what the subject does (or did, or will do).

Linking verbs connect the subject to words that say something about the subject. One group of linking verbs contains

forms of the verb BE: am, are, is, was, were, been. Another group of linking verbs contains words such as these: seem,

appear, look, become, feel, taste, smell.

Simple Subject Complex Subject

Janice arrived early.

Tijuana is south of San Diego.

The third computer from the end of the row needs repair.

The intelligent students from Cobach are having exams.

Note: Computer and student are the simple subjects.

Action Verbs Linking Verbs

Geese fly south in the winter.

Janet’s brother attended UNAM university.

Camille was overjoyed at getting a job in Mexico City.

Mary Joe seems tired tonight.

Pair work. Write the subject and verb of each sentence in the appropriate column. Listen to

your teacher feedback and then, ask your partner to check your answers and write your

score.

Sentence Subject Verb

Subject

Correct?

Verb

Correct?

1. We waste energy in our daily

activities.

2. Fossil fuels are non-renewable.

3. The report describes the

advantages of solar power.

4. Australia depends on brown coal

for electricity production.

5. The focus is on the design of a low

energy house.

Total score /5

Activity: 5

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Evaluation

Activity: 5 Product: Identification of subject

and verbs exercises. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies subjects and verbs and

prepares to deal with writing

matters in the future.

Recognizes subjects and verbs and

practices by correcting the

inconsistencies in person and

tense.

Shows interest when acquiring

and applying new knowledge, as

well as showing a sense of

initiative to avoid future problems

in writing.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Pair work. Underline the subject in each sentence after you ask your partner and your

partner asks you: What is the sentence about? or Who is the sentence about?

1. The average person can see 93 million miles- when looking at

the sun.

2. Air conditioning was invented to control humidity, not

temperature.

3. George Ferris invented the Ferris wheel in 1893.

4. Jupiter, the largest planet, is three times bigger than Earth.

5. Less snow falls at the South Pole than in parts of the United

States.

Activity 5b. Underline the verbs. In the blanks, indicate whether they are action verbs or linking verbs.

1. Many birds eat twice their weight each day. _______________

2. Today’s blue whales are bigger than the biggest dinosaurs. _______________

3. Lobsters look red only after boiling. _______________

4. Dolphins and monkeys have better memories than elephants. _______________

5. Ants live on every continent except Antarctica. _______________

Activity 5c. Draw one line under the subject and two lines under the verb in each sentence.

1. French soldiers fought an odd battle in World War 1.

2. German soldiers threatened to cross the Marne River.

3. The river was only thirty miles from the French capital, Paris.

4. The French cause seemed lost.

5. The army needed reinforcements at the front immediately.

Activity: 5a

To remember

Every complete sentence

requires a subject.

The subject tells who or what the

sentence is about.

The subject usually appears at

the beginning of the sentence,

but it may appear elsewhere.

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Being Consistent

Read the following sentences and you will probably notice right away that there is

something wrong with each of them. (The underlined words will give you some clues.)

Discuss with your partners and teacher.

1. The waiter puts our hamburger on the counter and then returned to the kitchen.

2. When one drives into Yosemite Valley, you are overwhelmed by the magnificent scenery.

3. The president walked slowly to the lectern, carefully adjusted his glasses, and gave a nifty address on the

state of the nation.

Each of the sentences is inconsistent; each contains a confusing or annoying shift.

Sentence 1 shifts from the present time verb puts to the past time verb turned.

Sentence 2 shifts from the third-person pronoun one to the second person pronoun you.

Sentence 3 shifts from a formal tone or style to the casual style of nifty. (nifty=clever, ingenious).

Consistent Time (Tense)

Be consistent in your use of the time (tense) of verbs unless there is a good reason to shift. Sentence one could

have been written in either of these two ways:

The waiter puts our hamburger on the counter and then returns to the kitchen. (Both verbs are in present tense.)

The waiter put our hamburger on the counter and then returned to the kitchen. (Both verbs are in past tense.)

Sometimes a shift in time is necessary:

Charles remembers [present time] that her partners owned [past time] a ranch in Guaymas when he was [past

time] a little boy.

Activity 6a. Make the second verb in each sentence consistent in time with the first. Find the verb and

write the correct form above it.

opened

Example: Ana Gabriela was an outstanding athlete who opens the door for other athlete girls from Sonora.

1. Fernando Valenzuela was born on November 1, 1960 in Etchohuaquila,

Sonora. He is a Mexican professional baseball player whose career span 17

seasons in the major leagues of the United States.

2. Fernando Valenzuela joined the Dodgers in the summer of 1979 and

becomes the first Mexican pitcher in modern major league baseball.

3. Valenzuela became the only player in Major League history who win the

Rookie of the Year award.

4. In 1981, the 20-year-old Valenzuela took Los Angeles (and Major League

Baseball) by storm, he win his first 8 decisions and lead the Dodgers to the

World Championship.

5. Valenzuela was a Dodgers support throughout the 1980s, he win 21 games

in 1986 and pitched a no-hitter in 1990.

Activity: 6

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Evaluation

Activity: 6 Product: Edited paragraphs. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Revises the paragraphs and

corrects the verbs so they can

be consistent in time with other

verbs.

Writes the correct tense of the

verbs so that they can be

consistent in time with other verbs.

Shows interest when acquiring

and applying new knowledge, as

well as showing a sense of

initiative to avoid future problems

in writing.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Pair Work. Check the six sentences with your partner and rewrite them, write all the verbs

in past time or past tense.

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2. ______________________________________________________________________________________________

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3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________

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4. ______________________________________________________________________________________________

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5. ______________________________________________________________________________________________

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6. ______________________________________________________________________________________________

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Activity 6c. Cross out any verbs that are inconsistent and write in the correct past time forms above.

The first tinted glasses were not intended to protect eyes from the sun.

Darkened with smoke, the glasses are worn by judges in China in the fifteenth

century. The idea was to conceal the judge’s eyes so that witness couldn’t tell

if the judge thinks they are lying. The earliest dark glasses were not vision-

corrected, but by around 1430 judges are taking advantage of the factor too.

Outside the courts, others start wearing tinted glasses to reduce glare from the

sun. In America, the military played a major role in the development of

sunglasses. In the 1930’s, the Army Air Force commissions Bausch & Lomb to

develop glasses to protect pilots from high-altitude glare. The resulting dark-

green glasses became available to the public as Ray-Ban aviator glasses.

Activity: 6b

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Consistent Person

A pronoun is said to be in the first, second, or third person. It depends on whether the pronoun

refers to the person speaking, the person spoken to, or the person spoken about.

Singular Plural

First person I, me, my, mine We, us, our, ours

Second person You, your, yours You, you, yours

Third person

He, him, his

She, her, hers

It, its

They, them, their, theirs

Remember that third person also includes the names of persons, places, and things and indefinite pronouns like

one, everyone, anybody. Let’s revise our above examples.

(Wrong) When one drives into Yosemite Valley, you are overwhelmed by the magnificent scenery.

(Consistent) When one drives into Yosemite Valley, one is overwhelmed by the magnificent scenery.

Watch out especially for the most common shift-- from the first-or third-person pronoun to the second-person you,

as in the last example.

Activity 7a. Correct the statements by crossing out incorrect pronouns and writing the correct words

above. Also change verbs when necessary.

I get I see

Example: I used to think Lola was perfect, but as one gets to know her, one sees she has a few faults.

1. When students are late for class, you often interrupt the activities there.

2. If motorists drive defensively, you can avoid many problems.

3. Pierre writes his parents every week, which is a thoughtful thing for you to do.

4. When you do the homework, students should be able to pass this class.

5. When an employee gets a promotion, you feel proud.

Activity 7b. Rewrite each sentence to get rid of the inappropriate YOU. Make the sentences as short as

you can without leaving out information. Ask your teacher for help if needed.

1. You don’t need a ticket to attend the “Caifanes” Concert._____________________________________________

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2. After eating at Charlie and Marco’s Restaurant, you feel you got your money’s worth. _____________________

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3. You can imagine how glad I was to see Pablo again. ________________________________________________

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4. Foreign travel helps you understand your own country._______________________________________________

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5. If your drove 55 miles an hour, it would take you 193 years to travel the 93 million miles to reach the sun.____

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Activity: 7

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Evaluation

Activity: 7 Product: Exercises on the use of

consistent person. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Recognizes inconsistencies in

person in sentences and change

the verbs to make them agree

with any new subjects.

Uses the same person or personal

pronoun throughout a sentence or

paragraph to avoid inconsistencies

in person.

Shows interest when acquiring

and applying new knowledge and

when avoiding inconsistencies in

person in the exercises.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

}

Correct any inconsistencies of person in these sentences. If necessary, change the verbs

to make them agree with any new subjects. Make your corrections above the lines.

his or her

Example: Each hiker should bring your own lunch.

1. Jane treats me like family when I visit her. She always makes you feel at home.

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2. A student has to show their identification card in order to borrow books from library.

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3. The first person at the counter gets their order filled quickly.

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4. I love to go dancing. You can exercise, work off tensions, and have fun all at the same time.

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5. If a person has lived in a city, you may find the country too quiet.

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6. The cast members have discovered that you have to work together to prepare for the performance.

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7. A person with high blood pressure should watch their diet.

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8. When Lee and I ride our bikes to work at 6 A.M., you can see the city waking up.

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9. Every mechanic should make sure they have a good set of tools.

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10. I gave birth to my daughter when I was only seventeen. At that age, you are still a child yourself.

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Activity: 7c

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Read and discuss in class.

Consistent Tone

In your future you will usually have a literally serious or formal tone. You will want to avoid slipping into overly

casual and slangy language. Such shifts in tone are jarring to the reader, as is the case in our original example.

(Wrong) The president walked slowly to the lectern, carefully adjusted his glasses, and gave a nifty address on

the state of the nation.

(Consistent) The president walked slowly to the lectern, carefully adjusted his glasses, and delivered a stirring

address on the state of the nation.

You are going to learn more about idioms and slang in your “Communicative Oral

Abilities” course.

If you are writing an e-mail, a note, a message, or a letter to a friend, of course you can

be as informal as you like.

Example: Are you coming tonight? = rucmng nyt? Or Are you ok? = RUOK

But in a paragraph, maintaining a consistent tone is generally a good thing. Readers appreciate when the tone of

a paragraph is generally continuous and maintain a formal tone. When the tone of the paragraph is changed mid-

way through the paragraph, the reader may not appreciate the change (additionally, such a change may lead to

some confusing perspective on the topic/subject). Therefore, we advise that you maintain the same tone

throughout a paragraph.

Activity 8a. Rewrite the statements and change the italicized words using the fairly formal tone from the

box. Then check with your teacher.

Example: The United States must maintain alliances in the Middle East if it wants to stay in the ball game there.

The United States must maintain alliances in the Middle East if it wants to protect its interest there.

danced – dollars – exciting – attractive – mistaken

1. Anyone who thinks America schools will ever operate all year round is full of beans.

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2. This year’s top student is not only intelligent, she is a foxy chick.

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3. The orchestra gave a neat performance of a Beethoven symphony.

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4. The member of the Downtown Elite Association boogied until midnight after installing new officers.

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5. Mr. Alberts was pleased to receive a raise of fifty bucks a week.

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Evaluation

Activity: 8 Product: Written formal tone

statement and paragraph. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Recognizes that there is a

difference between formal and

informal tone when writing.

Applies the necessary strategies to

shift the tone from informal to

formal in written statements and

paragraph.

Appreciates information about

being consistent in tone, for

further use of writing activities.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Rewrite the paragraph in order to place it in the formal and “Consistent Tone.”

Our skin is the largest organ in our bodies. Neat, huh? Therefore, I think that good skin care is crucial. However,

skin care can be problematic for many people. Whether you live in a dry climate or a humid climate, you may

have to use or avoid skin care products with moisturizers. Moisturizers are a great way of adding much needed

tone and moisture to your skin. Your skin is like a sponge. When the sponge goes dry, the sponge hardens and

begins to decay. You’ll look like a zombie without a good moisturizer. Without a good moisturizer, my skin

becomes dry, and dryness can cause irritation. A dry climate can necessitate using moisturizers. However, you

must be cautious of moisturizing products with abrasive agents, which can damage your skin. Some moisturizing

products which contain microscopic abrasives can seriously damage the skin upon contact. Finally, oily products

may not be good in either climate. Who wants to have oily skin? Yuck! Skin care products do not need to be oily

or greasy to moisturize the skin.

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Activity: 8b

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Closing Activities

Evaluation

Activity: 9 Product: Building sentences

exercises table and sentences. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Classifies information to fill in a

“simple and incomplete

sentence table”.

Applies information about simple

sentences and practice the shift in

tone from informal to formal writing.

Appreciates information about

being consistent in time, person

and tone, for further use of writing

activities.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Pair work. Do the following sentences express a complete idea? Are they simple

sentences? Are they incomplete and therefore not simple sentences? Check if the

sentences are simple or incomplete, and then ask your partner to check them after your

teacher’s feedback, write your score.

Sentence Simple or incomplete? Correct?

1. A barometer measures air pressure. simple incomplete

2. Because of the rising temperatures. simple incomplete

3. Consumption rates rise significantly every year. simple incomplete

4. And weight as well. simple incomplete

5. Will be assumed. simple incomplete

Total score /5

Activity 9a. Find out and circle the word causing the shift in time, person, or tone and write the correct

or appropriate word in the blank at the right.

Example: The car sped around the corner and crashes into an ambulance. Crashed

1. I work out in the gym three times a week; you feel much better as a result. _____________

2. Whenever Camille has a conversation with Mary Joe, she gets angry. _____________

3. When you visited Kino Bay, do you see “Isla del Tiburon”? _____________

4. People should say “excuse me” when you stem in front of someone. _____________

5. Frederick said the writings of Benedetti are awesome. _____________

6. Adrian wore his new threads to the dance. _____________

7. As we arrived at the camp, you could see the sunset reflected in the lake. _____________

8. I never have trouble finishing my homework; the first thing you do is turn off the TV. _____________

Activity: 9

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Evaluation

Activity: 10 Product: Edited paragraph. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Writes the correct verb tense,

pronoun and changes words

from informal to formal tone.

