Cách Viết Bài Ielts Writing Task 2 Từ a – z

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CCH VIT BI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 TAZ

Writing and Speaking course

BI 1: 4 DNG CU HI TRONG IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Loi 1 : Argumentative essay

Argumentative essay cn c ci tn khc l dng Opinion essay. Dng cu hi a ra mt

kin c nhn vcc topics quen thuc trong IELTS v hi mt mt trong nhng cu hi nh

To what extend do you agree or disagree hoc what are your opinions on this.

Dng ny yu cu ngi vit phi ng vmt pha ca vn v thuyt phc ngi c ti

sao mnh l ng vpha . Bng cch no, bng cch a ra dn chng, gii thch v v du

ngi c hiu c l do.

V ddi y sgip bn hiu hn vvn ny:

Children watch too much TV nowadays and this is bad for their education and development.

To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Vi bi trn, kin c a ra bn lun l: vic trem xem qu nhiu tivi ngy ny l

khng tt cho gio dc v spht trin ca chng. Kha cnh no ca vn m bn ng

hay khng ng ,

Bn c 3 cch trli

1) Cch 1

Hon ton ng vi kin trn. Nh vy bi vit ca bn cn thhin cc dn chng chng

minh rng vic xem tivi nh hng n sc khe v pht trin nh skhin trem nghin, tn

nhiu thi gian xem TV , khng ch n hc tp v khi xem TV, nhng a trsbt trc

v thc nhng hnh ng trong phim bnh hng.

2) Cch 2


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Hon ton khng ng vi kin trn. Trong trng hp ny bn li cn chng minh iu

ngc li vi kin trn, v dnh gip chng hc ngoi ngkhi xem phim nc ngoi, tng

cng hiu bit qua cc chng trnh, gii tr sau gilm vic.

3) Cch 3

Na ng na khng ng . Bi essay ca bn skt hp l do chng minh rng nhnnh ny va c mt ng, va c mt sai.

Bn c thty chn lp trng ca mnh, min l c l l, dn chng thuyt phc ngi

chm. Bn c thagree, disagree hoc partly agree, iu khng nh hng n im

sca bi.

Loi 2 : Discussion essay

Dng bi ny c hai cch nha ra u bi: a ra 1 kin v yu cu tho lun 2 mt ca kin hoc a ra 2 kin v yu cu tho lun 2 kin .

Dngbi discussion essay cng c thhi v kin c nhn: Bn ng vi kin no hn?

Bn ng vi quan im no hn?

V d

Some people think that sense of competition should be encouraged in children. However,

others consider cooperation more important to make them good adults. Discuss both these

views and give your opinion.

V d i vi ny, bn s nhn thy r quan im l Some people think that sense of

competition should be encouraged in children v quan im s 2 l others consider

cooperation more important to make them good adults.

Trong bi essay, bn cn a ra l do ti sao mi ngi li c suy nghthnht, ti sao mi

ngi l nghtheo cch s2 v thhin kin c nhn (give your opinion) xem bn ng vi

kin no. Nu bi khng hi kin c nhn, bn tuyt i khng nhc n kin c nhn

trong vi vit.


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Loi 3 : Causes, Ef fects and Solutions

Dng c coi l dnht trong IELTS Writing! a ra 1 hin tng no , yu cu tm

ra nhng nguyn nhn gy ra hin tng v nhng tc ng ca n v nhng gii php cho

hin tng .

Tuy nhin trong thc t vi thi tht, hu nh examiner ch hi 2/3 thng tin trn, hoccausessolutions, causeseffects hoc effectssolutions

V d

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also

created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with

the Internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Problems: flooding dangerous sites and hacking sensitive information of government or

company.

Solutions: distributing adequate legislation to prevent people from approaching dangerous or

unsuitable sites and improving onsite IT security systems.

Loi 4: Twopart question

Dng ny l dng kh thc s. Vi dng ny mi c hai cu hi v yu cu bn ln lt ch

ra nhng l do trli tng dng cu hi.

