Turn up

To be found, especially by chance, after being lost（尤指失去后偶然）被发现，被找到

Don’t worry about the letter– I’m sure it’ll turn up.

(of a person)to arrive到达；来到；露面

We arranged to meet at 7:30, but she never turned up.

(of an opportunity)to happen, especially by chance偶然出现；到来

He’s still hoping something(=for example, a job or a piece of luck)will turn up.

Dare

Model verb:Followed by an infinitive without “to”, in negative sentences and questions:

I’m so afraid that I dare not move.Dare she ring him at the office?

Ordinary verb:Followed by an infinitive with or without “to”:

Nobody dared to ask any questions.No wonder the party did not dare publish that document.

The past form dared is for both use.

will 的用法

(1)用于各种人称表示“意志， 意愿，决心。

I will never do that again.

(2). 用于第二人称疑问句表示提出请求，建议

Will you please open the door?

(3) . 表示习惯性的动作或状态“总是”， “惯于”

Fish will die out of water.

Water will boil at 100 degree centigrade.

The door won’t open.

would 的用法

(1) will 的过去式，表过去的“意愿，决心”

I told Tom I would help him

(2) 表示提出请求，比 will 委婉客气。

Would you mind closing the door?

Would you please give me a hand?

(3) 表过去的习惯动作

When I was a child, my mother would read me a story every night .

• 据统计， 2014 年平均雾霾天数达 29.9 天，创52 年来之最。多个城市成为“雾都”，人们“谈霾色变”。 2015 年，“雾霾”依旧是关键词。雾霾之灾究竟何等严重？它对经济与人有何影响？请根据以下要求，写一篇不少于 100 字的作文：

• 1. 描述我国 / 你所在城市雾霾的现状；• 2. 雾霾对生产生活产生的影响；• 3. 就如何防治雾霾天气，谈谈你的看法。• 4. 参考词汇：雾霾 haze ；悬浮颗粒

suspended particles ；可吸入颗粒物 inhalable particles

• 注意：词数 100-120

• Handwriting

• Tense: present , future

• Paragraphs:3

• Proper advanced words and sentences

• The continuous hazy weather

• has great influence/effect on our daily life and the development of economy

作文内容及语言水平都可圈可点，但因为糟糕的卷面而失去 2分非常可惜。

By ZKH

By YM

By Kane

• Para 1

• Nowadays, there is growing concern about the haze weather in ..

• Nowadays we ‘re facing the problem of haze, which is becoming more and more serious.

• Recently ， haze weather has become a daily one right here in large part of China including the city where I am living.

• Recently there has been a fairly common phenomenon that most cities were covered by the haze.

• With the haze spreading to large numbers of cities in China, it becomes the concern of most Chinese.

Haze has an increasing bad influence/effect on our daily life and industry development. For one thing ….. For another …

Long-lasted haze can also block out the sunshine and damage the plants. Limit the sight of drivers and result in the traffic jams and accidents

Cancel outdoor activities

•Para 2

遮挡阳光 造成交通拥堵

取消户外活动

危害人体健康

Do harm to people’s health

•In my point of view, the terrible conditions are badly in need of a change.•As far as I’m concerned , to settle this problem ， a series of measures should be taken as follows.•So it’s urgent to take measures.

As far as I’m concerned, protecting environment especially trees will be significant.

take measurestake actions

Para 3

植树造林

出台法律Laws should be set to prevent factories from polluting the air.

Citizens should change driving private cars into using public transport.

改变出行方式

I believe with joint efforts we will put an end to it.

Ending

• Nowadays, there is growing concern about the haze. The number of the hazy days multiplied rapidly. Plenty of cities are deeply affected by haze.

• Haze is harmful to our life. For one thing, the suspended particles block out the sunlight, which accounts for more and more traffic accidents. For another, the inhalable particles, the presence of which makes it difficult for us to breathe fresh air, do great harm to our health.

• In my opinion, we need to take action to protect the environment, not only for the present, but also for the future. If we are to live a healthy life, we need to live a low-carbon life first of all.

• Haze , which consists of suspended particles , has an increasing bad influence on our daily life and industry development.