Builds necessary skills for editing

paragraphs, when correcting errors

in time, person, and tone.

Appreciates information about

being consistent in tone, for

further use of writing activities.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Edit the paragraph to correct the underlined errors in time, person, and tone. The first

sentence has been done as an example. Then rewrite the paragraph and check with your

teacher.

Anyone who

1 If someone likes potato chips you should thank Thomas Jefferson and George Crum. 2 Jefferson, the future

president, introduced French fries potatoes after he learns to like them while serving as ambassador to France.

3 The salted, thin –sliced chips so popular today got in gear because of a dispute between a chef and a

customer. 4 It happened in 1853 while Chef George Crum is employed at a fancy resort in Saratoga, New York,

where he fried potatoes in the thick-cut French style. 5 A diner sent his French fries back to the kitchen because

they were too thick and jucky. 6 If anyone has worked in a restaurant you know how difficult some customers can

be. 7 Crum keeps cutting the potatoes thinner, and the diner kept sending them back. 8 Finally the angry Crum

slices the spuds so thin they are almost like strips of paper. 9 The diner is delighted with the potatoes; other

customers request them, and the restaurant become famous for its “Saratoga Chips.” 10 So when people sit

down in front of the television set with a bag of chips in hand, you should say thanks to Thomas Jefferson and

George Crum (and to Crum’s customer).

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Activity: 10

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Didactic Sequence 2.

Writing an essay.

Start up Activity

Evaluation

Activity: 1 Product: Paragraph and essay

quizzes. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Recognizes parts of the

paragraph and identifies

vocabulary for the essay

process.

Applies his/her knowledge about

the organization of paragraph and

essay writing.

Shows interest when applying

previous knowledge about

organization of paragraphs and

essay writing.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

How much do you remember about Paragraph writing? Choose and underline the

appropriate response.

1. A paragraph should cover how many topics?

a. Two to three.

b. Five or six.

c. One.

2. There are many different types of paragraphs.

a. True.

b. False.

3. Which of the following would be the best topic?

a. Blue is my favorite color.

b. War can lead to many deaths.

c. The patriot Act was a wise executive decision.

4. Transitions are used

a. Between subject and verbs

b. To relate two sentences

c. As little as possible

5. A narrative paragraph.

a. Tells a story.

b. Gives a critique.

c. Classifies objects.

6. The topic of the paragraph should…

a. Be broad and general.

b. Always be about science.

c. Be something the writer is interested in.

How much do you know about ESSAYS? Choose and write the correct word from the box.

First - Similar - Body - Longer - Title

1. Body paragraphs should be of _____________________length.

2. Each __________________paragraph should begin with a topic sentence and end with a

concluding sentence.

3. Restate your thesis statement in the ___________________ sentence of the conclusion

paragraph.

4. The body paragraphs are _____________________ than the introduction and conclusion

paragraphs.

5. Your essay must have a _______________________.

Activity: 1

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Development Activities

Read information about the process of writing an essay and discuss it in class.

Writing an Essay

Until now we have concentrated on writing paragraphs, like we did in the last semester. It is time to begin the

larger challenge of writing the essay. If you have been having success with paragraphs, you shouldn’t have much

trouble with the essay. A paragraph is a brief development of one idea (remember the metaphor of the

hamburger). An essay is a longer development of one idea or subject. You have been urged to use a topic

sentence to express the main idea of each paragraph. You now are urged to use a thesis sentence to express the

main idea of the entire essay. An essay is sometimes called a thesis.

Let’s look at how the paragraphs are put together in a typical essay.

Introduction Introductory paragraph Thesis Sentence

Body

First body paragraph

Second body paragraph

Third body paragraph

Topic sentence

Topic sentence

Topic sentence

Support

Support

Support

Conclusion Concluding paragraph Conclusion

Not every essay is organized just the way the one you’re going to read on the next page. An essay might have as

few as two paragraphs to support the thesis—or many paragraphs. Essays written by professionals often do not

contain a written –out thesis sentences; the thesis is only implied. But all essays will have a thesis—a central point

the writer wishes to make.

Why a thesis sentence? Using a thesis sentence forces a writer to decide ahead of time just what point is to be

made .Remember that we learned in a previous sequence that: The point is the main idea that a person is making.

It helps the writer stay on track once the writing begins. On a smaller scale, the topic sentence offers the same

kind of help in writing the paragraph.

Some writers (and teachers) like an essay to start with a thesis sentence that outlines the entire essay. The thesis

also can appear at the middle or at the end of a paragraph. The essay “Watching TV” has its thesis sentence at

the middle.

Whatever method you use, it is important that you know before you start writing just what it is that you want to say.

The prewriting stage prepares your ideas for your essay before you begin writing. One or more of the prewriting

techniques should be helpful:

1. Think carefully about what you are going to write.

2. Collect facts related to your paragraph or essay topic.

3. Write down your own ideas.

4. Find the main idea of your paragraph or essay. Choose the most important point you are going to

present.

5. Organize your facts and ideas in a way that develops your main idea.

Activity: 2

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Read this model Essay from “My ESL Lab” written by a non-native speaker of English

Student.

Watching TV

Introduction

Watching television is an experience shared by most adults and children. It is cheap,

appealing, and within the reach of the general public. In this way, TV has become an

important mass media around the world. Sadly, this resource isn’t used in a way that

people could get the best possible benefits from it. The purpose of this essay is to

persuade the reader that people shouldn’t watch too much television because the

content of many TV programs is not educational; it makes people waste time that could

be used in more beneficial activities; and it negatively affects people’s mental

development.

Body

The first reason why people shouldn’t watch too much television is because the content

of many TV programs is not educational. Nowadays, we can watch movies, series, and

shows that present scenes of violence, sex, and drugs. This has established wrong

concepts among the audience that influence them into having a negative behavior.

Moreover, the impact this tendency has on children is worse because they grow up with

the idea of a world where women must be slender and blonde to stand out, where

problems can only be solved with money and violence, and where wars are inevitable.

The second reason why people shouldn’t watch too much television is because it makes

people waste time that could be used in more beneficial activities. The time we spend

watching TV could be applied to useful activities like exercise, reading, interacting with

friends and family, activities that are a crucial for a healthy lifestyle.

The third reason why people shouldn’t watch too much television is because it negatively

affects people’s mental development. According to several scientific studies, watching

TV for prolonged periods of time has a negative effect over the intellectual development

of children and leads to deterioration of the mental capacity in older people by causing

both attention and memory problems in the long term.

Conclusion

In conclusion, people shouldn’t watch too much television because the content of many

TV programs is not educational; it makes people waste time that could be used in more

beneficial activities; and it affects people’s mental development. However, this doesn’t

mean that we should ban TV, but if we are going to watch it, we should do it with

moderation. Television is a resource that we should learn to use through the right

selection of programs by taking an active and critical attitude towards it.

Thesis Sentence People shouldn’t watch too much television.

(The purpose of the next three paragraphs in the body is to support or show the truth of the thesis sentence.)

1st

Support topic sentence: This has established wrong concepts among the audience that influence them into

having a negative behavior.

2nd

Support topic sentence: It makes people waste time that could be used in more beneficial activities.

3rd

Support Topic sentence: It negatively affects people’s mental development.

Conclusion: If we are going to watch it, we should do it with moderation.

Activity: 2 (continuation)

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Read more about the parts of an essay and discuss in class.

Activity: 2 (continuation)

The essay introduction is where you will first

introduce your topic. It should begin with

an eye-catching opening statement,

something that will make people want to

read on. Then, a good introduction will go

on to explore the topic, offering brief and

general statements about it. The

introduction should serve to introduce the

reader to the topic, without giving him too

much information. In here is where the

Thesis Statement is. This is the overall

statement that sums up what will be argued

in the paper. By definition, the thesis

should be something that can be debated.

The body paragraphs offer different pieces

of evidence that support the thesis

statement. Each piece of evidence is given

its own paragraph in the body, and all of

them in the aggregate will help to support

the essay’s thesis statement. The body

paragraphs should start with a topic

sentence, which is essentially a mini-thesis

statement for that paragraph. In addition,

there are usually 1-2 body paragraphs that

explore evidence opposing the thesis

statement, in order to address this

evidence and prove why it is wrong.

The conclusion sums up the paper, and

ties up any loose ends. A good conclusion

usually opens with a restating of the thesis

statement, reminding the reader what was

supposed to be argued in the paper. Then

the conclusion should feature some of the

main points from the body paragraphs.

Although the conclusion is a way to sum up

the various ideas presented in the paper, it

should not copy directly from it. Restate or

reword things in order to avoid sounding

redundant. The conclusion will generally

end by explaining why the argument is

important, and wrapping up any loose

ends.

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Watch the video on the site: http://www.wikihow.com/Write-an-Essay

Then with the information you have, draw a graphic organizer about the process of writing

an ESSAY. After your partner checks you the work, present the graphic organizer to the

class.

Activity: 2 (continuation)

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Pair Work. Using the following criteria, choose the appropriate number from the following scale to check

your partner’s graphic organizer.

1 = Weak 2 = Moderately Weak 3 = Average 4 = Moderately Strong 5 = Strong

1. The graphic organizer has an appropriate title and labels.

2. The graphic organizer’s lines, boxes, and text are neat and legible.

3. The information in the graphic organizer is accurate.

4. The spelling, grammar, and punctuation of the text on the graphic organizer are accurate.

5. The graphic organizer presents the information in a manner that is easy to follow.

6. The relationships presented in the graphic organizer are correct and clear.

7. The form in which the graphic organizer portrays the information is appropriate to the relationships

being represented.

8. The graphic organizer demonstrates an understanding of the topic, its relationships and related

concepts.

9. The graphic organizer fulfills all the requirements of the assignment.

10. Overall, the graphic organizer represents the student’s full potential.

Total Points

Evaluation

Activity: 2 Product: A graphic organizer. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Integrates his/her knowledge of

“Essay writing Process” in a

graphic organizer.

Diagrams the “Essay Writing

Process” in a graphic organizer.

Shows ability and interest when

he/she integrates knowledge to

diagram a graphic organizer.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

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Model of an Essay: Examine the essay from “My ESL Lab” written by non-native speaker of

English Student. Write a title and then fill in the information below.

In the past, I have never been inclined to participate in sports. Honestly, I didn’t like it, but many people whom I

lived with kept telling me every day how good it was. Since the peer pressure was growing, I decided to go to the

gym. It wasn’t until then that I could really understand people when they said exercise really helped a person get

organized and keep yourself in a healthy physically and mentally.

For starters, when you are a lazy person, it is difficult to take the first step, but it is all a matter of committing

yourself to something that will provide you a lot of positive feedback. Once you start doing exercise and observing

positive results, you actually enjoy it. It takes a lot of effort and strong will, but it's worth it. The principal thing to do

is to participate in an activity you like. If you do you’ll start organizing your day in a way that enables you to do

everything you have to, including exercising. You will no longer be a person stressed-out without time to carry on

with all your activities.

Second, it is obvious that once you exercise you will have a better condition. You will be healthier in a physical

way. It is probable that you will lose weight and your muscles will get stronger and stronger. Your body will feel

good, full of energy and it will respond immediately to any action you want to do, any activity that has to be done

with high spirits.

The third reason why exercising is good is that it affects you positively in a mental and psychological way. Doing

exercise helps you set specific goals which along with strong will can be achieved. When you do that, you are

aware of your abilities, accept your weaknesses, and your self-esteem goes up. Any sport distracts you because

it helps you not to think about school, friends, problems, among other things. It brings you time to think about

yourself and no one else. It helps you keep your mind busy and to avoid dangerous habits like drugs.

Doing exercise is very important to any person of any age. The positive effects of exercising, which I’ve already

mentioned, are like a chain. Once you do a sports activity that you like, you get organized; therefore, you start

doing things the right way and get enormous benefits which make you feel good as a whole human being. You

start living your life happily.

Thesis Sentence: __________________________________________________________________________________

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The three paragraphs in the body support the thesis sentence.

1st

Support topic sentence: __________________________________________________________________________

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2nd

Support topic sentence: _________________________________________________________________________

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3rd

Support Topic sentence: _________________________________________________________________________

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Conclusion: _______________________________________________________________________________________

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Activity: 3

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Evaluation

Activity: 3 Product: Essay examination. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies the various stages of

the “Essay writing process”

especially thesis or main point.

Determines the thesis or main point

of an essay, as well as identifies

various stages of the process.

Shows ability and positive attitude

when learning about the

composition and parts of an

essay.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

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BLOCK 2

Write an essay with at least two or three paragraphs of development on one of the

following subjects:

1. What I like (dislike) about being a teenager.

2. Two or three things I would hate to do without.

3. About social-networks.

4. A topic of your interest.

Write a sentence outline of the essay.

1. First support –topic sentence

2. Thesis Sentence

3. Second support -Topic sentence

4. Third support-topic sentence

5. Conclusion

Develop each support paragraph with three to five sentences, using interesting and convincing details.

Central a title on the top line of the first page.

While revising the paper, look especially for punctuation errors and those problems marked on recent

papers.

Proofread the final draft by correcting errors such as spelling and punctuation.

Activity: 4

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Evaluation

Activity: 4 Product: An essay. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Integrates introduction, body

paragraph(s) and a conclusion

in an essay.

Writes with appropriate organization

including introduction, body

paragraph(s) and a conclusion in an

essay.

Shows interest when having to

use the ability of writing on a free

subject.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Write your essay here.

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Pair work. One of the most effective ways to improve our own writing is to spend time

reading the best writing of others. Read a talk given by the Novelist Mark Twain, the author

of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer (1876) is one of America's great humorists and social

critic. He delivered the talk to a group of youngsters. Take turn to read and discuss the

text with your partner.

1. What I like (dislike) about being a teenager.

2. Two or three things I would hate to do without.

3. About social-networks.

4. A topic of your interest.

ADVICE TO YOUTH

by Mark Twain (1835-1910)

Being told I would be expected to talk here, I inquired what sort of talk I ought to make. They

said it should be something suitable to youth—something didactic, instructive, or something

in the nature of good advice. Very well. I have a few things in my mind which I have often

longed to say for the instruction of the young; for it is in one’s tender early years that such

things will best take root and be most enduring and most valuable. First, then. I will say to

you my young friends—and I say it beseechingly, urgingly—

Always obey your parents, when they are present. This is the best policy in the long run, because if you don’t, they

will make you. Most parents think they know better than you do, and you can generally make more by humoring

that superstition than you can by acting on your own better judgment.