V d:

Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads

to a more satisfying working life.

To what extent do you agree with this view?

What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

Nh vy bi writing task 2 c chia thnh 4 dng cu hi nh sau:

1. Argumentative essay

2. Discussion essay

3. Causes, effects and solutions essay

4. Two-part question essay


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BI 2: BCC 3 PHN CA BI IELTS WRITING

I. Introduction

-Cu u tin: Gii thiu topic ang c a ra tho lun. Hiu n gin hn, cu u

tin c chc nng din t li bi theo cch ring ca bn.

-Cu s2: Khng nh thng tin scha trong bi essay. lm c vic , bn cn th

hin cu trli ca mnh ti y

Chng ta scng chra cch vit introduction chtrong vng 2 pht vi v dsau y nh.

Cu hi : To solve the matter of unemployment, some people claim that governments should

replace main staff in companies by the unemployed to work for some days dur ing a week. To

what extent do you agree or disagree

Mt cu hi thuc dng bi argumentative essay vvic thay thnhn vin chnh bng nhng

ngi tht nghip lm mt vi ngy trong tun v hi bn c ng vi kin hay khng.

Cu s1

Bn cn vit li cu bi ny theo cch ring ca mnh To solve the matter of

unemployment, some people claim that governments should replace main staff in companies

by the unemployed to work for some days during the week. Vit nh thno? Hy thay

i ch ng ca cu. Cu cho, ch ng trong mnh chnh lgovernments.

Trong cu c cha 1 sdanh tnh main staff, the unemployed, companies v nhng danh

tny hon ton c thng vai tr l chngca cu. Nhrng bn c 7 cch vit cu cng

ngha , v y chnh l lc bn p dng nhng cch vit ny. Cng thvit li cu chny

nh.

Ch ng l main staff: It is sometimes argued that main staff in companies should bereplaced by the unemployed to work for some days in a week to solve the matter of

unemployment

Chng l the unemployed: It is sometimes argued that the unemployed should replace


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main staff to work for some days in a week to solve the matter of unemployment

Chngl companies: It is sometimes argued that companies should replace mainstaff in

companies by the unemployed to work for some days during a week to solve a matter of

unemployment

Chngl replace: It is sometimes argued that the replacement of main staff incompaniesby the unemployed to work for some days during a week can solve a matter of unemployment

Vy l bn c 1 cu paraphrase li topic ca bi. Bn chc hn ang bn khon ti sao

cch vit li ny dng rt nhiu nhng t c trong bi? Nhim v tip theo, thay th

nhng t c trong bi bng mt thoc cm tng ngha.

Main staff = major employees

The unemployed = the jobless = jobless people = people without job

Replace = substitute, replacement = substitution

To solve a matter of unemployment = to combat the problem of the

increasing unemployment rate = to decline the unemployment rate

Sau khi c c nhng tng ngha thay thny, bn dng vit c 1 cu gii thiu

topic nh sau:

It is sometimes argued that the substitution of major employees in companies by the

jobless for some days per week is a measure to combat the problem of the increasing

unemployment rate.

Chc mt iu ch rng khng phi bn thay i ch ngv vit cu mi xong ri mi

quan li thay thbng tng ngha. Ban lm hai bc ny trong cng lc vavit li cu

va paraphrasebng nhng tv cm tng ngha. Bn c khng cnvit 4 cu nh tivit trn, bi vit nhm gip bn tham kho cc cch vit khc nhau. Trong bi ca mnh, bn

chcn 1 cu duy nht.

Cu s2


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Tip theo bn cn lm g? a ra p n cho cu trli trn. Cthhn, bi hi bn do you

agree or disagree. Bn c thtrli bng mt trong 3 cch sau:

1. Personally, I strongly disagree with this idea.

2. Personally, I strongly agree with this idea.

3. Personally, I partly agree with this idea.

V y l thnh qulao ng trong vng 2 pht:

I t is sometimes argued that the substitution of major employees in companies by the jobless

for some days per week i s a measure to combat the problem of the increasing unemployment

rate. Personall y, I strongly disagree with th is idea.

