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Semakin zaman berlalu, telefon bimbit melalui pelbagai reka bentuk. Pada awalnya, telefon bimbit agak berat dan besar tetapi kini, telefon bimbit semakin kecil dan mudah untuk dibawa ke mana-mana sahaja. Bukan sahaja orang yang bekerja, malah remaja juga kini ramai yang memiliki telefon bimbit. Di sini, saya akan membincangkan tentang kebaikan dan keburukan memiliki telefon bimbit. Saya akan membincangkan tiga kebaikan telefon bimbit. Antaranya : Pertama sekali, penggunaan telefon bimbit memudahkan remaja untuk menghubungi keluarga di mana-mana sahaja mereka berada. Contohnya, pada waktu kecemasan, kita dengan mudah boleh meminta bantuan ahli keluarga. Kita juga boleh memberitahu ibu atau bapa jikalau perlu pulang lewat agar mereka tidak rasa bimbang akan keselamatan anak-anaknya. Kebaikan yang kedua adalah tentang memuat turunkan maklumat dengan menggunakan teknologi 'bluetooth'. Kita boleh melungsuri internet di telefon bimbit tersebut dan menyimpan data-data dengan mudah untuk menyelesaikan sesuatu projek. Merapatkan silaturahim dengan rakan yang berada jauh di rantauan adalah kebaikan yang ketiga. Telefon bimbit 3G membolehkan kita membuat panggilan video dengan rakan di luar negeri. Teknologi sebegini membenarkan kita berbual sambil melihat wajah pemanggil, dan ini boleh mengubati perasaan yang rindu terhadap diri kita. Di sebalik kebaikan yang telah disebutkan tadi, ada juga beberapa keburukan yang perlu diingatkan. Yang pertama, jika kita tidak tahu mengawal kos, penggunaan telefon bimbit boleh mencapai beribuan dolar atau ringgit. Contohnya, kos membuat panggilan video agak mahal jika kita terlalu asyik berbual sehingga tidak sedari masa yang terlalu lama bergantung di telefon. Remaja-remaja sekarang juga saling bersaing untuk memiliki model telefon yang terkini. Setiap kali, ibu bapalah yang mengeluarkan duit untuk mencapai keinginan remaja yang mahukan telefon bimbit. Bagi orang yang berkemampuan sederhana, ini menjadi suatu bebanan untuk memaksa diri memiliki benda yang tidak mereka mampu. Yang penting sekali ialah ini memupuk persaingan yang kurang sihat. Kita patut bersyukur terhadap apa yang kita ada. Penggunaan telefon bimbit berpanjangan mungkin dapat dikaitkan dengan sejenis kanser, satu kajian penting akan mendedahkan bukti bahawa mereka yang sering berbual panjang menggunakan telefon bimbit mempunyai risiko tambahan mendapat ketumbuhan otak yang berpotensi membawa maut.

1. bile Phones - a great invention?

Mobile phone is a good technology which is not lacking from our lives. This report will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones. Today, mobile phone has become popular to everybody since it is very convenient. The most advantage of having a mobile phone is you can communicate to your family and your friends no matter what where you are. For instance, you can contact easily to your friends by calling or sending messages everywhere without electricity. It is maybe the main reason why almost all people today choose to own a mobile phone. From the customers point of view, it is obvious that mobile phones assist you in business a lot, such as, make schedule of working, surf the internet, and keep in touch with their companies. Moreover, you can relax with mobile phones applications, for example, play games, listen to music, or chat with your friends. On the other hand, there are also disadvantages. Using a lot mobile phone can harm your brain, particularly teenager and children who are under 16 years old. If you use mobile phones too much, you will get bad effects like dizzy, blood-brain barrier, or ears problems. In addition, when you use mobile phones while you are driving, you will get an accident. It is essential not good for you and others. Moreover, radiations emitted from the phone are dead harmful for the eardrum, has proved by many scientist.

Owning a mobile phone in your hand is you can solve many issues and hold most of information around the world. Even though is not good for your health and you have to protect yourself from bad effects of mobile phones if you choose to have one. P/s: Plz help me to correct this essay since next week i'm going to do final exam. How can i reduce this essay because i should write from 150 to 180 words and this essay has about 291 words. Thank you for helping me.Last edited by Jane91; 03-Oct-2009 at 05:11.