Be respectful to your superiors, if you have any, also to strangers, and sometimes to others. If a person offends

you and you are in doubt as to whether it was intentional or not, do not resort to extreme measures; simply watch

your chance and hit him with a brick. That will be sufficient. If you shall find that he had not intended any offense,

come out frankly and confess yourself in the wrong when you struck him; acknowledge it like a man and say you

didn’t mean to. Yes, always avoid violence; in this age of charity and kindliness, the time has gone by for such

things. Leave dynamite to the low and unrefined.

Go to bed early, get up early—this is wise. Some authorities say get up with the sun; some say get up with one

thing, others with another. But a lark is really the best thing to get up with. It gives you a splendid reputation with

everybody to know that you get up with the lark; and if you get the right kind of lark, and work at him right, you can

easily train him to get up at half past nine, every time—it’s no trick at all.

Now as to the matter of lying, you want to be very careful about lying; otherwise you are nearly sure to get caught.

Once caught, you can never again be in the eyes to the good and the pure, what you were before. Many a young

person has injured himself permanently through a single clumsy and ill finished lie, the result of carelessness born

of incomplete training. Some authorities hold that the young ought not to lie at all. That of course, is putting it

rather stronger than necessary; still while I cannot go quite so far as that, I do maintain, and I believe I am right,

that the young ought to be temperate in the use of this great art until practice and experience shall give them that

confidence, elegance, and precision which alone can make the accomplishment graceful and profitable.

Patience, diligence, painstaking attention to detail—these are requirements; these in time, will make the student

perfect; upon these only, may he rely as the sure foundation for future eminence. . Think what tedious years of

study, thought, practice, experience, went to the equipment of that peerless old master who was able to impose

upon the whole world the lofty and sounding maxim that “Truth is mighty and will prevail”—the most majestic

compound fracture of fact which any of woman born has yet achieved. For the history of our race, and each

individual’s experience, are sewn thick with evidences that a truth is not hard to kill, and that a lie well told is

immortal. There is in Boston a monument of the man who discovered anesthesia; many people are aware, in

these latter days, that that man didn’t discover it at all, but stole the discovery from another man.

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Is this truth mighty, and will it prevails? Ah no, my hearers, the monument is made of hardy

material, but the lie it tells will outlast it a million years. An awkward, feeble, leaky lie is a thing which

you ought to make it your unceasing study to avoid; such a lie as that has no more real

permanence than an average truth. Why, you might as well tell the truth at once and be done with

it. A feeble, stupid, preposterous lie will not live two years—except it be a slander upon somebody.

It is indestructible, then of course, but that is no merit of yours. A final word: begin your practice of

this gracious and beautiful art early—begin now. If I had begun earlier, I could have learned how.

Never handle firearms carelessly. The sorrow and suffering that have been caused through the innocent but

heedless handling of firearms by the young! Only four days ago, right in the next farm house to the one where I

am spending the summer, a grandmother, old and gray and sweet, one of the loveliest spirits in the land, was

sitting at her work, when her young grandson crept in and got down an old, battered, rusty gun which had not

been touched for many years and was supposed not to be loaded, and pointed it at her, laughing and threatening

to shoot. In her fright she ran screaming and pleading toward the door on the other side of the room; but as she

passed him he placed the gun almost against her very breast and pulled the trigger! He had supposed it was not

loaded. And he was right—it wasn’t. So there wasn’t any harm done. It is the only case of that kind I ever heard of.

Therefore, just the same, don’t you meddle with old unloaded firearms; they are the most deadly and unerring

things that have ever been created by man. You don’t have to take any pains at all with them; you don’t have to

have a rest, you don’t have to have any sights on the gun, you don’t have to take aim, even. No, you just pick out

a relative and bang away, and you are sure to get him. A youth who can’t hit a cathedral at thirty yards with a

Gatling gun in three quarters of an hour, can take up an old empty musket and bag his grandmother every time,

at a hundred. Think what Waterloo would have been if one of the armies had been boys armed with old muskets

supposed not to be loaded, and the other army had been composed of their female relations. The very thought of

it make one shuddergger!

There are many sorts of books; but good ones are the sort for the young to read. Remember that. They are a

great, an inestimable and unspeakable means of improvement. Therefore be careful in your selection, my young

friends; be very careful; confine yourselves exclusively to Robertson’s Sermons, Baxter’s Saint’s Rest, The

Innocents Abroad, and works of that kind.

But I have said enough. I hope you will treasure up the instructions which I have given you, and make them a

guide to your feet and a light to your understanding. Build your character thoughtfully and painstakingly upon

these precepts, and by and by, when you have got it built, you will be surprised and gratified to see how nicely

and sharply it resembles everybody else’s.

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Evaluation

Activity: 5 Product: Reading comprehension

activities. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies key elements and

condenses important

information into their own words

to answer questions.

Uses knowledge before, during,

and after reading to clarify

misconceptions and to understand

the text.

Enjoys reading the talk of an

America's great humorists

delivered to a group of young

people.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Read Mark Twain’s text paragraph by paragraph and choose the best answer.

Activity 5b. Write information and answer questions.

Write the “Thesis Sentence” _________________________________________________________________________

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Did you like the reading? ____________________________________________________________________________

Do you think the advices don’t resemble to modern times? _______________________________________________

Activity: 5a

From paragraph 1 to 3.

1. The "superstition" is that

A. Parents make you obey.

B. You should act on your own better

judgment.

C. You should obey your parents.

D. Parents know best.

2. Twain is not convinced that

A. You shouldn't avoid violence.

B. A brick is of no use.

C. You have any superiors.

D. That you shouldn't use dynamite.

3. "Extreme measures" include

A. Hitting with a brick.

B. The use of dynamite.

C. An offense.

D. A confession.

4. The Latin origin of frank (as in frankly) referred

to

A. The Franks, a Germanic people.

B. A banking family.

C. Italian aristocrats.

D. English writers.

From paragraph 4 to 8.

5. In paragraph 4 the word lark means:

A. Trick.

B. A person that gets up early.

C. Laugh.

D. A person that gets up late.

6. “You can never again be in the eyes to the

good and the pure”, means:

A. You are not going to be trustworthy.

B. You are going to be honorable.

C. You are going to be elegant.

D. You are not going to be known.

7. What did the grandson do to the old and

sweet grandmother?

A. Killed her.

B. Frighten her.

C. Pulled the trigger.

D. Honored her.

8. What did the writer mean when he wrote:” I

hope you will treasure up the instructions

which I have given you. ”

A. To treasure all the gold.

B. To follow the advice and be thoughtful.

C. To bright the lives of others.

D. To guide the steps.

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Read “ADVICE TO YOUTH” carefully, look for the topic sentence of each paragraph and

based on the topics write your point of view in a five paragraph essay (You may write it

here or write on a separate paper).

My opinion on Mark Twain’s ADVICE TO YOUTH

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Ask a partner to use the rubric to check your essay.

Criteria 4 pts 3 pts 2 pts 1 pts

Purpose/Task

Accomplishes the task;

includes many details

that are clearly connected

to the development of the

task, but there may be

minor irrelevancies.

Accomplishes the

task; includes some

details that are

generally connected

to the development of

the task, but there

may be some

irrelevancies.

Accomplishes the

task; includes few

details, some of which

may be only loosely

connected to the task.

There are many

irrelevancies.

Attempts to

accomplish the task;

makes some reference

to it but provides few

or no supporting

details.

Organization

Exhibits a logical and

coherent sequence

throughout; provides a

clear sense of a

beginning, middle, and

end. Makes smooth

transitions between

ideas.

Exhibits a logical

sequence; provides a

beginning, middle,

and end.

Attempts to provide a

logical sequence

and/or the beginning

or ending is abrupt or

unclear.

Exhibits little order;

provides a series of

separate sentences

and/or disconnected

ideas.

Vocabulary

Includes a wide variety of

vocabulary that expands

the topic, but there may

be minor inaccuracies.

Includes a variety of

vocabulary related to

the topic.

Includes basic

vocabulary; some

vocabulary may be

inaccurate or

unrelated to the topic.

Includes limited

vocabulary and/or

most vocabulary is

inaccurate or unrelated

to the topic.

Structure/

Grammar

Demonstrates a high

control of

structure/grammar:

correct subject-verb

agreement, correct tense,

correct noun-adjective

agreement, correct word

order, and correct

spelling.

Demonstrates some

control of

structure/grammar:

correct subject-verb

agreement, correct

tense, correct noun-

adjective agreement,

correct word order,

and correct spelling.

Demonstrates some

control of

structure/grammar,

but errors due hinder

overall

comprehensibility. Or

writing is below

achievement level.

(Errors 12-17)

Demonstrates little

control of

structure/grammar.

Errors impede overall

comprehensibility of

passage. (Errors 18+)

Evaluation

Activity: 6 Product: An essay and a rubric. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Orders details to be connected

to the development of the essay

and to write his/her own point of

view.

Practices the skill of writing by

ordering details that connects to

the development of the essay.

Appreciates the message sent by

the writer and shows openness to

feedback given by a classmate.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

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Read and discuss in class.

Types of Essays

There are many different types of essays and each type has a different purpose. We are going to study three of

the most common types of essays: Persuasive, Narrative, and Descriptive.

Persuasive Essay. We’ve already studied persuasive paragraphs, as in persuasive writing, we try to convince

others to agree with our facts, share our values, and accept your arguments and conclusions. Let’s say you want

to write a paper showing that grades in college should be eliminated. The Mark Twain’s text that you’ve just read

is an example of persuasive essay because he shares values with a group of youngster. Here are some

techniques of persuasion you might use:

1. Cite facts or statistics on student health problems or suicides blamed on grade worries.

2. Quote expert authorities who argue that grades inspire negative competition rather than positive

cooperation.

3. Give examples from history showing that students have not always been graded.

4. Offer current examples of institutions that don’t assign grades.

5. Present a narrative (anecdote) about a rich and famous inventor who flunked out of university.

6. Give a description of a classroom full of students agonizing over an exam.

7. Describe a personal experience—the time you got a rash over a “60” in algebra.

Here you are going to read a sample of “Persuasive Essay on Law:

On Acceptability of Capital Punishment.

The proponents of capital punishment often say that it was a natural part of human society for thousands of years

and only recently there appeared the idea that it is something unacceptable, horrible and immoral. Well, the same

goes for slavery and human sacrifices, but nobody seems to be very eager to have them back.

The problem with the death penalty is not simply that of moral. It is the problem of law and logic. The state people

live in had been created for the sole purpose of protecting their lives and property from any aggression, both inner

and outer. The state has legal right to apply force in order to solve disputes between people. In the case of capital

punishment, it considers it has right to decide whether this or that person deserves to live, thus, breaking the very

foundation of its own existence.

Killing a murderer won’t resurrect the one who has been killed by him; but the murderer may turn out to be

innocent if some additional evidence appears. Such cases were and undoubtedly are with many of those who

have been executed or are on the death row right now. One may say that such cases are rare, but even one such

case that takes place should be considered to be completely inadmissible.

Laws exist not for the convenience of officials, but for the citizens of the state; if the government murders an

innocent, it hasn’t right to rule over these people – because it is an outright murder. The fact that it wasn’t

committed by a particular person doesn’t make it any less gruesome – on the contrary, the very fact that it is

performed as a kind of mundane work, makes it much, much worse than the most disgusting murder committed

by an individual.

The matter is, government isn’t an individual organism that has some kind of higher understanding of our reality.

No, it consists of separate people who try to work together; and as it is often the case when people work in

groups, they generally work less effectively than individuals do, so, of course, there are mistakes, and even more

than one can imagine. And with the execution being an irreversible action, there is completely no logical reason

for such an action being based on insufficient data – and there is no data sufficient to legitimize death.

Activity: 7

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After reading the persuasive essay, discuss with your partners and answer the following

questions.

1. What is capital punishment? _____________________________________________________________________

2. What is another name for capital punishment? ______________________________________________________

3. What methods are used for capital punishment? ____________________________________________________

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4. Some countries do not have the death penalty. Why do you think this is? Which countries are these?

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5. Do you believe in the use of capital punishment? ____________________________________________________

Activity 7b. Read the different points of view of ESL (English as a Second Language) student and then

write a paragraph giving your own point of view.

Maria

“I don’t think capital punishment should be allowed. The first reason is that the

government should not have the right to take a person’s life. We all know that

the government can make mistakes. Secondly, I believe that everybody can

change. Everybody should be given a second chance. Even if they murdered

many people, we should give them a chance to understand what they have

done. A life sentence is a good enough punishment for any crime.

Jacob

“I agree that the death penalty is a bad idea and that the government should not have the power over life and

death of the people. However, when I read in the newspapers about a ‘monster’ who killed children or killed many

people, I feel that the death penalty could be the best solution. There are some people who never change. When

they go to prison, they only boast about their crimes. When they leave prison, they will do it again. I believe capital

punishment could be suitable for these people, but I’m not sure.

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Evaluation

Activity: 7 Product: Point of view paragraph. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Organizes ideas read in the

persuasive essay so that he/she

can answer questions and give

her/his point of view on the

subject.

Applies the information given in the

persuasive essay to answer

questions and to give his/her point

of view on the subject.

Respects others point of view on

the subject and gives his/her own

point of view.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

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Read about narrative essay and discuss with your partners.

Narrative Essay

When writing a narrative essay, one might think of it as telling a story. These essays are often anecdotal,

experiential, and personal—allowing the writer to express him/herself in a creative and, quite often, moving way.

Here are some guidelines for writing a narrative essay:

If written as a story, the essay should include all the parts of a story: a plot, a setting (where and when the

story happens), and characters who have motives.

The essay should have a purpose. Make a point! Think of this as the thesis of your story.

Use clear and concise language throughout the essay.

The use of the first person pronoun ‘I’ is welcomed. Do not abuse this guideline! Though it is welcomed it is

not necessary—nor should it be overused for lack of clearer diction.

As always, be organized! Have a clear introduction that sets the tone for the remainder of the essay. Do not

leave the reader guessing about the purpose of your narrative.