II. Body

Thn bi l phn quan trng nht quyt nh im s trong bi Writing task 2 ca bn. Bn

bit iu nhng khng bit lm thno ti u ha cch vit cch vit ca mnh? Bn

ang thiu hai kin thc quan trng vNI DUNG V HNH THC ca bi essay. Xin chc

mng v bn ang ng trang blog cung cp y kin thc bn ang thiu.

Vit g trong phn thn bi ca tng dng cu hi trong IELTS Writing task 2?

Bcc bi vn 3 phn r rng l vy, cch vit mbi, thn bi hay thm ch vit kt bi cng

u c chia s. Cu hi tip theo: Vit g trong tng dng cu hi? Ni khci, 3 cch b

cc on thn bi trn chgip bn trli cu hi vit nh thno, cn ni dung di y s

trli gip bn cu hi vit ci g.

1. Vi dng argumentative essay

Dng argumentative essay a ra mt kin vmt vn x hi v hi xem bn ng hay

khng ng vi kin c nu ra. V dbi University education should be f ree to

everyone, regardless of i ncome.To what extent do you agree or disagree? hibn ng hayphi i vi kin cho rng gio dc i hc nn c cung cp min ph. Bn c 3 cch

trli dng cu hi trn.


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ng hon ton

Nu bn ng vi kin trn, trong phn thn bi ca bn phi vit ci g? Vit vcc l do

thuyt phc bn ng vi kin a ra trong bi. V dvi bi trn, cc l do c

thl:

- To ra c hi hc tp cng bng cho tt cmi ngi bt kkhnng ti chnh ca h

- Khuyn khch nhiu ngi tham gia hc i hc hn, do to c ngun nhn lc c

hc vn tt v c knng trong tng lai.

Khi bn chc 2 l do thuyt phc bn ng hon ton vi quan im trn, mi l do s

c trnh by trong mt on body theo cch s2 hoc s3. Nhng nu bn c nhiu hn hai

l do, bn c thchn gia vic kt hp cch vit s1 (trnh by 2 3 l do khin bn ng )

vi cch vit s2 hoc s3 (trnh by 1 l do khin bn ng ).Tuy nhin, hy lu rng bn lun cn m bo di ca hai on thn bi nn tng i

bng nhau.

Phn i hon ton

Nu bn hon ton phn i, ni dung cn vit trong phn thn bi hon ton ngc li vi

vic bn hon ton ng . Trong thn bi, bn a ra cc l do phn i kin u bi, gi i

thch v ly v d lm r cch l do ny. C nhng l do no khin bn phn i vn trn?

- Giodc i hc rt t vi nhiu chi ph (lng gio vin, cng nhn, gio trnh, cng

chc tp) nn hc sinh nn phi trmt phn nhng khon

- Hc sinh c rt nhiu ci li, c bit vmt kinh tsau khi tham gia gio dc i hc

(nghnghip tt, lng cao) nn hnn phi tr- Nu khng mt g m c ththam gia hc tp, hc sinh thng trnn li bing, thiu c

gng nn trph tham gia hc i hc ng vai tr nh mt ng lc khuyn khch hchm

hc hn


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Na ng na phn i

y l cch vit ba phi v bn va ng li va phn i vi kin a ra, hay ni khc

i bn chn li balanced essay.Chnh v vy, trong hai on thn bi, mt on bn strli

cu hi: ti ng vi kin trn v cc l do . Cn on thn bi kia strli cu hi: ti

khng ng vi kin trn v cc l do.. Cch vit ny d dng hn rt nhiu v bcctng on thn bi u c tchc theo cch 1 bn a ra nhiu l do ng hoc nhiu l

do phn i trong cng mt on, bn khng phi i qu su vo tng l do lm r n.

2. Vi dng cu hi discussion essay

Cch vit dng bi discussion essay s c mt cht ging vi cch vit dng bi balanced

argumentative essay nn cc bn hy c khai phn ny trnh nhm ln.

