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English Writing 英语书面表达训练. 写过去的事. 主要特点. 记叙 为主 稍加 议论 旁带 说明. 能力要求. 时间顺序. 空间顺序. 逻辑顺序. 主要问题. 要点 不全. 线索 不清. 原因:步骤不对. 书面表达. 六 步 法. 书面表达六步法. 书面表达六步法. 一、审题. 确定基本要素 :5 W 1 H. 何 时 何 地 何 人 为 何 如 何 做 了 何 事. 书面表达六步法. 二、抓要点. 确定主要行为. What happened?. 书面表达六步法. 三、扩展成句. 形成基本语义单位. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation
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200028 1 2100 3_________________________________________About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua
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At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.
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At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.
He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.
The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.
I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didn't. Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.
Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that, I went over to check out the old man.
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Li Hua
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