中考英语写话评分档次中考英语写话评分档次 AA ：： 16—18 16—18 分分 BB ：： 12—15.512—15.5 分分 CC ： ： 8—11.58—11.5 分分 DD ： ： 4— 7.54— 7.5 分分 EE ： ： 0— 3.50— 3.5 分分

中考英语写话内容分档次中考英语写话内容分档次 0—20—2 分 前结构：不连贯，无秩序，混乱。分 前结构：不连贯，无秩序，混乱。

3—43—4 分 单点结构：单一线索呈现，流水账，平淡。分 单点结构：单一线索呈现，流水账，平淡。

5—65—6 分 多点结构：较强故事线索，叙述手法好，分 多点结构：较强故事线索，叙述手法好， 但内容平淡，缺乏新意和想象。但内容平淡，缺乏新意和想象。

77 分 关联结构：新颖，流畅，概括归纳很好。分 关联结构：新颖，流畅，概括归纳很好。

2011 中考作文： Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’

m a member of _________”.

（以“我是……的一员“ 为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 )

提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或社团一员，或作为家庭、班级、社区等的一员，写出你的经历、感受等。 Use the following points as a reference. ( 以下问题和图片仅供参考 )

Are you glad to be a member of …?

 

 

 

What do you do in it ?

How do you feel as such a member?

 

One of the most precious parts of my junior midd

le school career is being a member of our school c

hoir. After every exhausting day of study, we gath

er around the piano and sing our favourite songs.

Through the window I see pigeons flying free with

the beautiful melody and every moment of harmo

ny is like a gentle breeze touching my heart. I’m s

o grateful to the school choir because it has chang

ed me from a shy girl into a confident singer, and

I can’t wait to embrace the world more tightly wit

h passion and love!

7+8+3

As a Grade Nine student, I’m quite glad to be a m

ember of Animal Lovers. In this special social gro

up, I’m responsible for designing posters to help p

eople around me realize the importance of protecti

ng animals, especially those in danger. Acting as a

member of Animal Lovers, I feel honoured and ex

cited, as I believe I’m doing something meaningful

to the society. Joining Animal Lovers not only incr

eases my awareness of protecting animals, but also

adds a brilliant touch to my daily life.

7+8+3

Life is full of joy and laughter. I’m very glad to b

e a member of my family. My family is like a big

tree which can protect me from heavy rain. In re

turn, I usually help with the housework and play

the piano to make my parents happy. Besides, I a

lways share my happiness with my parents and g

et rid of the shadow of sadness with the help of t

hem. I really feel pleased and proud as such a me

mber. In brief, I was, am, and will be a member

of my family forever.

7+8+3

Personally speaking, my family plays an importa

nt part in my daily life. I’m glad to be a member

of it. When I feel lonely and depressed, my famil

y always comfort me and gives me courage to bui

ld up my confidence. In return, I usually do som

e housework at weekends. Moreover, I study har

d to show my gratitude to my family. As an old s

aying goes, ‘East or west, home is the best.’ I feel

proud and safe as a member of my family. I love

my family forever.

7+8+3

To be a member of my class, I’m really glad. I oft

en help my classmates work out difficult problem

s. When they are in trouble, I talk with them and

help them go out of depression. I work so hard th

at both my teachers and students are pleased wit

h me. I develop my ability by helping others. As s

uch a member, I learn the importance of being se

lfless. How lucky I am to be a member of my clas

s! I also feel delighted and encouraged. Being a m

ember of my class makes my ordinary life extrao

rdinary.

7+8+3

I have been a member of the space club, which I ge

t lots of happiness in. I learn many things not only

about the space but also our own earth. The most a

ttractive thing to me is to see how people will live i

n the future. The fantastic life always interests me.

I really take pride in being the member. When clas

smates are doing math exercises, I am “travelling”

in the solar system and the immense galaxy. Thank

s to it, I widen my knowledge and it really enriches

my life. To sum up, I want to say: I can’t emphasiz

e how much I love it more.