Tho lun khng hi kin c nhn

Hu ht cc discussion thng nu ra 2 kin tho lun nh thny: Some peoplethink

that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others,however, believe

there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views. Vit g trong tng

on thn bi? Chng ta strli cu hi ny nh sau:

on body 1: Nu cc l do gii thch kin u tin v sao mi ngi li nghcchtt nht

gim ti phm l tng n t ln?

- Hc nhiu thi gian ci to hn

- Hkhng thgy n trong thi gian t

on body 2: Nu cc l do gii thch kin th2v sao mi ngi li nghc nhiucch

khc gim tlti phm?

- Hthy rng thc tnhiu nc ko di n t nhng tlti phm vn tng.

- Hthy rng cho ngi t tham gia vo cc community services phc vcng ng stthn vic ko di n t

Tho lun c hi kin c nhn

Khi cu hi discussion c kin cnhn (give your opinion) th kin c nhn snm u?


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kin c nhn trong bi discussion mun hi bn nghing v kin thnht hn hay th2

hn. Nu bn nghing v kin no hn, hy t n vo on body th2 tng tnh phn

trn.

3. Vi dng cu hi causes/effects and solutions essay

Hi vcauses and effects

on 1 nu cc nguyn nhn gy ra vn , on 2 a ra cc nh hng ca vn .

Thng cc nh hng m bi mun ni n l cc nh hng xu, nhng i vi mt s

vn bn cng c tha ra cc nh hng tt ca vn (v dchnh sch khoch ha ra

nh c im tt rt r rng l bmc thnui dy v cung cp cc iu kin gip con ci

pht trin tt hn..)

Hi vcauses and solutions

on mt nu cc nguyn nhn gy nn vn , on hai gi cc cch gii quyt vn . Mi

on bn nn a ra 2 n 3 nguyn nhn gy nn n v 2 n 3 cch gii quyt.

Hi veffects and solutions

on 1 nu ra cc nh hng ca vn , on 2 nu ra cch cch gii quyt cc nh hng .

Mi on bn nn a ra 2 n 3 nh hng v 2 n 3 cch gii quyt.

4. Vi dng cu hi two-part question

i vi dng cu hi two-part question ny, sc hai cu hi trong bi, mi on thn bi

ca bn hy trli mt cu hi . V d:

Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of

children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and

what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

on body 1 trli cu hi s1

Cc nh hng tiu cc ca vic chi games l g? Bn strnh by trong on body 1 mt s

nhng nh hng sau:


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- Mc mt sbnh tt nh cn th, bnh do ngi nhiu nh bo ph

- Dn n cc hnh vi bo lc

- Sao nhng hc hnh do nghin games

on body 2 trli cu hi s2

Cu hi s2 hi vcc cch gii quyt nhng nh hng xu ca chi games, bn c thdng

mt s sau trli:

- Xp hng games theo ni dung bmc thkim sot v la chn nhng tr games

thch hp

- Hn chthi gian chi games ca tr

Vit on body trong IELTS Writing task 2 nh thno?

Hu ht cc dng cu hi trong IELTS Writing task 2 nn c trnh by lm r trong2 on

body. Bcc ca mi on body c ththeo 1 trong 3 cch sau:

1. Cch 1

Cch bcc ny c dng trong trng hp bn 2 n 3 l do (hay hiu n gin hn l 2

n 3 lun im) support cho kin c nu topic sentence. D bn c nhiu hn th

cng chnn chn 2 3 l do thi m bo thi gian, di bi vit cng nh tng

xng gia cc on nh.

