1. trembling

2. sweat

3. bathe

4. diverse

5. anxiety

6. appreciation

7. guarantee

8. panic

9. anxious

10. reserve

1. is guaranteed/ under guarantee

2. are anxious to3. in the way4. erupted with anger5. panicked at6. appoint as7. making their way8. vary from person to

person9. has a gift for

painting10. gave birth to

1. candidates

2. diverse

3. equipment

4. guarantee

5. absolutely

6. evaluate

7. eruptions

8. appointed

9. precious

10. potential

期中考试作文复习

Sharpen your mind!

解题步骤1.审题2.分段 (要点涵盖 )

para.1 总体背景 (简要介绍话题 )

para.2 分析话题 (造成问题的原因 )

para.3 文章主体 (如何解决问题 )

para.4 结尾段3. 逻辑 (原因和策略 &观点和论据的对应 )

4. Broaden your view!

5. Useful phrases

Useful Expressions1. do nothing but waste your time(Xue)2. make reasonable arrangements(Gao)3. pick up a beneficial benefit(Gao)

grow a good habit (Wei)4. a firm attitude (Wei)5. set an appropriate learning pattern(Zhu Yihan)6. break away from/get rid of bad habits7. think for oneself8. make full/good use of the computer9. for one thing… for another thing…

Introducing the topic

1. The phenomenon is common among the students, helping students take a load off their minds quickly.(Tan)

2. The maths always gives me a headache. (Jin Yi)3. Not until my mother told me the bad effect of

computer games did I realize I was wrong.(Zhong)4. You are lacking in confidence now.(Dong)

The reason for the problem1.I was always at sea when I did my homework on math. (Zhu

Hanru)2.You are too stressed to work out the problems as usual. (Li Andong)3.Push yourself as hard as you can.(Li Andong)4.There is no doubt that computer games do a lot of harm to us physically as well as mentally.5.Just worrying about the problems makes no sense.(Zhu Jing)6.You can’t tell computer games from the real life. (Yu)7.It is evident that if you start playing games out of curiosity, you will be addicted to them easily. We teenagers are lacking in self-control. There is an increasing number of people who get lost in computer games.(Wu)

Main body (how to solve the problem)

1. There is a great chance for you to quit computer games as long as you are determined. (Tan)

2. You must impress on yourself the importance of the attitude toward math. (Liu Jinjin)

3. Never put off till tomorrow what can be done today. (Ge)4. Put the advice into practice.(Li Jing)5. If your first attempt at math should be a failure, you

should not give up. (Zhu Yihan)6. Appropriate exercise can contribute to your flexible

thoughts.(Shi)7. Interesting as computer games are, you should spend

more time on study. (Liu Jiaping)

Main body (how to solve the problem)

8. Despite the fact that you failed twice, please don’t lose heart. (Xu Ying)

9. If you lose heart, you can’t concentrate on your study, let alone/not to mention get good grades in exams. (Xu)

Ending para.1. Never make your determination just like a flash in the

pan! (Liu)2. It’s never too late to change.(Ge)3. Who laughs last laughs best. (Ge)4. Learning maths needs progressing step by step.

(Xue)5. Under no circumstance can you lose faith in yourself.6. You can make a difference with a firm belief.(Qu)7. Hold on to your plan.(Lu)8. Success won’t await the person who gives in to

difficulties easily.(Xu Ying)

I’m so sorry to hear that your exam results are not good and you are anxious. As your friend, I will be wild with joy to see that you will devote yourself to making every effort to build a bright future, rather than being buried in these meaningless computer games.

Undeniably, enlarging our knowledge, widening our horizon and enriching our life are the advantages of Internet. However, from where you stand, it is obvious that its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.

…It’s high time for you to make up your mind to quit computer

games. Hope my words can be helpful.--- Li Jiawei

漫画作文解析

解题要点• 简要描述漫画，引出要讨论的话题，分析这种现象存在的原因，并提出解决办法。

• 在描述漫画的时候，不要描述过细，只要能揭示本质就行。不要偏题！

organization

Step1. Description

Step2. Analysis

Step3. Solutions

呈现问题

解决问题

分析问题

Step 1 Description（人称 /时态）To what degree should we describe the

cartoon?

a country boycryinglong for educationa city boyenjoy all the benefitsof education

As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture,In the picture, there are… The picture shows a common phenomenon.……

Sentence structures:

Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析 )( facts / reasons/results…)1.It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.

2.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…

3.The picture indicates that we…/Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…

4.This is an ironic (讽刺的 ) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among……

Clues：描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。

Indicate:education inequalityFacts:drop out of schoolsuffer fromlow standards of…comparativelybetter opportunitiesResults:lower enrollment ratesworsen the problem

Example

The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Even those who manage to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities and academic quantities. Comparatively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education. (results) Thus, school in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem of educational inequality.

• As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion, From my point of view,…

• It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon.

• Immediate measures should be taken to…• The government should make laws to…• The media should appeal for …• We should raise people’s awareness of…• Everyone should make great efforts to…

Only in this way can…./Only if…, can we…

Step 3 Solutions (opinions /suggestions)

从大到小从意识到行动

The governmentThe mediaAll the peoplebe aware ofOnly if…social justiceharmonious society

Example

To solve this problem , the government should spend more money on the improvement of education in rural areas. Meanwhile, the media can appeal for the public donations for rural education. Moreover, all people in the community should be aware of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever to help. Only if we do these can we have more social justice and thus make our society more harmonious.

Exercise