The Using Of Complex Structures

In English Writing

Wuling Middle School

Jiang jianpei

运用复杂句子结构

提升英语作文档次

Sentence structures and vocabulary

1.Use correct tenses and contain all the related points

2.Make the sentence structures varied and words or phrases special.

3. Organize the writing well

Tenses& points

Well

connected

Discussion:How to get higher marks ?Discussion:How to get higher marks ?

当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“ Film or book, which do you prefer?” 为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：

1. 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂

2. 读原著：细节更多、语言优美

3. 我的看法及理由

注意： 1.词数 100-120 ，文章题目和开头已给出。

2.参考词汇： original work/book in the original （原著）

2006 年浙江高考书面表达

Discuss why the following sentences are good ：

1.Original works have more lively plots,leading to colorful imagination. (-ing 作状语）

2. Compared with seeing films, reading offers more details. （ -ed 结构作状语）

3. To read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.(to do 作主语、宾语； -ed 结构作定语）

4. It is from the original work that they can get more detailed information. （强调句）

5.So interesting is it that everyone feels like enjoying it. （倒装句的使用）

6. They hold the view that the film is usually more interesting. （同位语从句）7. What we can get from seeing a film is a feast for the eyes and ears. ( 主语从句）8. Impressive as a film is,it fades next to a perfect original work. （状语从句 \ 倒装）9. With the lively pictures, the film is more interesting and easy to understand.

（介词短语）10. And what’s more, the author’s ideas can be understood better. （被动语态）

So what complex structures should we keep in mind?

1. 非谓语动词 (-ing,-ed,-to do) 2. 倒装句 3. 名词性从句 4. 定语从句、状语从句 5. 被动语态 6. 强调句 7. 介词短语

1. Susan was ill in hospital. She couldn’t go to the concert. ( 现在分词 )

2. The professor entered the hall. His students followed him. ( 过去分词 )

3. He wants to improve his spoken English. He often talks with the native speakers.( 不定式 )

( 一 ) 、非谓语动词的使用

Being ill in hospital, Susan couldn’t go to the concert.

Followed by his students, the professor entered the hall.

In order to improve his spoken English, he often talks with the native speakers.

★ 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力

4. They haven’t completed the program. They have to stay there for another two weeks ( 现在分词 )(04 上海）

5. We are faced with so much trouble ,we failed to complete the task on time . ( 过去分词 ) （ 06 四川）

6. If you want to find more about university course, call (920)746-3789 .( 不定式 ) （ 05 浙江）

Not having completed the program, they have to stay there for two weeks

Faced with so many trouble, we failed to complete the task on time .

To find out more about university courses, call (920)746-3789.

★ 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力

1. He didn’t realize his danger until he was left alone.

Not until

2.We can save the animals by changing the plants we eat.

Only

3.She is clever but she never works hard.

as

4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street

On the other side of the street

he was left alone did he realize his danger.

by changing the plants we eat can we save…

Clever she is, she never works hard.

二、倒装句的使用

stands the clock tower.

5. I could never imagine these people are living in such poor condition in my wildest dream.( 06 安徽） Never

6 Then I realised how much damage had been caused (06 陕西）Only

7 He may be a quiet student ,he talks a lot about his favourite singers after class (05 重庆） .

as

Never in my wildest dream could I imagine these people are living in such poor condition

then did I realize how much damage had…

Quiet student he may be ,he talks …

1. He didn’t realize his danger until he was left alone.

2. The teacher’s words encouraged her greatly.

三、强调句的使用

It was not until he was left alone that he realised his danger.

It was the teacher’s words that encouraged her greatly.

1. To our surprise, he refused to take the position. 名词性

2.I won’t believe what he says. 状语从句What surprised us was that he refused to take …

No matter what you say, I won’t believe.

四、从句的使用

3.When he climbed up higher, he felt more breathless. 比较）The higher he climbed up , the more breathless he felt.4. We all know that China will host the 2008 Olympic Games. 定语从句As is known to all, China will host the 2008 Olympic Games.

1. The manager had many problems to solve. He looked worried. (with)

2. When he arrived home , he found his house freshly painted.

With many problems to solve, the manager looked worried.

五、介词短语的使用

On his arriving home , he found his house freshly painted.

Now let’s remember the complex structures again.