Topic sentence: Gii thiu chnh ca on

Supporting idea 1: Lm r cho cu ch

Suppoting idea 2: Lm r cho cu ch

Supporting idea 3: Lm r cho cu ch

V dtrong bi ny c 3 ldo m tc gibi vit khng ng vi quan im nu ra bi

l: kh n tnh ton mc thuring cho tng gia nh, mi ngi lun c yu cu ng

thucho cc dch vx hi v vic mt cng bng nu chnh sch trn c thc hin

For a vari ety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for f amil ies who pay for pri vate


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education. F ir stly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount of taxeducation for

these families, and staff would be required to manage this complex process. Secondly,we all

pay a certain amount of tax for public services that we may not use. For example, most people

are fortunate enough not to have to call the police or firebrigade at any time in their lives, but

they would not expect a tax reduction for this.Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax

discount for sending their children toprivate schools, we might have a situation where poorer

people pay higher taxes than the rich..

2. Cch 2

Cch bcc ny c dng trong trng hp bn chc duy nht 1 l do support cho kin

c nu topic sentence.


Explanation: Gii thch lm r kin trn bng l lca bn

Example: a ra v dthuyt phc ngi c i theo hng ca bn

I n my opinion, we shoul d all be happy to pay our share of the money that supports public

schools.It is beneficial for all members of society to have a high qualityeducation system with

equal opportunities for all young people. This will result in a well-educated workforce, and in

turn a more productive and prosperous nation. Parents of children in private schools may also

see the advantages of this in their own lives. Forexample, a company owner will need well

qualified and competent staff, and a well-funded education system can provide such employees.

3. Cch 3

Cch ny tng i kh vit nhng li rt chc chn trong vic khng nh quan im ca

ngi vit, cch vit counter-argument paragraph. Phnh kin i ngc l cch tt nht

khng nh kin ca mnh l ng. Vi cch s3 ny, bn tham kho 1 on bi mu khc

vvic hc nhm v hc c nhn nh.


Counter-argument: Nu ln kin i ngc vi kin nhc n cu ch


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Rebuttal: Khng nh kin xut hin counter-argument l sai, l khng hp l

There are a number of ways to learn a foreign language. Students can study alone from a book,

or go to a country where the language is spoken and learn while living there. For the majority

of learners, however, taking a private or group language lesson is a natural choice. Some

people believe that private lessons are a better way to acquire a language because they aremore flexible and so can meet students specific needs. However, in reality, group lessons can

provide benifits private lessons cannot. Group lessons are more effective for language learning

because they allow students to learn from each other, reduce the stress of the learning

environment, and create a supportive atmosphere.

III. Conclusion

1. Khng c thng tin mi trong conclusion

Khi chng ta xem phim hoc vit bi nghlun x hi trng cp 3, chng ta thng c cm

tci kt m tc ci kt khng chtm tt li ni dung chnh trong bi vit m cngi

mcho bi nhng cnh ca mi, nhng suy nghmi vtopic ang c tho lun. Tuy nhin,

ng vit nh vy trong IELTS Writing task 2.

Conclusion trong IELTS Writing task 2 chnn lm nhim vduy nht: Tm tt li cu trli

a ra trong mbi. Nu bn c yu cu a ra kin c nhn trong bi, ng

dnh n n cui conclusion mi khng nh kin ca bn l g. kin nn c trnh

by xuyn sut trong bi essay tmbi, thn bi cho n tn kt bi.

Nothing is new in the conclusion

2. Chmt cu l vit conclusion

Mt cu duy nht cho bn khng nh li ni dung ca ton bi v bn chcn lm mt

nhim vduy nht: paraphrase cu trli m bn a ra trong introduction. Ni xung th kh

hiu qu nh, nhc li kin thc vcch vit introduction cht nh. Phn introduction gm c

hai cu:
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Cu s1: Gii thiu topic ang c a ra tho lun. Hiu n gin hn, cu u tin c

chc nng din t li bi theo cch ring ca bn (paraphrase bi bng cc tv cm t

ng ngha).

Cu s2: Khng nh thng tin scha trong bi essay. lm c vic , bn cn thhin

cu trli ca mnh ti y

Bn a ra cu trli cho cu hi trong bi phn mbi, bn cng gii thch c

cu tr li ca mnh trong phn thn bi. V tip tc, khi i n phn kt lun bn cn

paraphrase li cu s2 theo cch vit mbi nh trn. Nhng khng c ngha l chng ta copy

li ton bcu s2 ca phn mbi m cn phi din t n theo cch khc. Chng ta c th

dng cc tkhc, cc cu trc cu v cch din t khc.