Activity 8a. Read this personal narrative written by eighth-grader Alicia. Read the essay and notice how

Alicia’s personality comes through; she obviously cares about her subject. Her use of details gives the

reader a clear picture of the characters and environment in this account of Alicia’s first encounter with

racism. When you finish reading fill in the information below.

The Racist Warehouse

It was a beautiful August morning. The sun was brightly shining on my sunglasses while my mother drove the

U-haul truck to a warehouse in Santa Ana, California. As my mother drove down the streets of Santa Ana, I looked

out the window and began to realize that the mixture of people was no longer a mixture; there was only white.

When we arrived at the warehouse, I had to peel my arm off the side of the hot door like a burnt sausage off a

skillet. There were not many cars in the parking lot, and I could see the heat waves. As we walked up the boiling

pavement, it felt like we were walking through a scorching desert. When we walked into the warehouse, there was

a variety of electronic appliances to choose from, and about three-fourths of them were white (of course).

About every 15 minutes, a salesperson followed us around and asked if we needed help, as if we were retarded

or ex-cons. My mother really dislikes it when salespersons constantly ask if we need help; she feels if she needs

their help, she’ll ask for it. Finally, after about two and a half boring hours of looking for any scratches or marks on

the dryers and refrigerators that might fit best in our new apartment, my mother picked a dryer and refrigerator

that were just right. She then let the salesperson know, and he replied with a smile, “All right, you can pick up your

items in the back in about five minutes.” My mother said, “Thank you,” in a nice, friendly voice and walked across

the scorched pavement to drive the truck to the back.

When we got to the back, there were about three open spaces for picking up appliances. My mother chose the

first parking spot she saw, which was by a white family’s car. Then she showed the employees the receipt for the

appliances she had just bought. They said, “All right, we’ll be with you in just a minute.” While I waited for my

mother, I looked over and smiled at the white lady in the next car, but instead of smiling back like a nice young

woman, she frowned at me like I had something hanging from my nose. At first I thought, “Well, maybe she is

having a bad day.”

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Then a few minutes later the people working at the warehouse started to look at my mother and me

in a mean way. Then I figured that maybe something was on my face, but when I looked in the

mirror, I saw nothing. At the time, I had only spent nine years and some months on this planet. I

didn’t know racism was still around; I thought that situation had died along with Dr. King.

Five minutes passed then ten, then fifteen. We sat there watching people get their appliances and leave. We

seemed invisible to them. As I sat in the car, burning up and listening to one of the most boring radio stations my

mother could possibly like, I was thinking, “We’d better leave or else I’ll go ballistic!” After 30 minutes had passed,

my mother got frustrated and politely asked to have our items loaded. Five more minutes passed, and she asked

again with an attitude. They replied, “We’ll be with you in a minute, ma’am.” I could tell she was beginning to get

upset because she started to get that “don’t bother me” look. Five minutes later they finally packed our

appliances on the truck.

When we left the warehouse, I described to my mother what the other people were doing. She explained, “They

were racist. They didn’t like us because we have different skin color.”

That was my first encounter with racism. It was just a small slice of reality—that everyone isn’t going to be as nice

as you, your friends, and your family might be; and that just because you look nice and politely smile at others, it

doesn’t mean that others will treat you the same. This situation made me feel very out of place and confused. I

didn’t expect those people to react as they did. We are all civilized, intelligent, caring, peaceful people . . . or at

least that is what I had believed.

Houghton Mifflin Company.

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Evaluation

Activity: 8 Product: Answers to WH questions. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Organizes ideas read in the

narrative essay so that he/she

can complete the grids and

answer questions.

Reads the essay so that he/she can

complete the grids and answer the

WH questions.

Enjoys a good narrative essay,

the consistent point of view of the

writer, and the use of vivid and

exact language.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Answer the following WH question from “The Racist Warehouse” essay.

1. Where does the story happen? ___________________________________________________________________

2. When does the story happen? ____________________________________________________________________

3. Who are the characters involved in the story? _______________________________________________________

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4. How is the weather described? ___________________________________________________________________

5. What happen every 15 minutes? __________________________________________________________________

6. How does the writer feel at the end of the story? _____________________________________________________

7. Why do you think she feels this way? ______________________________________________________________

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Activity: 8b

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Descriptive Essay.

The purpose of a descriptive essay is to describe a person, place, or thing in such vivid detail that the reader can easily

form a precise mental picture of what is being written about. The author may accomplish this by using imaginative

language, interesting comparisons, and images that appeal to the senses, just like the descriptive paragraphs you

studied in your “Reading and Writing Strategies” in fifth semester, the descriptive essay also makes use of

comparisons to help picture it—something is like something, also you need to employ your five senses – how it feels,

look, sounds and taste. Using adjectives and adverbs make descriptive writing more interesting.

Read this sample descriptive essay, and then read the notes below.

I have always been fascinated by carnival rides. It amazes me that average,

ordinary people eagerly trade in the serenity of the ground for the chance to

be tossed through the air like vegetables in a food processor. It amazes me

that at some time in history someone thought that people would enjoy this,

and that person invented what must have been the first of these terrifying

machines. For me, it is precisely the thrill and excitement of having survived

the ride that keeps me coming back for more.

My first experience with a carnival ride was a Ferris wheel at a local fair.

Looking at that looming monstrosity spinning the life out of its sardine-caged

occupants, I was dumbstruck. It was huge, smoky, noisy and not a little

intimidating. Ever since that initial impression became fossilized in my imagination many years ago, these rides have

reminded me of mythical beasts, amazing dinosaurs carrying off their screaming passengers like sacrificial virgins.

Even the droning sound of their engines brings to mind the great roar of a fire-breathing dragon with smoke spewing

from its exhaust-pipe nostrils.

The first ride on one of these fantastic beasts gave me an instant rush of adrenaline. As the death-defying ride started,

a lump in my throat pulsed like a dislodged heart ready to walk the plank. As the ride gained speed, the resistance to

gravity built up against my body until I was unable to move. An almost imperceptible pause as the wheel reached the

top of its climb allowed my body to relax in a brief state of normalcy. Then there was an assault of stomach-turning

weightlessness as the machine continued its rotation and I descended back toward the earth. A cymbal-like crash

vibrated through the air as the wheel reached bottom, and much to my surprise I began to rise again.

Each new rotation gave me more confidence in the churning machine. Every ascent left me elated that I had survived

the previous death-defying fall. When another nerve-wracking climb failed to follow the last exhilarating descent and the

ride was over, I knew I was hooked. Physically and emotionally drained, I followed my fellow passengers down the

clanging metal steps to reach the safety of my former footing. I had been spared, but only to have the opportunity to

ride again.

My fascination with these fantastic flights is deeply engrained in my soul. A trip on the wonderful Ferris wheel never fails

to thrill me. Although I am becoming older and have less time, or less inclination, to play, the child-like thrill I have on a

Ferris wheel continues with each and every ride.

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Evaluation

Activity: 9 Product: An essay analysis. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Analyzes a descriptive essay

focusing in vivid detail using

imaginative language and

interesting comparisons.

Reads to clearly form an

impression of the thing that is

described.

Enjoys a good narrative essay,

the consistent point of view of the

writer, and the use of vivid and

exact language.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Let’s analyze the descriptive essay by reading and completing the paragraphs.

1. The subject of the sample essay is fairly ordinary—a ride on a Ferris wheel. The author makes it interesting,

by comparing the ___________________________to _________________________________.

2. The author makes good use of fresh and varied vocabulary. For example, in the first paragraph alone, she

uses verbs that create excitement like "fascinate," ”_______________________” and

“_____________________."

3. In the second paragraph she uses a variety of terms to describe the machine such as "monstrosity,"

"__________________________," "____________________________," "__________________________________"

4. The author uses her senses to describe the scene—how the ride looks, sounds, smells, and feels. The ride is

"______________________________________,” “_______________________________________" and its engines

"_______________________________________" like the roar of a dragon.

5. On the ride, she gets a "________________________________" and a "______________________________," she

feels immobile and then weightless.

6. The essay is well organized. The introduction begins with a general statement, "__________________________

______________________________________.”

7. The conclusion ends with a more specific statement of what the essay will be about, "the thrill ______________

____________________________________________________________________________________________.”

8. The body of the essay is composed of several paragraphs that describe the ___________________________,

the way it seems from the ground and the way it feels to ride on one.

9. Did she want to ride again? ________________________________________________________.The conclusion

restates the main idea of the essay, it is that ________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________.

Activity: 9

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Closing Activities

Tell a story about a moment or event that means a lot to you--it will make it easier for you

to tell the story in an interesting way; it might be a narrative or descriptive essay.

Get right to the action! Avoid long introductions and lengthy descriptions--especially at the beginning of your

narrative.

Make sure your story has a point! Describe what you learned from this experience.

If the essay is descriptive use all five of your senses to describe the setting, characters, and the plot of your

story. Don't be afraid to tell the story in your own words. Nobody wants to read a story that sounds like a

textbook!

My essay

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Activity: 10

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Evaluation

Activity: 10 Product: An essay. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Writes an essay describing

something or someone by

appealing to the senses of the

reader.

Explains in the essay how the thing

smelled, felt, sounded, tasted, or

looked to evoke a strong sense of

familiarity and appreciation in the

reader.

Enjoys a good narrative essay,

the consistent point of view of the

writer, and the use of vivid and

exact language.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

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Activity: 10 (continuation)

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Evaluation

Activity: 11 Product: A portfolio of evidence. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Organizes a portfolio of

evidence by collecting the

different types of essays he/she

has written.

Registers the essays she/he has

written in a portfolio of evidence to

be presented to the teacher.

Integrates his/her knowledge of

the process of essay writing to be

presented in a portfolio of

evidence.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Collect the essays you have written and organize a Portfolio of Evidence (PoE).

In the PoE you must include:

Your first essay (the one you wrote on a free theme).

The opinion essay (The opinion essay on Mark Twain’s speech).

You are going to write a Persuasive essay based on the paragraph you already have (you don’t have a

complete essay).

Write a narrative essay (you don’t have one).

Your Descriptive essay (the last essay you wrote).

Include at the beginning your graphic organizer in activity 2.

It may be a portfolio presented physically.

It may be an e-portfolio or online portfolio; here you can use blogs, wikis, podcast, a social network, etc.

Activity: 11

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Anthology.

Competencias profesionales:

1. Realiza comprensiones oral y auditiva de diversos tipos de texto en otro idioma.

2. Realiza comprensión escrita y de lectura de diversos tipos de texto en otro idioma.

3. Realiza expresión o producción oral en otro idioma.

4. Realiza interacción oral en otro idioma.

5. Realiza expresión o producción escrita de diversos tipos de texto en otro idioma.

Unidad de competencia:

Analiza textos que le permiten hacer interpretaciones y descubrir la posibilidad de ampliar su práctica, aclarar

sus ideas y valores a través de la lectura del mismo, contribuyendo a su formación académica y cultural.

Atributos a desarrollar en el bloque:

4.1. Expresa ideas y conceptos mediante representaciones lingüísticas, matemáticas o gráficas.

4.2. Aplica distintas estrategias comunicativas según quienes sean sus interlocutores, el contexto en el que

se encuentra y los objetivos que persigue.

4.3. Identifica las ideas claves en un texto o discurso oral e infiere conclusiones a partir de ellas.

4.4. Se comunica en una segunda lengua en situaciones cotidianas.

4.5. Maneja las tecnologías de la información y la comunicación para obtener información y expresar ideas.

6.4. Estructura ideas y argumentos de manera clara, coherente y sintética.

7.1. Define metas y da seguimiento a sus procesos de construcción de conocimiento.

8.2. Aporta puntos de vista con apertura y considera los de otras personas de manera reflexiva.

10.3. Asume que el respeto de las diferencias es el principio de integración y de convivencia en los contextos

local, nacional e internacional.

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Didactic Sequence 1.

Approaching literature.

Startup Activity

Evaluation

Activity: 1 Product: Literature questionnaire. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Conceptual Attitudinal

Procedimental Attitudinal

Analyses the questions and

verifies his/her knowledge about

literature.

Registers his/her knowledge in

Literature in a questionnaire.

Appreciates the purpose of

literature as a review and the

acquisition of new knowledge

when the teacher gives feedback.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Pair work. How much do you know about literature? Take a guess and match the

questions to the responses, write the letter on the line. Check your answer with your

teacher.

Activity: 1

1. Who is the all-time best-selling fiction writer in the world,

whose 78 crime novels have sold an estimated 2 billion

copies? _____________

2. In which country does the story "The Pied Piper Of Hamelin"

take place? ______________

3. In literature, how are the famous duo Charles and Gerald

better known? _____________

4. Which famous literary character's parents were killed by Lord

Voldemort? _______________

5. Which famous novel was written in 1954, and has a title

which is the English translation of the Hebrew word

"Beelzebub"? ______________

6. To what type of animal was Robert Burns referring in his

poem that starts "Wee, sleek it, cowrin, tim'rousbeastie."?

_______________

7. Published in 1951, the children’s book "Prince Caspian" was

the second in a series of seven books. What was the first?

______________

8. Which Russian novelist wrote "Anna Karenina" and "War And

Peace"?

_____________

9. In which of Shakespeare's plays does the line "A horse! A

horse ! My kingdom for a horse" appear? ____________

10. What was Roald Dahl's follow up to his book "Charlie and the

Chocolate Factory" called? ________________

11. Into how many languages has "The Diary of Anne Frank"

been translated? ____________________

a) Lord of the Flies

b) A Mouse

c) The lion, the witch and

the Wardrobe

d) Leo Tolstoy

e) Richard III

f) Agatha Christie

g) Germany

h) Mills and Boon

i) 55

j) Harry Potter

k) Charlie and the Great

Glass Elevator

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Development Activities

What is Literature?

People read for two main reasons. First they read to learn useful information. To bake a cake you read a recipe. To Fix

a car, you read a repair manual. To learn a career, you read a book on the subject. This is reading

for its practical values and you studied them as instructive texts in your “Writing and Reading Strategies” module . You

read because of what the reading materials can do for you.

Reading can also do things to you. It can make you laugh and groan and shiver and even sweat. It can introduce you

to interesting people. It can stir up in your new thoughts and feelings in the same way that your own adventures do.

