IMPROVEMENTS MADE

I made a few changes to my magazine:• Changing image used• Adding a picture to my editors profile• Changing the layout of my info

1. I didn’t like the image I used the first time round on my contents page as I the close up image made the page seem more closed and less neater. The second image I used has a different grey scale what seem to work well with the other images, text, etc… used on my contents page.

2. I added an image of the event I was talking about to illustrate the story written underneath, however I was toying with the idea of having a image of the editor.

3. I changed the image of the chalk board that I used to place my information on, as the other seem too pixelated. I also changed the layout, rather than having a list I had two lists and shorter sentences. In addition to that as I wanted it to seem like a chalk board I did random doddles, I changed the paint brush effect I used to make it seem more like it written using chalk. I also changed the doodles that I used to make it seem less childlike.