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Unit Four : Earthquakes Period Four: Writing. Fun Writing Write an article about a special event that happened in your hometown. 1.What happened? 2.When

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Rubric of Assessing Fun Writing Strong Moderately Strong 12–15 Average 9-11 Moderately Weak 5-8 Weak 1 完成题目规定的任务。 ___/20 2 覆盖所有内容要点。 ___/20 3 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 ___/20 4 语法结构和词汇的错误比较少 ___/20 5. 有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧 凑。 ___/20 Total Points:

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Page 1: Unit Four : Earthquakes Period Four: Writing. Fun Writing Write an article about a special event that happened in your hometown. 1.What happened? 2.When

Unit Four : Earthquakes

Period Four: Writing

Page 2: Unit Four : Earthquakes Period Four: Writing. Fun Writing Write an article about a special event that happened in your hometown. 1.What happened? 2.When

Fun WritingWrite an article about a special event that happened in your hometown.

1.What happened?

2.When did it happen?

3.Where?

4.Who took part?

5.Why?

Page 3: Unit Four : Earthquakes Period Four: Writing. Fun Writing Write an article about a special event that happened in your hometown. 1.What happened? 2.When

Rubric of Assessing Fun Writing

19-20 Strong 16-18 Moderately Strong 12–15 Average 9-11 Moderately Weak 5-8 Weak

1 完成题目规定的任务。 ___/202 覆盖所有内容要点。 ___/203 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 ___/204 语法结构和词汇的错误比较少 ___/205. 有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。

___/20

Total Points:

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Writing Task

You are going to write an article for a newspaper about a special event that happened in your hometown. That means you will write a newspaper story.

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1.Usually a short story begins with small details and includes details later. A newspaper does the opposite. (Both kinds of stories use paragraph with

the main idea.)2.In a good newspaper story it is objective. In a short story it is subjective.

The differences between newspaper stories and short stories

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Before you write a newspaper story, you should write an outline.

An outline will prepare you to write a better story.

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A newspaper outline should have:

1.A headline

2.A list of main ideas

3.A list of important details

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Headline: _______________________________

Paragraph 1 Main idea:_____________________________ Detail 1: ______________________________ Detail 2: ______________________________ Detail 3: ______________________________ ….

Paragraph 2 Main idea:_____________________________ Detail 1: ______________________________ Detail 2: ______________________________ Detail 3: ______________________________ ….

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Ex.(P31) Read the example of a newspaper story and find the headline, main ideas anddetails of each paragraph.

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A newspaper story needs a headline to attract the reader’s attention since the reader may not have bought the newspaper before they read the headline.

Headline is very important.

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Good headlines

武装分子枪杀 29人,脆弱的和平破灭中国拟在 2006年发射探月飞船

1.Militants Kill 29; Weak Peace Shattered

2.China First Moon Probe to Blast Off in 2006

3. Girl of 18 after Threat with Bread Knife

4.NATO , EC to Talk on Terrorism

5.Four US Troops Charged with busing POWs in Iraq

餐刀威逼之下, 18岁少女遭强暴北约与欧盟就反恐进行磋商

美 4士兵被控告在伊拉克虐待战俘POW= prisoner of war 战俘

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Principles Of Good Headlines

ClarityFresh Diction Conversational

Specific & accurateIts tone matches the story

In tune with reader expectations

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Now write a headline for your newspaper story.