BI 3: CCH VIT DNG BI ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

Ba hng trli cu hi Argumentative Essay

Chng ta sdng bi mu sau y phn tch lm r 3 hng trli dng cu hi ny.

University education should be free to everyone, regardl ess of i ncome. To what extent do you

agree or disagree?

Hng 1: ng hon ton

Nu bn ng hon ton vi kin trn, hy khng nh kin c nhn ca bn ngay trong

phn mbi It is sometimes argued that all students should not be charged for university

education. I totally agree with the opinion. Bn c thdng motuyp vit mbi nh trn vi

tt ccc cu hi argumentative essay nh.

Nu bn ng vi kin trn, trong phn thn bi ca bn phi vit ci g? Vit vcc l do

thuyt phc bn ng vi kin a ra trong bi. V dvi bi trn, cc l do cthl:

To ra c hi hc tp cng bng cho tt cmi ngi bt kkhnng ti chnhca h


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Khuyn khch nhiu ngi tham gia hc i hc hn, do to c ngun nhn lc c

hc vn tt v c knng trong tng lai.

Khi bn chc 2 l do thuyt phc bn ng hon ton vi quan im trn, mi l do s

c trnh by trong mt on body theo cch s2 hoc s3 trong bi Hng dn cch vit

thn bi trong IELTS Writing task 2. Nhng nu bn c nhiu hn hai l do, bn c thchngia vic kt hp cch vit s1 (trnh by 2 3 l do khin bn ng ) vi cch vit s2 hoc

s3 (trnh by 1 l do khin bn ng ). Tuy nhin, hy lu rng bn lun cn m bo

di ca hai on thn bi nn tng i bng nhau.

Tm li, khi ng hon ton vi kin trong bi, xuyn sut bi vit bn phi support

cho kin c nhn ca bn.

Hng 2: Khng ng hon ton

Khi khng ng vi kin nu ra bi, bi vit ca bn stheo cch bcc tng phn

nh sau.

1. Introduction: topic + your opinion

It is sometimes argued that all students should not be charged for university education. I

totally disagree with the opinion.

2. First idea to support your opinion

3. Second idea to support your opinion

4. Conclusion: repeat your opinion

Nu bn hon ton phn i, ni dung cn vit trong phn thn bi hon ton ngc li vi

vic bn hon ton ng . Trong thn bi, bn a ra cc l do phn i kin u bi, gi i

thch v ly v d lm r cch l do ny. C nhng l do no khin bn phn i vn

trn? Gio dc i hc rt t vi nhiu chi ph (lng gio vin, cng nhn, gio trnh,

cng chc tp) nn hc sinh nn phi trmt phn nhng khon


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Hc sinh c rt nhiu ci li, c bit vmt kinh tsau khi tham gia gio dc i hc

(nghnghip tt, lng cao) nn hnn phi tr

Nu khng mt g m c ththam gia hc tp, hc sinh thng trnn li bing, thiu

cgng nn trph tham gia hc i hc ng vai tr nh mt ng lc khuyn khch h

chm hc hn

Hng 3: Na ng na phn i

Cch vit na ng na phn i c thl cch vit dnht v bn khng phi o su vo

gii thch cc l do v sao ng , v sao phn i. Vi cch trli cu hi nh trn, bi vit

ca bn stheo bcc nh sau:

1. Introduction: topic + say that you partly agree

It is sometimes argued that all students should not be charged for university education. Ipartly agree with the opinion.

2. One the one hand, I agree that.

3. On the other hand, I do not think

4. Conclusion, repeat that you accept elements of both arguments

y l cch vit ba phi v bn va ng li va phn i vi kin a ra, hay ni khc

i bn chn li balanced essay.Chnh v vy, trong hai on thn bi, mt on bn strli

cu hi: ti ng vi kin trn v cc l do . Cn on thn bi kia strli cu hi: ti

khng ng vi kin trn v cc l do.. Cch vit ny d dng hn rt nhiu v bcc

tng on thn bi u c tchc theo cch 1 bn a ra nhiu l do ng hoc nhiu l

do phn i trong cng mt on, bn khng phi i qu su vo tng l do lm r n.