• They sky filled with heavy haze entirely prevents drivers and walkers from finding their way correctly , which always lead to heavy traffic or even traffic accidents. Besides , it does harm to out health when we breathe the air containing inhalable particles and suspended particles. What’s worse , haze even causes uncountable loss in economy.

• Therefore , the terrible conditions are badly in need of a change. First , we can decrease the use of cars to reduce the emission. Second, planting more trees will a useful way to solve the environment problem, for trees can refresh the dirty air.

• I do hope that we can lead a comfortable life, where we can breathe freely and enjoy the clean and clear sky.

• Nowadays , with the booming of economy, we have witnesses the rampancy of haze, affecting cities in mounting numbers , causing an immeasurable loss in economy every year. Not only has the beauty of the environment been spoiled but also people’s health has been put under threat.

• Faced with such a problem, it is imperative for us to take drastic( 法律）严厉的 measures. First, restrictions on vehicles driving on the road must be carried out to alleviate 减轻 the haze. Furthermore, factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of poisonous gases . Last but not least, it is necessary to enhance people’s awareness to go out by public transportation.

• I believe we can surmount 战胜 the difficulties and have a better environment.

By Andrew score:18 As we all know, haze is becoming more and more terrible in our country, which suffered from it for about 30days last year. It spread out from the northern part to the southern rapidly in our country last autumn and caused great trouble to our city, Ningbo, as well.Haze is made up of suspended particles, which will increase the level of inhalable particles and do harm to people’s health. When the haze is coming, the sky becomes dark and the air becomes dirty. The traffic slows down and people dare not to go out.So how to prevent the haze from happening? In my opinion, we should try our best to plant more trees and go all out to reduce the emission of pollution. And the choice of going to school on foot or by bike is also a good way.At last, we should spare no effect to build up a sense of environmental protection. For the sake of our future, let’s start changing right now!

By Kargo score:18It never ceases to amaze how horrible the haze impacts our daily life. Suspended particles can be breathed everywhere and inhalable particles do great harm to our health. Moreover, we can’t even see a stone-throw distance when driving. The life and works of the majority of the population are thrown into total confusion. Large quantities of pollution have given rise to the decrease of the acceleration of economy towards prosperity and stability.Undesirable as the situation is, it’s still helpful for us citizens to make it better. In my perspective, under no circumstances should we ignore the way we live. It’s a must far us all to lead an environmental life. It couldn’t be better for us to ride bikes to work instead of taking cars. Only in this way can we look forward to a more harmonious life.

By Nina score:19Haze has a great influence on our daily lives. Suspended particles and inhalable particles do much harm to our health. As a result, the factories are producing machines to refresh the air on account of people’s need of breathing comfortably.In my point of view, factories should reduce pollution emission by developing their technology. As students, we can walk or ride to school instead of taking cars. Consequently, a bright future is awaiting us if we spare no effort to cope with the problem.

By 任雯缨 score ： 18It has been years since I saw people dressed in masks, breathing in the dusty, “milky” air for the first time and I’m always concerned about the air condition in our city. According to the official surveys, there has been a sharp increasing number of hazy days in the past few years!The poisonous suspended particles and inhalable particles in haze have not only increased the risk of lung cancer and heart attack, but also given great harm to the local industry. Numbers of sensitive machines can’t work well due to the dusty environment.The worrying phenomenon gives all of us a sharp longing to change the situation. Therefore, laws should be set to prevent factories from polluting the air, and citizens should change driving private cars into using public transport.Only when everyone plays an active part in stopping the haze from being more serious can we put an end to the phenomenon. I hope it won’t be long before we can shed the masks and breathe freely in the fresh air!

• Last but not least, smog does effect our mind. • so we should ask our parents to drive as less as they can. • To start with, it makes people not able to see clearly, as a result, the

amount of traffic accidents may increase. • and sometimes you can’t see the things clearly in a distance. • Haze is made up by suspended particles and inhalable particles. • We could let the haze become more serious. We should take actions

immediately. • When you take breathe, inhalable particles will get into your body and

make you feel sick. • it will cause healthy problems if a person breath in too much air

which contains haze.

• Ningbo , the city I am in , has been polluted and has lots of days are filled with haze.

• On one hand , on the other hand

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A seriously problem

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The disadvantages of haze

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