This is why you can think of literature as an experience – your experience. In fact, every time you read a piece of

literature, stop to think what it does to you.

In this block you’ll read some stories and poems of famous writers of the past. You’ll also meet some exciting authors

who are writing today. In addition, you will be asked to practice the skills that will make you and even better reader than

you are now. GOOD LITERATURE DEMANDS GOOD READERS. Remember that one of the most effective ways to

improve our own writing is to spend time reading the best writing of others.

Literature isn’t simply facts or information. Literature involves you, the reader. The words on your module are just

marks on paper until your lively mind and improving reading ability bring them to life. You make the difference.

Literature is a term used to describe written or spoken material. Literature is used to describe anything from creative

writing to more technical or scientific works, but the term is most commonly used to refer to works of the creative

imagination, including works of poetry, drama, fiction, and nonfiction. You are going to improve some skills that will

help you in your reading and writing practice.

Literal and Figurative Language.

Most words we use mean exactly what they say. For instance, If you like peanuts, you might say, “I could eat a lot of

peanuts right now.” Every work in that sentence means just what the dictionary says it means. Another term for such

“dictionary language” is literal language. But suppose you say, “I could eat a million peanuts right now.” Clearly, the

word million doesn’t really mean 1,000,000.” Its real meaning is “a great many.” Another term for this kind of language

is figurative language. Figurative language says one thing and means another. The opposite of literal language is

figurative language. Figurative language is language that means more than what it says on the surface.

Two more points must be made about figurative language:

1. Oddly enough (and often confusing to students) one of the most figurative expressions is the word literally.

Think about statements such as “I was literally frozen to death.” This really means of course, “I was figuratively

frozen to death.

2. Many figurative expressions are used so much that we don’t recognize them as

figurative. Any overused and unoriginal expression can be called a cliché: examples

are expressions like: “a million peanuts,” “sometimes catching the eye,” and most

uses of literally.

Writing using literal language is simple; you write what you mean. Using figurative language in

writing is difficult; you write using words that infer different meanings than what they mean

literally. When you are writing such things as emails and business letters, you are able to write

quickly because most of the language is literal. When you write poetry and short stories, there

is more figurative language, making the writing process slow and laborious. Many people

enjoy the challenge of writing selections with figurative language.

This image illustrates

money laundering, which

is figurative language.

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Evaluation

Activity: 2 Product: Figurative language

exercise. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Conceptual Attitudinal

Procedimental Attitudinal

Define literal and figurative

language in a song.

Determines the figurative speech in

lyrics from a song.

Appreciates the use of figurative

language in daily English.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Read the following song lyrics. In the spaces provided, write what you understand about

the numbered statements.

You Are the Sunshine of My Life

by Stevie Wonder

You are the sunshine of my life1

That’s why I’ll always be around,

You are the apple of my eye, 2

Forever you’ll stay in my heart

I feel like this is the beginning,

Though I’ve loved you for a million years 3,

And if I thought our love was ending,

I’d find myself drowning in my own tears. 4

You are the sunshine of my life,

That’s why I’ll always stay around,

You are the apple of my eye,

Forever you’ll stay in my heart, 5

You must have known that I was lonely,

Because you came to my rescue,

And I know that this must be heaven, 6

How could so much love be inside of you?

You are the sunshine of my life, yeah,

That’s why I’ll always stay around,

You are the apple of my eye,

Forever you’ll stay in my heart. 7

1. ___________________________________________

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2. ___________________________________________

______________________________________________

3. ___________________________________________

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4. ___________________________________________

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5. ___________________________________________

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6. ___________________________________________

______________________________________________

7. ___________________________________________

______________________________________________

Activity: 2

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Evaluation

Activity: 3 Product: Cliché table. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies phrases

characterized by its overuse in

daily language.

Applies the word to form clichés

used in daily English language.

Appreciates the use of figurative

language in daily English.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Read about cliché

A cliché is not just something that lots of people say; it’s something that lots of people say and it

convey some sort of idea or message. A cliché is, in other words, a metaphor characterized by its

overuse.

The term is frequently used in modern culture for an action or idea which is expected or predictable, based on a

prior event. Typically a pejorative, "clichés" are not always false or inaccurate. A cliché may or may not be true.

Some are stereotypes, but some are simply truisms and facts. Clichés are often for comic effect, typically in

fiction.

Choose a word from the right box and complete these famous clichés. Use your dictionary for the

unknown words in the box.

Clichés

Loose lips sink_________________________________________________.

The road to hell is paved with good _______________________________.

If you can't stand the heat, stay out of the __________________________.

______________________________________ makes the world go round.

Think outside the ______________________________________________.

All is fair in love and ____________________________________________.

A watched pot never ___________________________________________.

An apple a day keeps the __________________________________ away.

All work and no play make Jack a ____________________________ boy.

There's more than one way to skin a ______________________________.

_

A rolling stone gathers no _______________________________________.

Still waters run _________________________________________________.

The way to a man's heart is through his ___________________________.

Possession is 9/10's of the ______________________________________.

Activity: 3

1. Doctor

2. Dull

3. Cat

4. Moss

5. Deep

6. Stomach

7. Law

8. Boils

9. War

10. Box

11. Money

12. Kitchen

13. Ship

14. intention

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Read and learn more about Literal and Figurative Language.

Two figures of speech

Most figures of speech compare two things. There are two main kinds of comparisons. A simple comparison like:

“Time is running out” is called metaphor. A metaphor is simple and direct; no extra words are used to show the

understanding of time as a resource. Instead one expression is simply substituted for another.

The other kind of comparison is called a simile. A simile does use a word to show that a comparison is being

made. Usually this word is like or as. Well-chosen similes can be used to enliven writing or as an alternative to

description using adjectives, example:

His temper was as explosive as a volcano.

His temper is being compared to a volcano in that it can be sudden and violent.

Playing chess with Ashley is like trying to outsmart a computer.

The activity “playing chess with Ashley” is being compared to “trying to outsmart a computer.” The point is that

Ashley can think in a powerful manner that resembles the way a computer operates, not that she is like a

computer in any other way.

Activity 4a. Write on the line if the comparison in each statement is METAPHORE or SIMILE.

1. Big trees fell like toothpicks when Paul Bunyan swung his axe. ____________________________________

2. The forest was as quite as a falling leaf. _______________________________________________________

3. Babe’s hoof beats were thunder rebounding through the hills. ____________________________________

4. Paul’s voice was a cannon breaking the silence. _______________________________________________

5. Babe was a two ton bundle of blue dynamite. __________________________________________________

Activity 4b. Underline the word or phrase that is being described by each SIMILE. Put parentheses

around the word or phrase it is being compared to. The first has been done for you.

1. Mary frowned and said, “I believe that taking drugs is like (playing with fire).”

2. I walked along the beach and listened to the ocean. My sadness was as unending as the waves.

3. Don’t tell Mother that her cookies taste like lumps of sand.

4. Sam waited impatiently for his older brother to calm down. “Bill, I think you are acting like a baby,” he

said.

5. Karen was offended when I said that she was as flaky as a snowstorm.

6. Be careful when you go out. The sidewalk is as slippery as greased glass.

7. I’m not comfortable about this situation. I feel like a bug sitting under a magnifying glass.

8. I hoped our play would be a success and last for many performances. However, I guess it will last as

long as a balloon in a roomful of kittens.

9. I really like Patty. Her heart is as soft as a feather pillow.

10. Cheryl’s smile is as sweet as a lullaby.

Activity: 4

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Evaluation

Activity: 4 Product: Figurative language

exercises. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies literal and figurative

language and the two kinds of

comparisons.

Determines the literal and figurative

language in the statements given.

Shows a positive attitude when

learning about literal and

figurative language which can be

used in his/her daily

communication.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Explain how the two items in each sentence are alike. Circle the two items being

compared.

1. Jenny sings like a bird.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

2. Mary is a pack rat.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

3. The playground became a lake after the thunderous rain.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

4. The dancer moved around the stage like a spinning top.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

5. My friend is a stubborn mule.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

6. The lake was a huge mirror in the moonlight.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

7. I am the glue that holds us together.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

8. Laura sang like an old cat.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

9. The pillow was a cloud when I put my head upon it after a long day.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

10. No one invites Harold to parties because he’s a wet blanket.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

Activity: 4c

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Pair work. Read the biography of a woman considered one of the greatest American

poets—if not the greatest. After reading the biography discuss with your partner, what

might have happened to make a young woman slowly withdraw from society?

Emily Dickinson

The Poetess Emily Dickinson was born in Amherst, Massachusetts on December 10,

1830. Emily lived secluded in the house she was born in, except for the short time she

attended Amherst Academy and Holyoke Female Seminary, until her death on May 15,

1886 due to Bright's disease. Emily was an energetic and outgoing woman while attending

the Academy and Seminary. It was later, during her mid-twenties that Emily began to grow

reclusive. She attended almost exclusively to household chores and to writing poetry.

Many scholars have tried to understand and theorize why Emily decided to seclude herself

in her home and write about the most intimate experiences and feelings of life. I think that

the best of these theories is that Emily could not write about the world without first backing

away from the it and contemplating it from a distance.

Emily had a few friends and acquaintances from day to day. One of these acquaintances was Thomas Wentworth

Higginson whom she sent a few pieces of her poetry to. He rejected her poems, but he was eventually the first to

publish her work after her death. Emily only had a six or seven of her poems published during her lifetime--and

those without her consent. The number is argued over because one poem was published more than once.

It was after her death that her poems were discovered. It is estimated that Emily wrote over 1700 poems.

Activity 5a. Have you ever felt that if you suddenly vanished, you really wouldn’t be missed? Of course

you have. Everyone once in a while, feels like a “nobody,” And this knowledge about other people can

help us with our own feelings. Read what Emily Dickinson has to say on this and other subjects and

answer the questions.

I'M NOBODY!

I'm nobody! Who are you?

Are you nobody, too?

Then there's a pair of us--don't tell!

They'd banish us, you know.

How dreary to be somebody!

How public, like a frog

To tell your name the livelong day

To an admiring bog!

Activity: 5

1. In line 1, the poet asks, “Who are you?” Does the word “you”

seem to refer to the reader, to the frog, or to “somebody” else

mentioned later? Explain.__________________________________

2. Line 2 also contains a question. What answer does the poet

seem to expect, yes or no? ________________________________

3. Examine the figurative language in the poem. Clearly, the word

“somebody” (line 5) means the opposite of the word “nobody.”

What kind of person does the poet mean by “somebody”?

_______________________________________________________

4. Think about the rest of the figurative language in the second

part. By saying that a frog repeats its name as it crocks away in

swamp, what is the poet suggesting about a certain kind of

person? ________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________

5. What does the figurative expression “admiring bog suggest to

you as a reader?” ________________________________________

_______________________________________________________

6. Explain in your own words what enjoyment the poet gets out of

being a “nobody.” _______________________________________

_______________________________________________________

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Evaluation

Activity: 5 Product: Poem analysis. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Recognizes life and work of one

of the greatest American poet.

Obtains information about Emily

Dickinson’s life and works to make

a connection between the poems

and real-life experiences.

Values the importance of reading

and the significance of making

the connection between reading

and real life experiences.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

A WORD

A Word is dead

when it is said,

some say. I say it

just begins to live

that day.

I NEVER SAW A MOOR

I never saw a moor,

I never saw the sea;

yet know I how the heather looks,

and what a wave must be.

I never spoke with God,

nor visited in heaven;

yet certain am I of the spot

as if the chart were given.

Activity: 5a (continuation)

1. In “A Word,” what might make one spoken Word be “dead,” while another

“just begins to live”? _____________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

2. Has history shown the words in this particular poem to be “dead” or alive?

________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

Suppose another person—not a poet! –had wanted to express the

thought of “I never saw a Moor.” He or she might have written:

“Although” I’ve never seen heather or an ocean wave, I feel I know

about them. In the same way, although I’ve never seen God or

heaven, I feel I know about them, too.” These two sentences make

the meaning clear, but they would never have become as famous as

the poem. Now write in your own words the same poem:

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________

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___________________________________________________________

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Langston Hughes is an honored black American poet, his voice for the African-American

experience lives on in the hearts of Americans of all races. Read about his life and work

and answer the questions.

Langston Hughes

Who are you Langston Hughes? What do you stand for? Let’s let the poet himself tell us:

The American people have “dug” the poetry of Langston Hughes for over 60 years. And for good reasons. His

language is direct and uncomplicated. He catches the rhythms of jazz and the soulful sounds of the blues. In his

own words, he gives us the “music of a community.”

Langston Hughes was born in Missouri on February 1st

1902. He was an American poet, social activist, novelist,

playwright, and columnist. He was one of the earliest innovators of the then-new literary art form jazz poetry.

Langston was raised in Kansas and Illinois. Before publishing his first book, The Weary Blues, he lived in Mexico,

New York, and traveled through Africa and Europe by working a variety of odd jobs. Hughes is best known for his

work during the Harlem Renaissance. He famously wrote about the period that "Harlem was in vogue He died in

his beloved Harlem on May 22, 1967, a central figure of the Harlem Renaissance and author of numerous plays,

poems, and novels.

Activity: 6

I play it cool

And dig all jive

That’s the reason

I stay alive.

My motto,

As I live and learn,

Is:

Dig and be Dug

In Return.

This poem is filled with figures of speech:

Five similes suggest ideas that finally explode in

a metaphor.

a) What does at least one of the similes suggest

might happen if the dream is put off to long?

_______________________________________

_______________________________________

_______________________________________

_______________________________________

b) What does the very last word suggest might

happen? _______________________________

_______________________________________

_______________________________________

_______________________________________

HARLEM

What happens to a dream deferred?

Does it dry up

like a raisin in the sun?

Or fester like a sore—

And then run?

Does it stink like rotten meat?

Or crust and sugar over—

like a syrupy sweet?

Maybe it just sags

like a heavy load.

Or does it explode?

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Evaluation

Activity: 6 Product: Poem analysis. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Recognizes the life and work of

one of honored American poet.

Obtains information about

Langston’s life and works to make

a connection between the poems

and real-life experiences.

Values life and work of a famous

American poet.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Class discussion. Discuss the use of metaphors in the poem, Mother to Son, by Langston

Hughes. Describes Hughes' use of figurative language. Discuss the poem's basic

message.

Activity: 6 (continuation)

MOTHER TO SON

Well, son, I'll tell you: (line 1)

Life for me ain't been no crystal stair. (line 2)

It's had tacks in it, (line 3)

And splinters, (line 4)

And boards torn up, (line 5)

And places with no carpet on the floor (line 6)

Bare. (line 7)

But all the time (line 8)

I'se been a-climbin' on, (line 9)

And reachin' landin's, (line 10)

And turnin' corners, (line 11)

And sometimes goin' in the dark (line 12)

Where there ain't been no light. (line 13)

So, boy, don't you turn back. (line 14)

Don't you set down on the steps. (line 15)

'Cause you finds it's kinder hard. (line 16)

Don't you fall now— (line 17)

For I'se still goin', honey, (line 18)

I'se still climbin', (line 19)

And life for me ain't been no crystal stair. (line 20)

1. Everyone has heard the metaphor “the road of

life” but the mother in the poem compares her

life to something more original. What is the

comparison?

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2. In line 15-17 the mother gives the son some

good advice. What is this advice, in literal

words of your own? _______________________

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________________________________________

3. In your opinion, how old are the two characters

in the poem? ____________________________

________________________________________

4. After the first line, the poem becomes a long

series of metaphors. For what kind of events of

periods in the mother’s life might the following

details stand?

a) “Tack” and “splinters”? ________________

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b) “Landin’s”? __________________________

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c) “Going in the dark”? ___________________

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Evaluation

Activity: 7 Product: Reading comprehension

exercise. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Recognizes the life and work of a

famous Spanish American Poet.

Obtains information about Pablo

Neruda’s life and works to make a

connection between the poems

and real-life experiences.

Values the work of the famous

Nobel Prize for literature as one of

the most famous Spanish

speaking American poet.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Read the biography of one of the most widely read of the Spanish American poets. Then

answer the questions.

Pablo Neruda

Pablo Neruda was born Ricardo Eliecer Neftali Reyes y Basalto in Chile in 1904, and later

acquired his pen name from the Czech author Jan Neruda. His poetry brings alive the

destiny and dreams of South America with the action of an elementary force. His first

essay was published at the age of 13.His work, utilizing surrealist techniques and

exploring his inner self against the broad background of South America, was critically

acclaimed through his career. He had a deep commitment to communism, and he was a

force in the political arena as a Chilean diplomat.

He wrote poetry at all levels, from his Odes to Common Objects to his numbered poems. Poem Number Twenty

is one of his most famous works. He was encouraged to write poetry by a local teacher in Temuco, Chile,

Gabriela Mistral, who would later become a famous writer in her own right. Neruda's first volume of poetry, “La

canción de la fiesta,” was published in 1921. Neruda’s use of literary devices complements his themes and motifs

throughout his poetry. Metaphors, visual imagery, personification, and similes are some of the major devices

used in Neruda’s poetry. Neruda’s poetry has been widely known as the best lyrically written poetry in the world of

poetry, due to his intricate imageries and language.

The American poet Walt Whitman, become a major influence on his work. "I, a poet who writes in Spanish, learned

more from Walt Whitman than from Cervantes," Neruda said in 1972 in a speech during a visit in the United

States.

He was also a political figure and activist in his native country of Chile, in South America, and one can see his

political themes in many of his works. He received the Nobel Prize in Literature in 1971. Pablo Neruda died in

1973.

1. Where did Neruda get his pen name? _____________________________________________________________

2. At what age did Neruda begin to publish his first works? _____________________________________________

3. What famous writer to be, motivated Neruda to write poetry? __________________________________________

4. What literary figures of speech did Neruda use in his poetry? _________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

5. What was Neruda’s opinion about the famous poet Walt Whitman? ____________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________

6. What can the reader discover in Neruda’s work? ____________________________________________________

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Team work. An ode is a poem that is written for an occasion or on a particular subject.

They are usually dignified and more serious as a form than other forms of poetry. Read

Pablo Neruda’s ode and answer the question. Discuss with your classmates and ask your

teacher’s opinion.

“Ode to an Artichoke”

The tender-hearted

artichoke

dressed up as a warrior,

erect, it built itself

a little dome,

it kept itself

impregnable

beneath

its armored leaves,

beside it

the raving vegetables

began to frizzle,

they turned themselves into

tendrils, bullrushes,

touching bulbs,

below the ground

the red-moustachioed carrot

slept,

the vine

dried out its shoots

through which wine climbs,

the leafy cabbage

took to trying on skirts,

oregano

to scenting the world,

and the sweet

artichoke

there in the garden,

was dressed as a warrior,

burnished

like a grenade and proud,

and one day

assembled with its fellows

in large wicker baskets,

it walked

through the market

to make its dream of

soldiery

come true.

In ranks

it never was so military

as at the market,

the men

among the vegetables

with their white shirts

were

marshals

of the artichokes

the serried files,

the ordering voices,

and the report

of a fallen crate,

but then

Maria

comes along

and with her basket,

picks out

an artichoke

she isn't scared,

she scrutinizes it, considers it

against the light as if it were an

egg,

and buys it,

tossing it

into her bag

jumbled together with a pair of

shoes,

a cabbage and a

bottle full of vinegar

until

when entering her kitchen

she plunges it into a pot.

Thus ends

in peace

the enlistment

of this armed vegetable

called the artichoke,

after which

leaf after leaf

we undress

its deliciousness

and eat

the peaceful substance

of its green heart.

Artichoke is a plant with large, spine like flower head.

1. Point out three similes or metaphors in which Neruda describes the artichoke.

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2. Point out three phrases Neruda uses to create a glorified tone while describing the artichoke.

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3. In the poem, what are the three stages of this artichoke’s life? _________________________________________

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4. Why is the comparison between an “artichoke” and “armor” appropriate? _______________________________

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Evaluation

Activity: 8 Product: Ode and poem

comprehension exercises. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Identifies the “Ode” as a poem

and as a form of poetry.

Reads poetry as form of “Ode” of a

famous writer and creates a class

discussion.

Enjoys poetry when learning the

work of art of a famous writer.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Read and explain in your own words what Neruda wanted to express in this poem.

I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You

I do not love you except because I love you;

I go from loving to not loving you,

from waiting to not waiting for you

my heart moves from cold to fire.

I love you only because it's you the one I love;

I hate you deeply, and hating you

bend to you, and the measure of my changing love for you

is that I do not see you but love you blindly.

Maybe January light will consume

my heart with its cruel

ray, stealing my key to true calm.

In this part of the story I am the one who

dies, the only one, and I will die of love because I love you,

because I love you, Love, in fire and blood.

I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You

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Closing Activity

Use the rubric to evaluate your partner’s portfolio and ask your partner to evaluate yours before turning in

to your teacher.

Points Required items Concepts Reflection/Critique Overall Presentation

90-100

All required items

are included, with

a significant

number of

additions.

Items clearly demonstrate that the

desired learning outcomes for the

term have been achieved. The

student has gained a significant

understanding of the concepts and

applications.

Reflections illustrate

the ability to effectively

critique work, and to

suggest constructive

practical alternatives.

Items are clearly

introduced, well

organized, and creatively

displayed, showing

connection between

items.

75-89

All required items

are included, with

a few additions.

Items clearly demonstrate most of

the desired learning outcomes for

the term. The student has gained a

general understanding of the

concepts and applications.

Reflections illustrate

the ability to critique

work, and to suggest

constructive practical

alternatives.

Items are introduced and

well organized, showing

connection between

items.

60-75 All required items

are included.

Items demonstrate some of the

desired learning outcomes for the

term. The student has gained some

understanding of the concepts and

attempts to apply them.

Reflections illustrate an

attempt to critique

work, and to suggest

alternatives.

Items are introduced and

somewhat organized,

showing some connection

between items.

40-59

A significant

number of

required items are

missing.

Items do not demonstrate basic

learning outcomes for the term. The

student has limited understanding

of the concepts.

Reflections illustrate a

minimal ability to

critique work.

Items are not introduced

and lack organization.

Evaluation

Activity: 9 Product: Poem portfolio. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Interprets and analyzes complex

informational texts and

presentations.

Recognizes and understand the

significance of a wide range of

literary elements and techniques

and use those elements to interpret

the work.

Values the significance of specific

data, facts and ideas of some

poems.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Create a Poetry Portfolio.

You must collect, complete and organize the following:

Write the biography of 7 major poets of all times, add the three poets presented in this sequence with their

poems and worksheets. Then there will be 10 poets.

A formal research paper, including a title page, citations and bibliography, on the life of the poet.

A copy of a poem by their assigned author. (You already have poems of the three poets presented).

The "Analysis of a Poem" worksheet defining and identifying types of figurative language including simile

and metaphor. (You already have activities on the poems of the three poets presented).

A current newspaper article that is in some way connected to the poem the student selected. For example,

if the poem is about nature, they might have included an article about the environment in your city.

The cover for the portfolio, decorated with an original artwork that could accompany the author's poem if it

were published in an ANTHOLOGY.

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Didactic Sequence 2.

Readings selection.

Start up Activity

Evaluation

Activity: 1 Product: Questionnaire. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Selects the correct basic literary

elements to answer the

questionnaire.

Registers his/her knowledge in

literary elements in a questionnaire.

Shows interest when applying

and acquiring a new knowledge.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

How much do you know about basic literary elements? According to your general

knowledge and what you have studied in this module choose and underline the best

choice. Check with your teacher.

1. An object or idea that has its own meaning and

represents something else as well.

Irony Allution

Symbol Inference

2. The main idea or author's opinion about life

expressed in a piece of literature.

Theme Setting

Non-fiction Exaggeration

3. The time and place of the story.

Foreshadowing Setting

Science-fiction Plot

4. Fiction based on technological or scientific

developments.

Frame story Symbolism

Science –fiction Theme

5. The story that contains or connects other stories

when there are two or more stories within one

story.

Symbol Frame story

Proglogue Preamble

6. A reference to a famous person, place, event, or

work of literature.

Foreshadowing Illusion

Irony Theme

7. Hints or clues provided by the author that

permitthe reader to predict what might happen

later in the story.

Foreshadowing Irony

Setting Characterization

8. A contrast between what is expected and what

actually happens or exists.

Allution Inference

Irony Frame story

9. A logical guess or conclusion based on facts.

Allution Point of view

Inference Irony

10. The relationship between the narrator and the

story (who is telling the story).

Allution point of view

Inference theme

11. A series of related events (what happens in the

story)

Theme setting

Plot irony

12. A series of related events (what happens in the

story).

point of view setting

plot characterization

Activity: 1

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Development Activities

Elements of the short story.

You may be familiar with the saying “The whole equals the sum of its parts”. This saying applies perfectly to the short

story. A story can almost always be examined by looking at four basic element: setting, characters, plot, and theme.

Setting. Every short story has to happen in somo place and at some time. The time and place of a story are its setting.

The setting also includes natural events, such as a snowstorm, a falling tree, or a beautiful sunny day. Authhors usually

try to make their settings very clear because certain kind of stories seem more real in certain setting.

Characters. Most people in stories can be called either flat or rounded characters. Some flat characters are called

stereotypes---one –dimensional characters we’ve met before in our reading: the kind old grandmother, the goofy

teenager boy who can’t do anything right, the sports hero who always manages the last-minute home run or

touchdown pass. Rounded characters, on the other hand, are not types but distincts individuals. We haven’t met them

before, and we can’t predict exactly what they’ll do when faced with certain problems.

The reader learns about a characters in two ways. First, an autor can simply tell the reader that a character is cheerful,

tall, sick… whatever. More usually, the autor provides character clues. Character clues are speeches, thoughts, and

actions that indicate indirectly what a character is like.

Plot. Few stories are interesting if we don’t keep asking ourselves, “What will happen next?” What happen in a story is

called its plot. Eary in the story an important plot question is raised. The action that answers this question can either

end the story or lead to still other questions. Long stories often contain a number of implied plot questions. The rising

action in such a story lead finally to an exciting climax at or near the end. Some stories continue after the climax with a

section of falling action, or a resolution.

Another way to think about plot in terms of conflict, or the meeting of opposing forces. Characters in stories can be in

conflict with (1) other characters, (2) themselves (“inner conflict”), (3) things, or (4) nature.

In this sequence you are going to read a book excerpt and three stories from very different contexts and time, the first

story “Appointment in Baghdad” is one of the shortest stories ever told. Over the years, different authors have written

many different versions. It is presented here as a jumping-off point for a study of the elements of the short story. Here

you have the dictionary words underlined in the story that will help you to understand and answer the questions.

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Evaluation

Activity: 2 Product: Reading comprehension

exercise. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Selects passages of a story to

answer questions.

Practices Active Vocabulary Skills

and the knowledge of the four basic

elements of a story by answering

questions from the reading.

Shows a positive attitude when

learning a new topic and a sense

of initiative to learn.

Auto-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Read the story carefully. Answer the questions about the basic elements of a story:

setting, characters, plot, and theme.

Appointment in Baghdad

One day the sultan of Damascus was sitting on the board, flat roof of this palace, basking in the morning sun. The

sultan's favorite servant came to him and, flinging himself to the ground at the feet of the potentate, cried out,

"Master, lend me your fastest horse; I beg you. I must leave at once for Baghdad."

The sultan asked why the youth was in such a hurry to go to Baghdad.

"As I passed through the palace garden just now I saw a gruesome figure standing there. It was Death. When he

saw me he stretched out his arms as if to take me, I must lose no time in escaping from him, I am too young to

perish."

The sultan, a kind and sympathetic ruler, allowed the downcast young man to take the horse and leave. When he

was gone, the sultan went into the garden and found Death still lingering there. "How dare you accost my

servant?" he demanded harshly of the eerie figure lurking in the shadows.

Death looked at the sultan in astonishment. "But Your Majesty," he said, "I did not accost the youth. I simply threw

up my hands in surprise at finding him here in your garden. You see, I have an appointment with him tonight in

Baghdad.