2. 03-Oct-2009, 06:44#2

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Re: Advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones. (please correct it)Originally Posted by Jane91

Mobile Phones - a great invention?

Mobile phone is a good technology which is not lacking from our lives. This report will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones. Today, mobile phone has become popular to everybody [This is an over-

generalization: many people do not like them. Use "most people" or something similar] since it is very convenient. The most advantage of having a mobile phone is you can communicate to your family and your friends no matter what where you are. For instance, you can contact easily to your friends by calling or sending messages everywhere without electricity. It is maybe the main reason why almost all [good, but still, is it true?] people today choose to own a mobile phone. From the customers point of view, it is obvious that mobile phones assist you in business a lot, such as, make schedule of working, surf the internet, and keep in touch with their companies. Moreover, you can relax with mobile phones applications, for example, play games, listen to music, or chat with your friends. On the other hand, there are also disadvantages. Using a lot mobile phone can harm your brain, particularly teenager and children who are under 16 years old. If you use mobile phones too much, you will get bad effects like dizzy, bloodbrain barrier [the blood-brain barrier is simply the normal anatomical barrier between the bloodstream and the brain; it's not a condition] , or ears problems. In addition, when you use mobile phones while you are driving, you will get an accident. It is essential not good for you and others. Moreover, radiations emitted from the phone are dead harmful for the eardrum, has proved by many scientist. [You haven't discussed the irritating effect on other people in restaurants, buses etc. from users shouting down their phones]. Owning a mobile phone in your hand is you can solve many issues and hold most of information around the world. Even though is not good for your health and you have to protect yourself from bad effects of mobile phones if you choose to have one. P/s: Plz help me to correct this essay since next week i'm going to do final exam. How can i reduce this essay because i should write from 150 to 180 words and this essay has about 291 words. Thank you for helping me.R.Jane91 likes this.

3. 03-Oct-2009, 07:00#3

Ann1977Senior Membero

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Re: Advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones. (please correct it)Mobile Phones - a great invention? Mobile Phones -- A Flawed Invention? Mobile phone is a good technology which is not lacking from our lives. This report will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones. > Delete > See? We are trimming words already Today, mobile phone has become popular to everybody since it is very convenient. > phoneS have > popular FOR everybody > since THEY are > delete "very" Because of their convenience, mobile phones have become universally popular. The most advantage of having a mobile phone is you can communicate to your family and your friends no matter what where you are. For instance, you can contact easily to your friends by calling or sending messages everywhere without electricity. It is maybe the main reason why almost all people today choose to own a mobile phone. > Reduce the word count by deleting the repetition of the same idea. > You have used all these words to point out that mobile phones are mobile. With them we can call anyone at any time, independent of a landline connection. From the customers point of view, it is obvious that mobile phones

assist you in business a lot, such as, make schedule of working, surf the internet, and keep in touch with their companies. > "assist you in business a lot, such as,. . " should be "assist you in business by . . " > Don't shift from "we" to "you" > "make schedule of working" does not really carry a meaning > Surfing the internet belongs in the next sentence Our cellies keep us in constant communication with our families, our friends, and our businesses. Moreover, you can relax with mobile phones applications, for example, play games, listen to music, or chat with your friends. We also use special apps for listening to music, playing games, surfing the net, and text messaging. It's hard to picture life as it was before the mobile phone. On the other hand, there are also disadvantages. > Don't say both "on the other hand" AND "also" But there are disadvantages to the use of mobile phones. Using a lot mobile phone can harm your brain, particularly teenager and children who are under 16 years old. > using mobile phones a lot can harm your brain > spell out the number 16 as a word Using mobile phones is said to be harmful to the brain, especially for those who are under the age of sixteen. If you use mobile phones too much, you will get bad effects like dizzy, blood-brain barrier, or ears problems. > Blood-brain barrier is not a harmful effect. It is a part of the body. Excessive use of mobile phones has been accused of causing dizziness, (NOTE: Connect this sentence with the one after the next) In addition, when you use mobile phones while you are driving, you will get an accident. > get IN an accident (NOTE: Move this part to after