Nhng cng c bit ch skhc nhau gia dng bi balanced argumentative essay vi dng

bi discussion essay nh.


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Con ngi quan trng hn con vt

Con ngi vn csdng con vt cho nhng mc ch ca mnh ttrc n nay, v

li ch ca vic l rt ln

Bc 3: Bcc bi vit

Mbi

Nu ra vn ang c tho lun v gii thiu hai kin. Ch hai vn trn chc gii

thiu l kin ca mt vi ngi v ngi khc chkhng phi kin ca ngi vit v

bi khng hhi n kin c nhn ca tc gi. n gin hn, tt cnhng phn c gch

chn di phn mbi mu di y u c thc p dng vi cc bi discussion essay

khc khi n khng hi v kin c nhn.

The exploitation of animals by human is under controversy. While some people subscribe to the

view that it is inevitable for human being to sacrifice animals for their benefits such as

research and food, others agree that this behavior is unacceptable.

Thn bi

on 1 phn tch l do v sao mt vi ngi li ng vi kin u tin. Vcch b cc

phn thn bi, bn c cthhn trong bi vit Hng dn cch vit phn thn bi, nhng ch

quan trng l cu topic sentence (cu u tin ca on thn bi s1), ngi a ra kinvn l mi ngi nh. Nhng phn gch chn khc l nhng tv cm tdng chuyn

trong on vn ny.

On the one hand, people would concur that animals should not be exploited by people because

they also have the same rights as humans, and we have no rights to take their lives. Animals

are human friends on this planet, so killing them is extremely merciless and immoral

behaviors.Another equally critical reason is that because the physical structures of human and

animals are not totally the same, the products passed safely in animal test may not be a

suitable cure for humans, or even trigger many side-effects or death for users. Finally, there

are many other alternatives rather than animals to satisfy human needs. For example, humans


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can get all the nutrients and vitamins that they need from green vegetables and fruit, or human

cells and tissues can show clearly how the new drugs work.

on thn bi th2 tip tc phn tch ti sao nhng ngi cn li li ng vi kin th2.

Tni On the one hand on the other hand l cch rt tt m cc k n gin lin kt hai

on thn bi vi nhau.

On the other hand, there are several reasons to clarify why the use of animals for human basic

needs is acceptable. Primarily, humans have power over animals because the former is

considered the natural supremacy, and therefore, they can manipulate the latter in the way

they want, even dipping it into a hotplate to try new drugs or killing them for food. Moreover,

humans have exploited animals for their selfish benefits for a long time, so they find nothing

wrong to continue killing animals. Finally, it is undeniable that animals provide human beings

with fruitful benefits; for example, animal experiments organized to test vaccines against

smallpox or avian flu successfully have saved thousands of lives.

Kt bi

Phn kt bi khng lm nhim vg khc ngoi vic nhc li hai kin trn

2. Discussion essay with opinion

Bc 1: Phn tch bi

Chng ta s vn tip tc vi bi trn, ch thay i mt cht trong cu hi thy c s

khc nhau ca hai dng bi discussion ny.

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they

should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals

to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and

give your opinion.

Khng ch dng li vic nh gi hai kin tri chiu nh trn, bi cn yu cu bn a

ra kin c nhn ca mnh. kin c nhn y chnh l vic bn ng vi kin 1 (con


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Ch n gin bng vic nhn mnh kin c nhn kin no bn nghing v hn, bn s

nhm ng vo vic tr li cu hi trong bi hn. Tuy nhin cng ch s khc nhau gia

dng bi balanced argumentative essay vi dng bi discussion essay v thc s hai dng bi

ny ch khc nhau 1 cht.

