Peer Assessment (Of Draft

Version 4)

“The feel of the introduction was so convincing and as a teenager it made me feel for my own safety,

the way the music went along with the news reports synced so well

with the visuals” – Annalise Russell 9/10

“I enjoyed how the piece had many little details such as when the boy was on the bed and the was a video of a news report playing over it, all the little details made a big difference , allowing the audience to get a good overall feel for the film in the

span of 2 minutes” – Sesi A Gyeabour

8/10

“The overall piece looked just like a polished movie opening and the

shots of the scenery didn’t distract on what was been heard, however I

feel that some shots are on the screen for not a long period as some

cut off almost instantly” Larell C

8/10

“I liked the imagery. Plus the idea behind the piece was very good. The piece itself

looked very realistic but however I would say that

Sodiq’s part could’ve been more clearer” –Sadiyah M

7.5/ 10

“I really enjoyed the news articles playing in the back of the video, it gave me as an audience member, a clear understanding

of the video. The camera angles were extremely effective and some shots that

were used were shot types I haven't seen before.” Demoi Ketri

9/10

“I felt that the piece as a whole is at a good quality with

a very authentic story line , I would say that to improve I would cut the some shots of Sodiq in the bed as the audio

tells us more about the piece.” Zane Miller

8/10

“I don’t think that the piece its self has anything to add onto it as it

has a lot of good aspect that I think personally shouldn’t be erased, however I would say is that is to improve I would work with some on the shots at Sodiqs part and that would make the piece even

better” – Khamal Daw

9/10