1. What is the setting of “Appointment in Baghdad”? ___________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

2. Would you call the characters in this story stereotypes or rounded characters? __________________________

3. What is the plot question that first interested you in “Appointment in Baghdad”? _________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

4. The sultan himself asks the last plot questions. What is it? ____________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

5. In your opinion, what kind of conflict is involved in the story? __________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

6. In your opinion, is the theme in “Appointment in Baghdad” important? __________________________________

7. What is the theme? _____________________________________________________________________________

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Team work. Take turns with your partners and read the story written in the early 1930s,

this story describes an episode that takes place on a train traveling from Detroit to New

York. At that time, trains were still the major means of travel in the United States for both

rich and poor people. Discuss the story and the dictionary words with your team and

teacher, these dictionary words will help you to answer the questions.

On the outside

by August W. Derleth.

I can't remember when the boy got on the train. Perhaps he'd been there already

when I boarded it and I hadn't seen him, or perhaps he'd changed coaches while I

was reading. I can't even remember what it was that made me see him at last. A

thin little fellow looked to be under twelve. He had sharp black eyes, intelligent

eyes, and when I saw him they were fixed on a prosperous-looking businessman,

sunk deep in a fur coat. The boy had turned in his seat to look at the businessman

and to listen to him.

I had noticed the businessman when I passed him to go to my seat, just a glance, no more. He had been talking

for the past half hour with two university students who sat across the aisle from him. When I looked at the boy and

watched him, I began to listen to the conversation. The businessman was talking. "You fellows," he was saying,

"are on the outside. You theorize. That's all very well. But you don't know anything about it..."

"Capitalism," interrupted one of the students. "Catchwords," cut in the businessman. "I know, I'm on the inside. I

have to go through these things. You know nothing but what you read in the newspapers - and God knows what

they don't all print."

"Capitalism," said the student patiently, "is bound to collapse within a few decades."

The businessman smiled but said nothing.

"This massacre at Detroit, now," cut in the second student. "What do you think of that?"

"It serves those men right. The only thing I'm sorry about is that it gives them a chance to be martyrs for the

martyr-worshipping hoodlums who cause riots and disturbances."

"Riots and disturbances," murmured the student. "riots and disturbances. If a man wants bread and goes to get it,

that's a riot. If a woman wants milk for her children, it's a disturbance, and dangerous to the peace. Hunger is a

crime against society."

"Bosh," said the businessman. "That's an extreme view."

"Hunger," said the second student, "is always extreme."

There was an expression of satisfaction on the businessman's face, and it was not dispelled by the student's bitter

words. The man looked away from the students. Suddenly his eyes met the boy's. "You," he said smiling, "what do

you think about it?"

The boy looked at him for a moment without answering. "Detroit," he said slowly, "was a hungry place."

Everyone looked at the boy.

"I'm glad we're going away from it."

"Oh, you're not alone, then?" asked the businessman.

"No, pa's along. We're both going. We're going to New York where ma is."

Silence fell. The clicking of the drivers edged into the coach, sounding louder and louder.

"I didn't see your father," said the businessman. "I didn't see him come in. Where's he at?"

The boy made a vague gesture in the direction of the smoking car.

"Oh, I see," said the businessman. He looked speculatively at the boy and asked, "What are you going to do in

New York, you and your dad?"

"I don't know."

Silence crept into the coach again and presently the businessman turned away. But the boy continued to look at

him, staring at him rather, without once blinking his eyes or shifting his stare. The businessman was conscious of

the boy's scrutiny, for he looked up again, fixed the boy with his eyes, and said, "Your dad's been gone some

time. He must have a whole box of cigars."

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At that, the boy's stare wavered for the first time. He closed his eyes for a moment. "A big box, " he

murmured. "A big box."

The businessman got up suddenly and stretched himself. "I'm getting old," he muttered.

"No, I'm stiff, too," said one of the students, and came to his feet.

"I tell you what," said the businessman abruptly, looking toward the boy. "Let's go find your dad."

The boy nodded eagerly and jumped from his seat. He went quickly along the aisle, pausing only once to look

back to see whether the others were following. On an impulse, I got up, too.

We passed through another coach, in which three men were sleeping, one with a newspaper spread over his

face. Then we came to the smoker, but there was no one in it. The businessman, who was directly behind the boy,

stopped, but the boy apparently did not notice, for he kept on going.

"This is the smoker," he called to the boy. Then he turned, said, "Diner ahead, perhaps," and went on.

But there was no one in the dining car either. The boy kept on, and we followed him.

We came to the baggage car. Two men were sitting in it; they looked curiously at us.

The boy stopped and pointed. "There's my pa," he said.

He was pointing at a long box.

The students stared. The businessman drew a sharp gasping breath, and his face coloured.

"They shot him in Detroit," the boy said, his voice sounding loud in the sudden silence.

"Listen," said the businessman jerkily, turning to the boy, "have you had dinner?"

The boy shook his head. "I'm hungry," he said in a slow dispassionate voice, as if despair of ever getting food had

saturated his thin body. "I was always hungry in Detroit. All of us. It used to be better - before they put oil on the

stuff in the garbage cans. They wanted to save our health."

One of the students smiled bitterly. "They wanted them to starve healthily," he said.

The businessman said, "We'll fix that in a jiffy," avoiding the eyes of the students. "You come right along and see

what Rastus can find for you in the dining car."

He took the boy by the hand and led him quickly out of the car.

One of the students began to laugh harshly. "Using an eyedropper on a burning skyscraper. My God! What about

the millions?"

Reference: Mullen, J. S.

Changed coaches: Went from one car to another on a train.

Capitalism: And economic system characterized by private or corporate ownership of goods and open

competition for business.

Martyr-worshiping: Making heroes of victims they believe to have been persecuted.

Riots and disturbances: Noisy public demonstrations, sometimes violent.

Rather: Usually means "somewhat," but here it means "instead" as a self-correction.

Nodded eagerly: Indicated an emphatic "yes" by moving his head up and dow".

Jerkily: In a stilted, somewhat shaky manner.

Starve healthily: (irony or ironic) die from lack of food, but not get sick from eating garbage

Rastus: A common name in slave times (stereotype name) for a black servant or waiter.

Eyedropper: A small instrument that allows one drop at a time (usually of medicine) to flow out.

Activity: 3 (continuation)

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Choose the closest answer for each question. There is no correct answer to all the

questions as one can always interpret the meaning of the story from different

perspective. However, everyone on the team must agree on the same answer.

1. "The boy had turned in his seat ... "

A. The boy was uncomfortable.

B. The boy was curious about the businessman.

C. The boy was the businessman's son.

D. The boy had been listening to what the businessman was saying.

2. "I began to listen to the conversation"

A. The narrator was annoyed at their talking while he was trying to read.

B. The narrator was tired of reading.

C. The narrator was interested in the boy.

D. The narrator wondered what they were saying.

3. "'Capitalism,' said the student patiently, 'is bound to collapse...'"

A. The student disagreed with the businessman, but he was trying to be polite.

B. The student was a Communist.

C. The student liked to argue about politics.

D. The student had been taking courses about government or politics.

4. "'I didn't see your father,'" said the businessman...' 'Where's he at?'"

A. The businessman was worried about the boy's father.

B. The businessman was somewhat curious about the boy's father.

C. The businessman was trying to sound important.

D. The businessman didn't believe the father was really o the train.

5. "'This is the smoker,' he called to the boy."

A. The businessman wanted to sit down there and have a smoke.

B. The businessman thought the boy didn't know which car was the smoker.

C. The businessman was older and couldn't go as fast as the boy.

D. The businessman was wondering why the boy's father wasn't there.

6. "They shot him in Detroit,' the boy said."

A. The boy was angry and said that to embarrass the businessman.

B. The father must have been one of those people the students were talking about.

C. The father preferred to be shot rather than to go hungry.

D. The businessman felt ashamed of what he had said about the rioters.

Activity: 3 (continuation)

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Evaluation

Activity: 3 Product: Paragraph and reading

comprehension exercise. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Selects passages of a story to

answer questions and presents

his/her opinion to partners of the

team.

Develops and improves his/her

language level of competency by

reading and discussing a story.

Values and respects his/her

partners’ opinion and is willing to

get into consensus.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Answer the questions about the basic elements of a story: setting, characters, plot, and

theme.

1. What is the setting of “ On the outside”? ___________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

2. Would you call the characters in this story stereotypes or rounded characters? __________________________

3. What is the plot question that first interested you in “On the outside”? __________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

4. In your opinion, what kind of conflict is involved in the story? __________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

5. What is the the theme? __________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

6. In your opinion, is the theme in “On the outside” important? ___________________________________________

7. Read the title of the story, and the third paragraph when the businessman said "I know, I'm on the inside”.

What did he mean by saying that. Write your opinion. Discuss your paragraph in class.

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Read the epic deed that happened when the year 1854 was full of events in our country –

these events and this epic deed would transcend the days of that century and have

remained in the memory of Sonorans. Francisco Rojas Gonzalez wrote an interesting

novel based on these famous story.

The kidnapping of Lola Casanova History or Legend?

By:Gilberto Escoboza

Lola Casanova was a very beautiful eighteen-year old lady, according to those who met her. She was the

daughter of a Spanish couple who were residents of the Guaymas community. The father, a rich tradesman, was

very proud of that gorgeous woman: her green eyes resembled the waters of the bay, her golden mane was like

ripe wheat, she had fair skin, and on her cheeks, the blush of two pink roses from Jericho. She was the Dulcinea

(Quixote's dream girl) to the most handsome young men of the area. But old man Casanova already had plans to

marry his only child to a man from the old country who also lived in the Port. A brother of Mr. Casanova who lived

with his family in Hermosillo invited his niece on several occasions to spend some time in his house with his also

teenage daughters. He persisted and was successful when Dolores' father agreed to allow his daughter go on

vacation to the house of her cousins.

In those days the Seris (native Indians) were raiding places near the coast, from Guaymas up to the beaches of

Altar. For this reason, stagecoaches that would take travelers from the Port to the Old Villa Pitic (Hermosillo), were

protected by a numerous escort of dragoons, as ordered by General José María Yáñez. Doloritas, as her father

called her, left Guaymas on the morning of April 2. It was still cold and the fifteen dragoons who escorted the

stagecoach were wearing their heavy coats. It was a special escort that the military authorities appointed for such

a distinguished lady. Lola was not only protected by the troops and several passengers, but her godmother was

going with her also.

The vehicle and its escort were traveling at normal speed, "the three trunks of robust beasts", the coachman

would say, "can make this stagecoach fly". But they could not go any faster; they had to keep the pace with the

others in the line, because many travelers took advantage of the escort to make such a dangerous journey.

In his book, journalist Federico García Alva says: "Upon arriving to the point

known as La Palmita, the Seris attacked and after a fierce combat the

Indians defeated the others. Some of the cart drivers died, others managed

to escape, and poor Lola Casanova fainted in one of the carts.

The chief of the Seris, very tall and athletically built, took the beautiful booty

in his arms and fled with her through valleys and mountains, to finally place

her gently on a hard boulder and turn himself into her guardian and

anxiously await for her to regain consciousness. When Lola opened her

eyes and saw herself next to that suntanned warrior, she was at first

petrified and later pretended to flee, but the Indian grabbing her clothes fell

to his knees at her feet and in very clear Spanish told her not to fear

anything from him, not to flee, that he, though a chieftain of the tribe, was

not a Seri, but a Pima. That since his youth he had been taken prisoner by

the Seris in a battle, and through the years he had come to master with his

courage and skill; that he adored her and that he would make her the

queen of the tribe.

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"Poor Lola was lost and surely not because of love, but she gave in to

the ferocious passion of that fearsome wild man. He engaged in

heroic battles against the main leaders of the tribe who opposed the

arrival of that queen, until finally he imposed her".

Mr. García de Alva makes a mistake when he states in the last paragraph transcribed

above, because the Indians of Sonora -as it happens today- have always respected

the women of the men of the same tribe, even when they are from another ethnic

background.

Legend has it -or perhaps history?- that Coyote-Iguana, the chief who kidnapped the

white girl, was a man of approximately 6' 4" (which was a very common height among

the ancient Seris, who were the tallest of all native Americans) and that his muscles

made him invincible in hand-to-hand combats.

They also say that the Seri chieftain fell so madly in love with Lola, that he took her to his village and not wanting

to keep her as a prisoner, built a house for her. The Indian knew the girl could not escape since she did not know

the whereabouts of the Seri community. Also, to this day, oral tradition has it that Coyote-Iguana respected the

girl's integrity for a long time and that at night he would go to her dwelling to sing her love songs in his dialect, and

that those songs were heard all over the village.

Lola, being very young, soon learned how to speak the Seri dialect and followed the traditions of the tribe, starting

to mingle with the single women of the group. Meanwhile, Coyote-Iguana, who had fallen madly in love with her,

would always be seen in battles against government troops or against the warriors of other tribes leading his men

without worrying about losing his own life. That is why the Seris were afraid to lose their chieftain.

On many occasions, the Pima who became a Seri chief, survived wounds that would have killed any other man;

and every time that the giant arrived to the village aided by his warriors, Lola would wash and cure his wounds.

Two years after the kidnapping, Coyote-Iguana lost all hope of conquering Lola's heart and one day he came to

the girl's room and said:

-Tomorrow, before sunrise, you go back to your people. Two warriors to go with you near Guaymas.

Then the white woman answered:

-I do not want to leave.

-Why? -asked the chieftain and she answered lowering her eyes as the Indian women do when their men talk to

them:

-Because I want to be your woman.

Mrs. Manuelita Romero, widow of De la LLata, who died after her 100th birthday in 1933, was my father's aunt and

lived until her death in one of his houses, located on the other corner of the Cathedral of Hermosillo, which was

torn down to make Miguel Hidalgo y Costilla Boulevard. She was an elderly woman who had an extraordinary

memory. That is the reason why I always tried to go with my dad whenever he visited her to provide for her. My

great aunt's stories always moved me or made me happy. She was very charming when she told anecdotes, short

stories or old tales. "It seemed", my sister Gloria says, "that when she used to tell her stories, she would take us by

the hand to the place where the real or fictitious characters were, and would make us feel the emotions that

moved her when she recalled the events of her childhood and youth". With such a long and fruitful life, the very

loved old lady had many things to tell; she loved to tell them and I loved to listen to them.

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One day, Aunt Manuelita told me:

-Ah! If you had seen Lolita Casanova as I did, the girl that a Seri chieftain kidnapped, you would

have thought that you were seeing an angel dressed as a woman. I met her because.... you know?