BI 6: CCH VIT DNG BI PROBLEMS SOLUTIONS ESSAY

1.

BCC BIVIT PROBLEMSSOLUTIONS

Introduction:

- Introduce the topic: Da vocuca bivparaphrase li cu.

Cuca bil:In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing

In the developed world = in industrialised nations

Average life expectancy is increasing = live longer

It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before

- Give your answer to the question

bihi vproblems cng nhsolution cho vn trn,do bn cncp trc rng

thn bi bn sgii quyt Problems v Solutions

Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can

take steps to mitigate these potential problems.

Body paragraph 1: Problems

- Problem (General).

- Explanation/Example and Result.

Hai vn .

Khi tui thtrung bnh tng,slng ngi c hng chlng hu stng.Kt

qusl chnh phsphi chi trcho nhng ngi khng cn lm vic ng gp vo


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spht trin kinh tng thi chu nhng gim st trong tin thu, v c thlc lng

lao ng trsphi b vo phn thiu ht .

Khi lng ngi gi tng,p lc sdn ln chm sc sc khe. Khi , chnh phs

phi u t nhiu hn cho dch vchm sc sc khe cng nh nhng ngi tr s

phi dnh nhiu thi gian, tin bc cho vic chm sc sc khe ngi gi.

Topic Sentence:

Trong cu vn u tin, ngi phi bo hiu rng trong on vn ny, bn sni vnhng vn

ca vic tng tui thtrung bnh:

Several related problems can be anticipated when people live longer and the populations of

developed countries grow older.

(Khi con ngi sng lu hn v dn snhng nc pht trin ang trnn gi hn, c thd

on c nhng vn lin quan ny sinh).

Problem 1

General problem:

The prime issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be

eligible to receive a pension.

Vn u tin, bn c th s dng nhng cm t nh: The main/first/most obvious/most

apparent/most noteworthy/most important + issue/problem/matter is that + clause

Explanation and result:

The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore

receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, the

increasing number of senior citizens will mean a greater tax burden for working adults.

Paraphrase: Paraphrase l mt trong nhng vn ng quan tm ca Academic Writing. Bn

khng th dng mt t elderly people t u n cui c. Thay vo , bn c th s

dng: senior citizens/members, people of retirement age, hoc ni v ton th: ageing

population.


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Academic Words: Nhng tngmang tnh hc thut slm bi vit trang trng v ng vn

phong vit. V d: senior citizens, the number of, tax burden.

Linking words on vn c trnh by logic v dtheo di, c kt dnh gia cc phn, cc

on: Moreover, Therefore, In other words.

Problem 2

General problem:

Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare

Further pressuresl tdng chuyn sang th2 ca on. Bn c thsdng cc cm t

khc: Another problem/pressure | Aditional problem(s) | What is of equal

seriousness/importance is.

Explanation:

as a result of the fact that elderly people are often subject to many diseases, which is

detrimental to their health

Result:

In this way, the government will have to invest in healthcare and young adults will increasingly

have to look after their elderly relatives..

T, bn con vn u tinca thn bi:

Several related problems can be anticipated when people live longer and the populations of

developed countries grow older. The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of

retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working

adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to

the size of the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden

for working adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare as aresult of the fact that elderly people are often subject to many diseases, which is detrimental to

their health. In this way, the government will have to invest more in healthcare and young

adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.


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from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a

productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to encourage

immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally, money

from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare,

accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as

the populations of countries grow older.

2.

SAMPLE OUTLINE

It is true that -------topic-------. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative

consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.

Several related problems can be anticipated when ---------topic----------. The main issue is that-

--------problem 1--------Explanation/example--------. Further pressures will include ---------

problem 2--------Explanation/example-------. ---Topic---- can also result in -----problem 3-----

---Explanation/example---

There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above.

Firstly, a simple solution would be to -----solution 1--------Explanation/example--------. A

second measure would be -----solution 2 -------- Explanation/example--------..Finally, ----

solution 3--------Explanation/example--------.

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as

the populations of countries grow older.

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