7+7.5+3

I’m so glad to be a member of our school’s singing

group because singing is my hobby. I have a sweet

voice so I sing in it. It is the great happiness that

makes our group just like a big family. We’re all h

ardworking and we even create our own brand ne

w songs. We volunteer to sing for the lonely old pe

ople in our community. After hearing the old song

s like “Yesterday once more”, bright smiles can be

seen on their faces. As you can see, the experience

of being a member of the singing group is both exc

iting and meaningful.

7+7+3

Love is the most precious thing in the world. As a

member of my family, I receive love from my par

ents and care for them in return. I share housewo

rk with them when they feel tired after work. I ch

eer them up when they meet difficulties. We often

hold family meetings at weekends to exchange ou

r ideas. I am glad to be a member of a family like

this. Love in my family enriches my life and make

s me feel warm in my heart.

7+8+2

I’m glad to be a member of a music club. I have

a chance to make friends with different people w

ho love music. I often play the piano in this club.

I feel excited as such a member. I can enjoy myse

lf and feel relaxed when I am playing the piano. I

n addition, it’s great to know that others may fee

l happy when listening to the beautiful melodies.

Music and friends enrich my life. In brief, I’m pr

oud of being a member of a music club.

7+8+2

I’m a member of the science club and I’m glad t

o be a member of it. I am not only in charge of th

e experiments, but also responsible for interviewi

ng our new members. Many people want to join

us because our activities are interesting. From o

ur study, I know how insects communicate with

each other, how plants live in the deep sea witho

ut light. I feel proud as such a member because I

play an important rule, my friends need me, I re

ally love our science club.

7+7.5+2

I’m glad to be a member of my family. My paren

ts love me and they take care of me all the time.

As a member of the family, I always do somethin

g for them in return. I help them do the housewo

rk when they’re tired after work. I also tell some

interesting stories to make them happy. What’s

more, I can look after them when they don’t feel

good. I feel my life is full of happiness, because I

am a member of my family.

7+8+1

I’m a member of my family. I’m glad to be a me

mber of my family. In my family, I can help my

parents do hoursework I live happily in my famil

y. I comunicate with my parents in my family, an

d I depend on myself. I always play and talk wit

h my parents in my family. And we all feel happ

y with each other. So I think that I’m a member

of my family and I feel happy with that.

6+7+1

I am a member of family. I always do some house

work and care for my little brother. In my opinio

n, my family is very kindy and helpful, we love ea

ch other. We always go to have a picnic in weekda

y and we always have a good time. And I love my

family and I think it is very important to me.

5+6+0

I am proud of my singing club. It has 5 people. W

e are friendly, warm-hearted, and when someone

in trouble, we are give her a helping hand. Altho

ugh I was less than any other they are very care

of me. Not only a singing club but also a English

club. We are learn singing and English. I am hap

py with them. In brief, they love me and I love th

ey too.

4+4+0

My friend said:’Why you like animals?” I said:

“Because it is very lovely, because, It’s need love,

so I should give it love. In street, you can see ma

ny cats and dogs. If we like it, we love it. I should

take care of it Because I am a member of Animal

Lovers. I should help it. I think I am a member o

f Animal Lovers. I feel very happy, because anim

als and humans are good friend

3+4+0

I’m a member of school. My school is beautiful ve

ry much. So I and my classmate like we school ver

y much. At morning, we go to the school at 7 o’clo

ck. In the class teacher teach we English, Math, C

hinese, we like Chinese very much. So we don’t li

ke math. I’m a member of school longer and long

er.

3+3+0

I’m a member of Animal Lovers because I like a

nimals. I think animals friendly. Example Dog it

is very friendly. I best like a dog. Its have a big e

yes. Its have short white heard. It is very beautif

ul, I like it. Monkey. Its have long long smart. It i

s very like plays. I think animal lovers my like. I

interesting Animal Lovers.

2+2+0