Unit Two : Use Active Voice Frequently

常用主動語氣 柯泰德網路線上科技英文論文編修訓練服務

如何用最少的字來表達一個完整的意念通常是科技寫作者一個大挑戰，然而這裡有一個祕訣，那就是使用主動語法。

您會如何修改此文句呢 ? Modification of the heuristics was

made by Lacksonen and Enscore (1993) to solve the dynamic layout problem.

較佳 : Lacksonen and Enscore(1993) modified the heuristics to solve the dynamic layout problem.

您會如何修改此文句呢 ? Minimization of total operating

costs is achieved by a planning horizon.

較佳 : A planning horizon minimizes total operating costs.

您會如何修改此文句呢 ? A description of the layout cost

evaluation method is made by introducing the following notations in this section.

較佳 : This section introduces the following notations to describe the layout cost evaluation method.

您會如何修改此文句呢 ? Precise measurement of neural

networks by practitioners is a heavy emphasis of computer vision systems.

較佳 : Computer vision systems heavily emphasize that practitioners precisely measure computer vision systems.

您會如何修改此文句呢 ? Numerical analysis is performed in this

study on the effects of the inflation rate and the deterioration rate on stock inventory.

較佳 : This study numerically analyzes how inflation and deterioration rates affect stock inventory.

您會如何修改此文句呢 ? The manager can be assisted by

the proposed model so that the order size can be precisely determined.

較佳 : The proposed model can assist the manager in precisely determining the order size.

您會如何修改此文句呢 ? The temperature is increased by

uncontrollable factors, as indicated in the experimental results.

較佳 : Experimental results indicate that uncontrollable factors increase the temperature.

您會如何修改此文句呢 ?

The proposed model can be extended in a future study so that more realistic assumptions can be incorporated.

較佳 : A future study can extend the proposed model to incorporate more realistic assumptions.

您會如何修改此文句呢 ? A more detailed description of the

three design types is provided in Kackar and Phadke (1991).

較佳 : Kackar and Phadke (1991) describes the three design types in more detail.

您會如何修改此文句呢 ? The GRG algorithm may be difficult

for users with limited statistical training to implement.

較佳 : Users with limited statistical training may have difficulty in implementing the GRG algorithm.

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