DISCUSSION: FOR & AGAINST ESSAYSIntroduction continuing debate

* In recent decades/ nowadays

In our rapid changing the world There has been a

In this modern time discussion

over……………..

*There is a view that…………… (hold/ agree/ point out/ claim) that

Many

= most People/ experts/ scientists are of opinion that….

Some support the view that

* However opposites of this (problem) are that …..

(= However others oppose this…. that…………

* Both sides of this complex issue will be discussed in this essay.

examined

analized ]

Body1 (Đưa ra luông quan điêm 1)

* To begin with, there are several ( reasons/ advantages) of…..

* The most ( serious/ important) reason/ advantage is………

* It is a well documented fact that………= It is true to say that…

(=This is ( clearly) illustrated/ shown by the fact that….

(phat triên tiêp theo dung in addition/ Futhur more/ apart from/ what is more)

Body2 (Đưa ra luông quan điem 2 đôi lâp vơi 1)

* On the other hand, there is a wide range of evidences for supporters to

Defend their idea of…

* there is no doubt that …/ It is obvious that…

( Tiêp tuc phat triên đoan dung tư như moreover/ besides/ in addition…)

Conclusion To sum up/ All things consisdered/ all in all/ taking everything into acount ( consisderation). This complicated issue has not only… but also...

Co thê thêm vào phần kêt đoan sau nêu vấn đề đó mang tính xã hội

The government/ the authority should be consult with experts in this area in order to devise an effective programme for ( reducing/ decreasing) the (advantages/ disadvantages ) of this......... The implication of that ... might be better/

NHỮNG LƯU Ý KHI VIẾT ESSAY

Should do shouldn’t do

- Use passive voice. It is argued that It is a common belief that...- Nen dung tu vung đa dang, mức độ cao (advanced voc, verbs, adj...)- su dung linking words/ phrases. Eg: further more/however/nonetheless- Dung complex sentences (although- Dung đảo ngu (were it true, we would.../never has this been more obvious...)- Đông hóa, chung hóa: In most developed coutries...- Thê hiện trình tự/ liên tư-Qui chiêu tư nguôn khac.(Eg: experts have proved that...)

-Dung short form can’t/don’t/isn’t-Tranh đưa ra cac vd ca nhân : in my school...-Dung cum tư, tuc ngữ, thành ngữ đưa ra những thành ngữ/ câu xao rỗng-sử dung tư đơn giản qua/ câu đơn giản. Eg :I think ta dùng to my way of thinking- Tranh lien tư qua đơn giản. Eg: and, but, so thay vao đó dung câu phức hay cấu trúc both.. and/ not only..but also/ those who...-Tranh bày tỏ quan điêm ca nhân hay cảm xúc một cach manh mẽ. Eg: I absolutely detest people who...- ko nên khai quat, chung chung qua. VD: all politicans are...Tranh đưa ra con sô thông kê ko chính xac.