Feedback from Pitch

• Clear plot• Research is developed• Convention of romance is apparent• Theme of romance is apparent• The idea• Good logline• Contrast of characters is strong• Representation of the protagonist is established well • The voiceover is appealing to the opening title sequence

Strengths of our Pitch:

• How we will film in the public locations• What to include in the two minute sequence• How we will make our film different and not

cliché • How the main female characters personality

will be shown

Questions for our Pitch:

From this feedback, we have realised what we need to improve for our own opening title sequence. To solve the issue of filming in a public location we will have a practice day where we will get a feeling of the busy environment. As well as this, we hope to solve the subject of what to include in our opening title sequence by writing a script and storyboard of our events occurring in the two minutes. Additionally, to make sure the film is not cliché we will remove the typical themes that occur in romantic films and use our originality to create our own themes and events. Finally, the personality of the female character will be hidden in the first two minutes as we do not get to see her real emotions. However, during the film her personality will be revealed.

Link to our opening sequence: