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HOW TO WRITE PROBLEMS SOLUTIONS ESSAY
Chng ta s ly writing sau lm v d xuyn sut bi chia s ny cc bn c minh
ha d nht. Cc on paragraphs c chia s t trang ielts-simon.com v c chnh
sa c c mt template d p dng nht cho cc readers nh.
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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will
this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to
reduce the impact of ageing populations.
1. B CC BI VIT PROBLEMS SOLUTIONS
Introduction:
- Introduce the topic: Da vo cu ca bi v paraphrase li cu .
Cu ca bi l: In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing
In the developed world = in industrialised nations
Average life expectancy is increasing = live longer
It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before
- Give your answer to the question
bi hi v problems cng nh solution cho vn trn, do bn cn cp
trc rng thn bi bn s gii quyt Problems v Solutions
Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies
can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
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Body paragraph 1: Problems
- Problem (General).
- Explanation/Example and Result.
Hai vn .
Khi tui th trung bnh tng, s lng ngi c hng ch lng hu s
tng. Kt qu s l chnh ph s phi chi tr tin lng hu cho nhng ngi gi
ng thi chu nhng gim st trong tin thu, v c th lc lng lao ng tr s
phi b vo phn thiu ht .
Ngi ngi ta tr nn gi hn, h thng hay i mt vi cc vn v sc
khe. Khi , chnh ph s phi u t nhiu hn cho dch v chm sc sc khe
cng nh nhng ngi tr s phi dnh nhiu thi gian, tin bc cho vic chm
sc sc khe ngi gi.
Topic Sentence:
Cu topic sentence ng vai tr nh mt cu vn ch ng ngi c bit bn s vit
g trong on vn ny. N l cu tm tt ni dung ca on. C th trong on vn u
tin, bn s ch ra nhng tc ng tiu cc ca vn tng tui th trung bnh
Several related problems can be anticipated when people live longer and the populations
of developed countries grow older.
Problem 1
General problem:
The prime issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be
eligible to receive a pension.
Vn u tin, bn c th s dng nhng cm t nh: The main/first/most obvious/
most important + issue/problem/matter is that + clause
Explanation and result:
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The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will
therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other
words, the increasing number of senior citizens will mean a greater tax burden for
working adults.
Paraphrase: Paraphrase l mt trong nhng vn ng quan tm ca Academic Writing.
Bn khng th dng mt t elderly people t u n cui c. Thay vo , bn c
th s dng: senior citizens/members, people of retirement age, hoc ni v ton th:
ageing population.
Academic Words: Nhng t ng mang tnh hc thut s lm bi vit trang trng v ng
vn phong vit. V d: senior citizens, the number of, tax burden.
Linking words on vn c trnh by logic v d theo di, c kt dnh gia cc
phn, cc on: Moreover, Therefore, In other words.
Problem 2
General problem:
Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare
Further pressures l t dng chuyn sang th 2 ca on. Bn c th s dng cc
cm t khc: Another problem/pressure | Additional problem(s) is.
Explanation:
as a result of the fact that elderly people are often subject to many diseases.
Result:
In this way, the government will have to invest in healthcare and young adults will
increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives..
T , bn c on vn u tin ca thn bi:
Several related problems can be anticipated when people live longer and the populations
of developed countries grow older. The main issue is that there will obviously be more
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people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of
younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less
money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing
population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will
include a rise in the demand for healthcare as a result of the fact that elderly people are
often subject to many diseases. In this way, the government will have to invest more in
healthcare and young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.
Body paragraph 2: Solutions.
C 3 solutions c a ra c th thy rt r t on vn:
- Tng tui v hu trung bnh t 65 ln 70.
- Khuyn khch nhp c tng lng ngi lao ng, nhng ngi s ng thu.
- S dng ngun vn t cc lnh vc khc.
There are several actions that could be taken to eradicate the problems described
above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working
adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to
continue a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to
encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay
taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and
spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers
of older citizens.
SAMPLE:
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It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before.
Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies
can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
Several related problems can be anticipated when people live longer and the populations
of developed countries grow older. The main issue is that there will obviously be more
people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of
younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less
money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing
population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will
include a rise in the demand for healthcare as a result of the fact that elderly people are
often subject to many diseases. In this way, the government will have to invest more in
healthcare and young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described
above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working
adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to
continue a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to
encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes.
Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on
vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older
citizens.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to
arise as the populations of countries grow older.
2. SAMPLE OUTLINE
It is true that -------topic-------. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative
consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
Several related problems can be anticipated when ---------topic----------. The main issue is
that---------problem 1--------Explanation/example--------. Further pressures will include -
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--------problem 2--------Explanation/example-------. ---Topic---- can also result in -----
problem 3--------Explanation/example---
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described
above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to -----solution 1--------Explanation/example--
------. A second measure would be -----solution 2 -------- Explanation/example--------
..Finally, ---- solution 3 --------Explanation/example--------.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to
arise as-------topic--------.
Template c sn cho bn trn 100 words, v nhim v ca bn s n gin hn
rt nhiu khi ch cn hon thnh 150 words cn li trong vng 40 pht
Template c sn nhng t v cm t academic nh nhng v kh li hi t
im cao hn
Template rt d p dng cho cc bi dng problems solutions
Tuy nhin, khng c mt template no l hon ha tuyt i, v khun mu ny
cng khng ngoi l. Nu bn l dn khi D v ngoi ng tt, bn khng nn gi
gn mnh trong khun mu nht nh no.
3. NGN NG V CU TRC S DNG
Dng din t mi quan h gia nguyn nhn v kt qu
RESULT Due to
Owing to
Because of
Caused by
Brought about by
.. CAUSE
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On account of
As a result of
CAUSE .. Results in
Causes
Gives rise to
Leads to
Brings about
Accounts of
RESULT
a ra cch gii quyt
Trong cu trc ny bn nn s dng cu b ng s nhn mnh c cch gii quyt m
bn a ra .
Steps
Measures
Should
Must
Could
Be taken So as to
In order to
Solve .
Overcome
Combat
Deal with
Eradicate
Serious attempts to halt/ prevent / solve .must be taken
One (possible)
Another
Way to Solve/ overcome/
combat/ deal
This problem
The problem
Would be
Is.
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An alternative with/ eradicate of.
People Should focus their/ our
attention on ways
To solve/ overcome the problem of .
To improve the situation of
To reduce the impacts of .on society..
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