1. 非谓语动词 (-ing,-ed,-to do) 2. 倒装句 3. 名词性从句 4. 定语从句、状语从句 5. 被动语态 6. 强调句 7. 介词短语

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our school ! ① our school has a short history. ②

it looks like a beautiful garden. The ③two five-storied teaching buildings are

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our school! Our school ①was founded in 1995.It has a short history. ②There are many trees in our school .It looks like a beautiful garden. We ③have two 5- storied teaching buildings. Nearly two hundred teachers work there and over two thousand students study there .

Founded in 1995,

With trees surrounding

our school ,

where nearly

two hundred teachers

work and over two

thousand students study

④ There is an E-reading room. We can go on the internet for information easily. ⑤The teachers are kind and patient, so we respect them. This is ⑥our school. We like it very much .

Thank you.

③ in the E-reading room we have an easy access to the internet for information

⑤What’s more, the teachers are kind and patient we respect them very much.

Such is our school, ⑥

Thank you.

要点齐全，表达正确，但语言平淡，表达方式单一，逻辑性差 ,很难在考试的评分中得到较高档次。但使用恰当的连接词，较高级的词汇、较复杂的语法结构，会变得更精彩。

It isthat

so

that

which we like very much.

Now let’s remember the complex structures again.

1. 非谓语动词 (-ing,-ed,-to do) 2. 倒装句 3. 名词性从句 4. 定语从句、状语从句 5. 被动语态 6. 强调句 7. 介词短语

(05 福建 ) 目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“ My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations” 根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：

主要原因 考试偏多、偏难 不用功、懒惰 取悦父母、老师

个人看法 作弊不对违反校规 要诚实，努力学习 ……其他看法

注意： 1 ．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

2 ．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3 ．词数： 100 左右。 4 ．参考词汇：作弊 cheat （ v. ）

  My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

① 考试偏多、偏难

better: sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.

There are too many examinations.They are too difficult for us.

② 不用功、懒惰 We are lazy and don’t work hard .

2. Now let’s list out the important points and discuss what complex structures we can use

Better: Not only are some of us lazy but they also don’t work hard at their lessons as well. Or: Some of us don’t work hard because they are lazy

③ 取悦父母、老师

④ 作弊不对、违反校规

⑤ 要诚实，努力学习

They want to please their parents and teachers.Better: get better results their parents and teachers, they sometimes cheat when examinations.

We students should be honest and study hardBetter: is to be honest and try to get good results by instead of in examinations.

cheating in examinations is wrong. It breaks the rules of schools. wrong cheat in examinations

in order to to please

taking

It is tobecause it breaks the rules of schools.

What we students should do

studying hardcheating

6. 其它看法我们要改进学习方法

We should improve our study methods.

Better: Our study methods should be improved.

我们要为考试作好充分准备，取得好的成绩 .We should get well prepared for examinations so that we can get better results.

Better: Only when we get well prepared for examinations can we get better results.

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, not only are some of us lazy but they also don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers. In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. What we students should do is to be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, our study methods should be improved and only when we get well prepared for examinations can we get better results.

Now let’s remember the complex structures again.

1. 非谓语动词 (-ing,-ed,-to do) 2. 倒装句 3. 名词性从句 4. 定语从句、状语从句 5. 被动语态 6. 强调句 7. 介词短语

04 福建卷假设你是王晓明，请根据你校美化校园的规划，用英语给你在美国的笔友 Peter 写一封短信，介绍该规划。短信的主要内容如下：

规划目的 美化校园、净化空气

创造良好学习和生活环境

规划内容

种植花草树木建一个植物园，供参观、实践

建一个小花园，供休息、读书

建几座名人雕塑，激励师生

参考词汇：雕塑— statue (n.) 植物园— botanical garden Dear Pter, I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program. Welcome to our school if you have any chance. Yours, Wang Xiaoming

(not only……

but also)

被动、 for sb to do

定语从句

被动 in order to

主语从句

Dear Peter ,I’d like to tell you that our school has worked out a

new program.The purposes of the program are not only to make

our school more beautiful and to make the air cleaner and fresher ,but also to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in .

According to the program ,what we will do is to plant different kinds of trees ,flowers and grass in and around our school .A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in .Besides ,we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest .What’s more ,some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder .Don’t you think it a wonderful program?

Welcome to our school if you have any chance.

May you

succeed

In writing