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From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better.

At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures. So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show due respect for them.

(2012)One possible version: I think the white pencil, looking proud

and delighted, is laughing at the black pencil by saying “You’re nearing the end!” The black pencil, on the other hand, remains calm. The white pencil’s words let him fall into deep thoughts. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing.

It’s true that he’s approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment.

In reality, we should learn from the black pencil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.

Two pencils are on the table, a white one and a black one. The white pencil is long and new, and looks really fresh and vigorous. Of course, he has every reason of taking pride in himself. But for the black, things are quite different: he’s short and small, and compared with the white, the black seems a bit too miserable. It’s clear that he has been used too much.

The white pencil, being obviously superior, should be modest and show his concern to the black. But he doesn’t. Instead, he says “You’re nearing the end!” How wrong he is when he is saying so to a person like that!

Someday in his future, I think, when he himself is nearing the end, he would strongly feel his rudeness is highly regrettable!

If I were the black pencil, I would say to him, “Damn on you!”

写作过程从描图入手，符合认知常识，容易收到流畅，自然的效果。

解释性语言，细节性语言，评论性语言帖在主体描述之后，语言陈述多有层次，符合英语思维逻辑，可读性增强。

开放作文两个物体之间会产生关联或比较，考生会在其中找到自己的定位或产生联想。

Our Dear Residents, In order to enrich the life of the res

idents, our community committee has arranged a special activity for next weekend: we'll go to a farm to pick apples.

The activity will start next Saturday morning and will last three hours. The signing-up in the office will be ending before 5 next Thursday. One more thing, if you have decided to go with us,

NMETNMET 书面表达书面表达Our Dear Residents, In order to enrich the life of the

residents, the committee of our community has arranged a special activity for next weekend.

We plan to go to a farm to pick apples from 8 to 11 next Saturday morning. All the residents in the

community can join. Those interested in the activity have to sign up in the office before 5 next Thursday. In addition, while working there, you’d better wear a hat and gloves to protect your face from being exposed to the strong sunlight and your hands (from being) hurt.

Welcome to take an active part in the activity.

Wish you a wonderful time!

The committee of the community

be sure to take hats and gloves with you, as they are necessary to use while

you are working. We really expect all the residents in

the community will join us and have fun.

The committee of the community

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Rewriting skills(Rewriting skills( 写作有道） 写作有道） 1. 重视 5 wh-questions:

who what when where why 2. Resupply writing skill( 追述技巧） 3. Subjects( 无生命的物作主语 ) 4. 名词修饰名词 5. 借助标点 6. 首尾相顾的写作方式 7. 避免冗言与拖泥带水

You are asked to describe the picture You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.and explain how you understand it.

1. 对处于三维空间中的物体进行描写，使用倒装句切入，其后接用表现特征的较为具体的描写。

一般交待三个物体，其中两个物体之间会产生关联或比较，考生会在其中找到自己的定位或产生联想。

In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree （， which bends in the middle, but seems to be struggling hard upwards ） .

In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle , struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does.

2 ．先外在（指形）， 再内在（指感受）的 half-half 写法。

The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. （ Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does. ）

As we can see in the picture, Xiao Ming , a student, stands at a table staring at a birdcage with a cat in it. He looks puzzled. How can the cat be kept in the birdcage when it should be free to play inside or outside the house? It is certainly feeling uneasy, unhappy and uncomfortable. (Its owner should have thought about its nature --- it loves freedom. )

It is certain for the cat to feel uneasy,unhappy and uncomfortable.

A: The picture attempts to conveyattempts to convey a message that whether children or small animals, they should have their own places suited to their nature. Unnecessary limitation should be removed. Only in this way can they have healthy development both physically and mentally.

B: The picture clearly shows that small animals should be taken proper care of, and given suitable places for their living. And it seems to be the same with a child. Too much limitation will desdroy his healthy development, both physically and mentally.

花销少；省心方便；易结交朋友

自由随意；行程可调整 (adjust) ；需自理食宿 (accommodations)

Nowadays, with the improvement of living standards, more and more people are able to make holiday trips. Their ways of traveling are also different.

Nowadays/In recent years, with the improvement of living conditions, more and more people are able to make holiday trips, and yet their ways of traveling are different.

Some people prefer to join a package tour, which they think costs less than an individual tour. Besides, it’s quite convenient to follow the tour guide to different scenic spots. (Meanwhile, they can easily get to know some new friends. )

What is better still, in a package tour,they can easily make friends with each

other, and this is really fantastic for them.

Some other people, however, just like to travel individually, mainly because it gives them great freedom. They can adjust their plan so that their trip is always full of interesting things. Their only concern is accommodations.

Personally, I prefer the second way. Traveling on my own, I can decide where to stay (a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot. True, I may encounter inconveniences in finding accommodations. But nothing can be compared with freedom, which is important to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly for relaxation. )

and how long I will stay. For a person who travels mainly for relaxation, travelling individually way is always the best.