Editing for Chinese-English Colloquial Habits(十個中英文句子結構之異同)

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(1.) Prevent overuse oftraditional textbook phrases


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? One can develop, expand, and

debug the program easily in the

future.

The program can beeasily developed, expanded, and

debugged in the future.


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? It is very difficult to find for sheet

bending operations a suitable

deformation limit.

Finding an adequate(appropriate) deformation limit

for sheet bending operations is

quite difficult.


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( 2 .) Make your intended meaningmore visually accessible

:


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? Because of an extremely short transfer time

and high exposure sensitivity of the camera,

there was almost no interval as takingpictures of moving objects.

Almost no interval betweenphotographing moving objects was

allowed owing to an extremely shorttransfer time and the camera's high

exposure sensitivity.


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( 3. ) Avoid overemphasis ofclauses involving time

:

(a)(b) (c)


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? Currently, there are more than 50

varieties of bulk pharmaceuticals

produced in Taiwan.

More than fifty varietiesof bulk pharmaceuticals are

produced in Taiwan.


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( 4. ) Avoid overemphasis of

clauses involving comparison


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In comparison with the

conventional method, the proposed

method spends less computationaltime.

The proposed methodspends less computational time

than the conventional method.


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( 5. ) Avoid overemphasis of

"domains.

(a)

(b)

(c)


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? In order to determine the acoustic

pressure due to an ultrasonic

transducer, we must solve thegeneral equation.

Determining the acousticpressure requires (necessitates)

solving the general equation.


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? If we wish to carry out

environmental protection measures

that internalize the resulting socialcosts, we must consider using

market mechanisms to lead the

people and industry.


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Implementing(Promulgating) environmentalprotection measures that

internalize the subsequent socialcosts hinges on effectively usingmarket mechanisms to directindividuals (the general public)and industry.


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? In Article 18 of the Waste

Treatment Law, it is stipulated

that. .

Article 18 of the WasteTreatment Law stipulates that. . .


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( 6. ) Use transition to linksentences and promote themanuscript's flow


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Common sentence linkers includethe following:

Under those circumstances,

For such a reason,In such a case,In light of above developments,

As mentioned earlier,If this above condition is satisfied,


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According to those results,Above results suggestthat. . .This finding (event, fact,phenomenon, occurrence)reveals that. . .


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( 7. ) Provide variety in verb

form and selection

(a)

(b)

(c)


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? Our results fit very good with those

of Wu et al.

Our results closelycorrespond to (correlate well

with) those of Wu et al.


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? Recycling has to be practiced more.

Recycling must beadhered to more stringently.


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? Companies see big results in

cutting air pollution.

Companies witnesssignificant progress in

alleviating air pollution.


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( 8.) Avoid excessively long

sentence


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:(a) (b)

(c)


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? Through numerous discussions by

representatives from industry, government,

academic and research organizations, the"Inspection Table for the Standard of Good

Manufacturing Practice on

Pharmaceuticals" suitable to local

condition as well as acceptable tointernational standards was drafted in July

1996.


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Through numerousdiscussions by representatives fromindustry, government, academicand research organizations, the"Inspection Table for the Standardof Good Manufacturing Practice onPharmaceuticals"


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was drafted in July 1995. Thedocument was deemed

appropriate (adequate") for localconditions as well as acceptableto international standards.


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? Since the climate of Orchid Island

is relatively hot and humid

compared to Taiwan, the researchteam from the research Institute

decided to return them to their

native habitat on Orchid Island to

allow the butterflies to besuccessfully born.


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The climate of Orchid

Island is hotter and more humidthan that of Taiwan, accounting forwhy the team from the research

Institute decided to return thebutterflies to their native habitat onOrchid Island for their successful

birth.


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( 9. ) Avoid overuse of

First person

:(a )

(b)


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? We must emphasize the development and

introduction of technologies that are both

environmentally friendly and able to satisfythe needs of humankind.

Developing and introducingtechnologies that are both

environmentally friendly and able tosatisfy the needs of humankind must be

emphasized.


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? From the literature having been

mentioned, we can find that the

factors which influence impactpressure include impact velocity,

weight, bottom area and bottom

edge.


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Above literatureindicates that impact velocity,weight, bottom area and

bottom edge influence impactpressure.


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( 10. ) Separate writing process

from the revision process


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