My dad was also Spanish and one day that we went to Guaymas, we visited the Casanovas. The old

lady thought for a while, as if she were digging in a trunk of memories. Then she went on, with her

eyes fixed on the ceiling of the room, as if she were thinking aloud:

- This was ... was almost eighty years ago... But it seems as if I were looking at her this moment!.

The aunt kept silent again and I noticed she cried inside; for they say that old people do not have any more tears

because they already shed them all. And I felt a lump in my throat when she continued her story.

- Mr. Casanova and his wife died the year after the kidnapping.

When they did not find their daughter, they lost all interest in life. Lolita's uncle took care of the businesses of the

dead man and spent a fortune trying to rescue his niece.

As the old lady stopped talking, surely because the memories moved her emotions, I asked impatiently:

-And what happened at the end, Aunt Manuelita?

-There were revolutions later, many revolutions; the Empire of Maximiliano was imposed and many battles

followed. That is why Lolita's uncle had to stop looking for his niece.

The old lady was silent for a few seconds before going on: -But one day they found her, after fifteen years of the

assault on the stagecoach. My aunt's clear eyes could not see the emotions in my face; the senile blindness

allowed her only to see my silhouette. However, she wanted to please my curiosity and ended her story:

-Lolita did not want to go back to the civilized world. She said she loved Coyote-Iguana.

And I, who was a child, was satisfied with the ending of the story, considering that such a painful drama deserved

a happy ending.

Instituto Sonorense de Cultura

Activity 4a. Your teacher will make teams of four or five and will assign the paragraphs that you are

going to read.Take turns with your team members to read, together summarize your assigned

paragraphs. Then share your team’s summary with the rest of the class by reading it and by writing it

on the board or present it on a flip chart. Collect the rest of the teams’ summaries and discuss the

story in class.

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Evaluation

Activity: 4

Product: Graphic organizer,

summary paragraph and class

discussion.

Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Organizes information of a text to

complete a graphic organizer

and to summarize facts in a

paragraph.

Integrates information of a short

story in a graphic organizer and

summarizes facts in a paragraph.

Collaborates and learns with

partners while developing skill at

summarizing.

Co-evaluation

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Obtained value

Read the story “The kidnapping of Lola Casanova” and fill out the graphic organizer.

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Read the selection from the book “Living to Tell the Tale” a book from one of the most

famous writers of modern times Gabriel García Márquez. Then Answer the questions about

the basic elements of a story.

LIVING TO TELL THE TALE

by Gabriel García Márquez

The Story So Far when Márquez accompanies his mother to his childhood home to help her

sell the house in which they were both raised, he is flooded with memories of his childhood.

This excerpt is from the first book of what will be a three-book-long memoir of his life and work.

IT WAS ALSO MY GRANDFATHER WHO GAVE ME MY first contact with the written word when I

was five, and he took me one afternoon to see the animals in a circus passing through Cataca,

under a tent as large as a church. The one that attracted my attention was a battered, desolate

ruminant with the expression of a frightening mother. “It’s a camel,” my grandfather told me.

Someone standing nearby interrupted: “Excuse me, Colonel, but it’s a dromedary.”

I can imagine now how my grandfather must have felt when someone corrected him in the presence of his

grandson. Without even thinking about it, he went him one better with a worthy question: “What’s the difference?”

“I don’t know,” the other man said, “but this is a dromedary.”

My grandfather was not an educated man and did not pretend to be one, for he had dropped out of the public

school in Riohacha to go and shoot a gun in one of the countless civil wars along the Caribbean. He never

studied again, but all his life he was conscious of the gaps, and he had an avid desire for immediate knowledge

that more than compensated for his deficiencies. That afternoon he returned dejected to his office and consulted

the dictionary with childish attention. Then he and I learned for the rest of our lives the difference between a

dromedary and a camel. In the end he placed the glorious tome in my lap and said:

“This book not only knows everything, but it’s also the only one that’s never wrong.”

It was a huge illustrated book, on its spine a colossal Atlas holding the vault of the universe on his shoulders. I

did not know how to read or write, but I could imagine how correct the colonel was if the book had almost two

thousand large, crowded pages with beautiful drawings. In church I had been surprised by the size of the missal

but the dictionary was thicker. It was like looking out at the entire world for first time.

“How many words does it have?” I asked.

“All of them,” said my grandfather.

The truth is that I did not need the written word at this time because I expressed everything that made an

impression on me in drawings. At the age of four I had drawn a magician who cut off his wife’s head and put it

back on again, just as Richardine had done in his act at the Olympia. The graphic sequence began with the

decapitation by handsaw, continued withthe triumphant display of the bleeding head, and ended with the wife, her

head restored, thanking the audience for its applause. Comic strips had already been invented but I only saw

them later in the color supplement to the Sunday papers. Then I began to invent graphic stories without dialogue.

But when my grandfather gave me the dictionary, it roused so much curiosity in me about words that I read it as if

it were a novel, in alphabetical order, with little understanding. That was my first contact with what would be the

fundamental book in my destiny as a writer.

When children are told the first story that in reality appeals to them, it is very difficult to get them to listen to

another. I believe this is not true for children who are storytellers, and it was not true for me. I wanted more. The

voracity with which I listened to stories always left me hoping for a better one the next day, above all those that

had to do with the mysteries of sacred history.

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Everything that happened to me in the street had an enormous resonance in the house. The

women in the kitchen would tell the stories to the strangers arriving on the train, who in turn brought

other stories to be told, and all of it was incorporated into the torrent of oral tradition. Some events

were first learned through the accordion players who sang about them at fairs, and travelers would

retell them and enhance them. But the most striking story of my childhood occurred very early one

Sunday, on our way to Mass, in an ill-advised sentence spoken by my grandmother:

“Poor Nicolasito is going to miss Pentecost Mass.”

I was happy, because Sunday Mass was too long for a boy my age, and the sermons of Father Angarita, whom I

loved so much as a child, seemed soporific. But it was a vain illusion, for my grandfather almost dragged me to

the Belgian’s studio, in the green velveteen suit I had been dressed in for Mass and that was too tight for me in

the crotch. The police officers recognized my grandfather from a distance and opened the door for him with the

ritual formula:

“Go in, Colonel.”

Only then did I learn that the Belgian had inhaled a solution of gold cyanide—which he shared with his dog—after

seeing All Quiet on the Western Front, the picture by Lewis Milestone based on the novel by Erich Maria

Remarque. Popular intuition, which always finds the truth even when it seems impossible, understood and

proclaimed that the Belgian had not been able to endure the shock of seeing himself crushed with his decimated

patrol in a morass of mud in Normandy.

The small reception room was in darkness because of the closed windows, but the early light from the courtyard

illuminated the bedroom, where the mayor and two more police officers were waiting for my grandfather. There

was the body covered with a blanket on a campaign cot, the crutches within reach, where their owner had left

them before he lay down to die. Beside him, on a wooden stool, was the tray where he had vaporized the cyanide,

and a sheet of paper with large letters written in pencil: “Don’t blame anyone, I’m killing myself because I’m a

fool.” The legal formalities and the details of the funeral, soon resolved by my grandfather, did not take more than

ten minutes. For me, however, they were the most affecting ten minutes I would remember in my life.

The first thing that shook me when I came in was the smell in the bedroom. I learned only much later that it was

the bitter almond smell of the cyanide that the Belgian had inhaled in order to die. But not that or any other

impression would be more intense and long-lasting than the sight of the corpse when the mayor moved the

blanket aside to show him to my grandfather. He was naked, stiff and twisted, his rough skin covered with yellow

hair, his eyes like still pools looking at us as if they were alive. That horror of being seen by the dead shook me for

years afterward whenever I passed the graves without crosses of suicides buried outside the cemetery by order of

the Church. But what I remembered with greatest clarity, along with a charge of horror when I saw the body, was

the boredom of nights in his house. Perhaps that was why I said to my grandfather when we left the house: “The

Belgian won’t be playing chess anymore.”

It was a simple idea, but my grandfather told it to the family as if it were a brilliant witticism. The women repeated it

with so much enthusiasm that for some time I ran from visitors for fear they would say it in front of me or oblige me

to repeat it. This also revealed to me a characteristic of adults that would be very useful to me as a writer: each of

them told the story with new details that they added on their own, until the various versions became different from

the original. No one can imagine the compassion I have felt since then for the poor children whose parents have

declared them geniuses, who make them sing for visitors, imitate birds, even lie in order to entertain. Today I

realize, however, that this simple sentence was my first literary success.

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1. What is the setting of “Living to tell the tale”? ____________________________________________

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2. Would you call the characters in this story stereotypes or rounded characters? __________________________

3. What is the plot question that first interested you in “Living to tell the tale”? ______________________________

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In the selection from Living to Tell the Tale, think about the meaning of each underlined word. Also

consider the context in which the word is used. Then fill in the blank with the letter(s) of the correct

definition(s).

a) Outpouring

b) Quality of having a

large appetite

c) Predetermined

course of events

d) Counterbalanced;

made up for

e) Blended

f) Serving as a basis

or foundation

g) Ability to bring about

a response

h) Eager; enthusiastic

i) Causing drowsiness

or sleep

He never studied again, but all his life he was conscious of the gaps, and he had an avid desire for immediate

knowledge that more than compensated for his deficiencies. ______________________ _____________________

That was my first contact with what would be the fundamental book in my destiny as a writer. __________________

The voracity with which I listened to stories always left me hoping for a better one the next day, above all those

that had to do with the mysteries of sacred history. ______________________________________________________

Everything that happened to me in the street had an enormous resonance in the house. ______________________

The women in the kitchen would tell the stories to the strangers arriving on the train, who in turn brought other

stories to be told, and all of it was incorporated into the torrent of oral tradition. _______________ _____________

I was happy, because Sunday Mass was too long for a boy my age, and the sermons of Father Angarita, whom I

loved so much as a child, seemed soporific. ___________________________________________________________

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Evaluation

Activity: 5

Product: Reading comprehension

exercises, class discussion and

summary paragraph.

Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Selects information to

summarize and write a

paragraph.

Applies knowledge of context clues

to answer question and integrates

ideas and facts to summarize in a

paragraph.

Collaborates and learns with

partners while developing skill at

summarizing.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

Your teacher will make teams of four or five and will assign the paragraphs that you are

going to read. Take turns with your team members to read, together summarize your

assigned paragraphs. Then share your team’s summary with the rest of the class by

reading it and by writing it on the board or present it on a flip chart. Finally collect the rest

of the teams’ summaries and discuss the selection in class.

Write your team’s summary here.

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Investigate and write about the life and work of Gabriel García Márquez (El Gabo) one of

the most famous living writers. He’s also known as the “Father of Magical Realism”.

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Evaluation

Activity: 6 Product: Written report. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Integrates information to write a

report about the life and work of

a famous Latin-American writer.

Searches and writes about the life

and work of a famous Latin-

American writer.

Appreciates the purpose of

literature as a review and the

acquisition of new knowledge

when investigating about facts of

a famous writer.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

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Closing Activity

Plan and write an essay based on Garcia Marquez’ relationship with his grandfather. Use

details from” Living to Tell the Tale” to back up your thesis.

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Activity 7a. Ask a partner to use the rubric to check your essay.

4 3 2 1

Purpose/Task

Accomplishes the task;

includes many details

that are clearly connected

to the development of the

task, but there may be

minor irrelevancies.

Accomplishes the

task; includes some

details that are

generally connected

to the development of

the task, but there

may be some

irrelevancies.

Accomplishes the

task; includes few

details, some of which

may be only loosely

connected to the task.

There are many

irrelevancies.

Attempts to

accomplish the task;

makes some reference

to it but provides few or

no supporting details.

Organization

Exhibits a logical and

coherent sequence

throughout; provides a

clear sense of a

beginning, middle, and

end. Makes smooth

transitions between

ideas.

Exhibits a logical

sequence; provides a

beginning, middle,

and end.

Attempts to provide a

logical sequence

and/or the beginning

or ending is abrupt or

unclear.

Exhibits little order;

provides a series of

separate sentences

and/or disconnected

ideas.

Vocabulary

Includes a wide variety of

vocabulary that expands

the topic, but there may

be minor inaccuracies.

Includes a variety of

vocabulary related to

the topic.

Includes basic

vocabulary; some

vocabulary may be

inaccurate or

unrelated to the topic.

Includes limited

vocabulary and/or

most vocabulary is

inaccurate or unrelated

to the topic.

Structure/

Grammar

Demonstrates a high

control of

structure/grammar:

correct subject-verb

agreement, correct tense,

correct noun-adjective

agreement, correct word

order, and correct

spelling.

Demonstrates some

control of

structure/grammar:

correct subject-verb

agreement, correct

tense, correct noun-

adjective agreement,

correct word order,

and correct spelling.

Demonstrates some

control of

structure/grammar,

but errors due hinder

overall

comprehensibility. Or

writing is below

achievement level.

(Errors 12-17)

Demonstrates little

control of

structure/grammar.

Errors impede overall

comprehensibility of

passage. (Errors 18+)

Evaluation

Activity: 7 Product: Essay and rubric. Value:

Knowledge

Conceptual Procedimental Attitudinal

Writes an essay about the

excerpt from the book “Living to

Tell the Tale”.

Uses his/her own words to write

about the selection from Garcia

Marquez’ book.

Appreciates the purpose of

literature as a review and the

acquisition of new knowledge

when reading about facts of a

famous writer.

Co-evaluation

C MC NC

Obtained value

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Garcia Marquez Gabriel. 2002. “Living to tell the Tale” .Editorial Diana S.A. de C.V. Printed in Mexico. Translated by

Edith Grossman. Published by Alfred A. Knopf, a Division of Random House Inc.

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America.

Kirszner Laurie, Mandel Stephen. 1989. “The Holt Handbook” Second Edition. Holt, Rinehart and Winston Inc. United

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Langan John.1998. “Ten Steps to Building College Reading Skills”. Third Edition.

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Potter Robert R. 1987. “The American Anthology”. Globe Book Company, Inc. Printed in the United States of America.

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Richards Jack C. 1999. “New Interchange” Teacher’s Edition. Cambridge University Press. Printed in the United States

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